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M8 It was an incentive in order to improve but yeah no longer helpful now, It's just that I forgot this existed. View More

pandabanana: I wonder how this is considered good as the author changed that title and also a single mishap on grammar would not warrant a 1 Star so you can zip your mouth and go somewhere else. And yes I’m a fanboy, it’s so hard to find good fanfics these days...

The Original Sin: Despair
10 months ago

PayDay: Don't really understand how you feel betrayed it's not like he specifically wrote this for you. It's necessary to explain some things for new people or people who don't know bleach well (me) but I'll agree with one thing the execution of the info dump was disappointing. The same effort put into the other chapters should have been put into explaining the skills if he wanted to do this. It felt more like reading definitions in a text book rather than a novel. This chapter wasn't well done.

Rebirth in Bleach · C12
10 months ago

cade2065: It is still starting out, so I wouldn’t drop it yet. Though yeah, this felt like a filler chapter.

Rebirth in Bleach · C12
10 months ago

KingTitan: This is a good read

Rebirth in Bleach · C12
10 months ago

Wind_God: Yep Definitely
Also different than the usual riffraff u get to read

Rebirth in Bleach · C12
10 months ago

Athrium: info dump is necessary for those who dont read the wiki, like me, ive seen the entire anime, including the filler, but i don't remember any of this, except shunpo. if you push through the few info dumps(necessary, i remind you) you might end up liking it, patience is a virtue for a reason mate, cause while its annoying, its usually worth it.

Rebirth in Bleach · C12
10 months ago

MoaningFrodo: Just because it's different doesn't mean it's good. The reason why people always use the Robert Downey Jr. Version is because he's far more popular and charismatic as a character while nobody cares about the Tony Stark from Iron Man Armored Adventures. Actually, I never even heard of that series until today lol. Still, I get your reason for choosing the 'less popular' Iron Man. I'm not bashing you by the way, just saying. I'm interested on how you'll take this story anyway.

Spiderman World of Heroes · C6
10 months ago

Kakeru: I don't understand why he didn't try to negotiate, it was a false dilemma so he could have made his own offer...

Spiderman World of Heroes · C8
10 months ago

Dzerx: What!? Only 20M buyout or 1% profit percentage with the condition of working for Stark? Dude.. He just got scammed bigtime. An invention that could revolutionise warfare and hospital care would be worth hundreds of millions if not billions if sold in reality.

Spiderman World of Heroes · C8
10 months ago

ExistError: why not simply use God of reincarnation ?, why use a word that does not belong to the vocabulary of culture that MC live? hell why when the MC thought in the godhood that he belongs the result was that word that is from Buddhism? and to remind you the other religions are real in the marvel Ares and hercules appear in the comics

[DROPPED]Lost Amongst the Stars-A Marvel Fanfic · C38
11 months ago

godfreyngsze: noted. will try my best

Reborn As Harry Osborn - Marvel
11 months ago

Illusory_Reality: Please
Boss
Great godly magnificint author
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PUPLISH ONE MORE CHAPTER TODAY

A Hero's Journey · C29
11 months ago
This brought a tear to my eye. Such pure and utter longing and desperation. You can just picture a puppy frantically begging for just one more treat. Absolutely beautiful! View More

Illusory_Reality: Please
Boss
Great godly magnificint author
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PUPLISH ONE MORE CHAPTER TODAY

A Hero's Journey · C29
11 months ago
I might have exaggerated with the whole almost perfect grammar thing. View More

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A Hero's Journey
11 months ago
He doesn't wan't an easy life. He's a fight addict for Pete's sake. He wants a challenge and he gets it with his choice of powers. I'm not saying it was the most logical choice but humans are rarely purely logical. You do have a point but you didn't account for boredom that comes from cheating in anything. Being op from the get go would be "cheating." View More

Loli_in_Disguise: Which is why it's idiotic, like why wouldn't you wanna be op in the MARVEL WORLD!? Where crime happends on literally a daily basis! And not just any normal crime done by average crooks, but by super powered villian. Who has the power to level skyscrapers and demolish cities.

So yeah, this is why I think it was a very idiotic choice to not take full advantage on what he was offered, cuz if he wanted to live an easygoing life then he should have chosen Dora the explorer world instead of Marvel Universe.

A Hero's Journey · C1
11 months ago
My grammar and punctuation on the other hand needs some work. View More

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A Hero's Journey
11 months ago
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A Hero's Journey
11 months ago

ECCHIEMPEROR_DAO: He's a little too obsessed with spider man

A Hero's Journey · C1
11 months ago
I don't think you actually read the chapter. He literally said that he didn't wan't to be op. Not everyone want's no competition. View More

Loli_in_Disguise: What kind of idiotic mc is this!? Why he no choose tony stark or even thanos!? He couldve been op quicker but no, apparently the mc wants to plot armour the **** out of the marvel universe.

A Hero's Journey · C1
11 months ago

HeartFlame: Pro Tip : Don't try to make the character be too smart, he can only be as smart as you(And I doubt that you are humanity greatest mind, no offense). If you try to make him too smart it will soon lead to a lot of plot holes and nitpicking from readers

A Hero's Journey · C1
11 months ago

Nidian: How about Aeon?

[DROPPED]Lost Amongst the Stars-A Marvel Fanfic · C35
11 months ago

DawnSky: To be frank, this doesn't deserve more then 1-2 stars.

Ill start with the grammar. It is atrocious. I would put it at the standard that I would expect out of a yound child in primary school. There is also no attempts at proofreading or editing, the author very clearly hasn't read what he has written or put in the slightest amount of effort to run this through grammarly.

Now that we have established that this is genuinely painful to read, let's talk about the story and characters or lack thereof. There is no prologue and we are given absolutely zero information about the main character, who he is/was, thoughts, goals, personality.. nothing.

It jumps right in with an old lady yelling and imprisoning an apparent god then, for reasons beyond my comprehension as to how or even why, sends the MC to the Harry Potter world. But that's not all, to further reduce any actual character growth or story development the MC now gets to have 5 *wishes* because you know, really needs even more plotarmour. But wait, that is still not apparently enough as he also gets even more gifts that he will 'discover' when he is there.

Next we get typical super genius baby with the power of wishes, born as a twin brother for Harry because being original is just too damn hard these days!. There is also no need to worry about his new parents as he straight up let's them die in front of him (without even attempting to try), and in typical psychopathic fashion feels zero emotion.

I would talk about the characters next, but there isn't any. The only thing I know about the MC is that he has no emotions. That's it. The other characters and their thoughts/emotions are not given any thought. We also know nothing about the original characters asides from assumptions we can make from th ge original Harry Potter.

Would not reccomend reading.

Alexander Potter[Hiatus]
11 months ago
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Pokemon - Genetic Evolution
1 year ago
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Pokemon - Genetic Evolution · C2
1 year ago

King: Why add a summoning feature that's irrelevant to the storyline, there are already a lot of characters in the dc world and most of them are stronger than the anime characters anyways. And be careful with getting too much unnecessary powers that are going to take up wasted time. Like I saw some people say Haki, yea it would be good and useful but then I saw gildarts crush magic like that's not even useful to the storyline when their are even better powers out there. Again I find the summoning feature highly unnecessary like he summons some anime waifues, I would like to see that too, but it's irreverent to the story that's taking place in a dc world. It's going to be hard to integrate them and make them useful

DC Anime System · C2
1 year ago

OnePun: Rock doesn't sustain heat. It becomes magma or vaporizes. There are some planet with so much heat that the rock vaporizes goes into the atmosphere then cools down and rains. Now that's only temperature of the planet. What about the sun that radiates the heat.

Broly The Saiyan of Legend! · C103
1 year ago

Fatty_Cream: That was kind of a scummy thing to do, i mean criticism can be seen as an attack on your character, but it really shouldn't. Usually, it's with the intent of trying to improve someone else craft as people do not see flaws within their own works as easily as other people do. Perhaps it wasn't what you meant but your response came off as defensive, the friendly response then resorting to not so subtly shutting down his criticism with if he had written before. No his criticism still stands and i think it encapsulated some problems i found even before reading, which was the synopsis. The synopsis needs to be edited, as even though i could understand the gist, it didn't flow at all and i had to put it together with the shambles of broken grammar strewn.

Anyways this concept you came up with is quite neat, but the quality leaves much to be desired. I hope you improve!

Reborn As Harry Osborn - Marvel
1 year ago
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The Fan Fiction Life of Kai (Reboot) · C8
1 year ago
a narrow point of view View More

YoRHa2B: Because she is a little slut and ex harem owner, no one wants such a whore of a woman even as a slave.

The Fan Fiction Life of Kai (Reboot) · C8
1 year ago

void893: evil me screamed for a minute about turning her into the godly mc's toy but then "logical" me asked why he didn't wait till after bang bang to reveal himself?
then main me was like i need more chapters....

The Fan Fiction Life of Kai (Reboot) · C8
1 year ago
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