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Author, this is not how you write a proper adventure arc. You don’t just write a summary of how things play out and decide to tell how things went by having all actions being off screen. That is the most boring way to write. You should have wrote at least a few chapters about them fighting these beasts races and how they fare against high level beings. Even how the girl tame that hyena would still have been a decent story than what you show today. If this is how you write the story, then this whole trip is a huge waste of our time, because all the real action happen off screen. We aren’t actually reading a adventure. But merely a summary of a adventure that is extremely boring by you just time skipping eveything.

ch 1592 Chapter 1585: Ruled by Beasts (8)

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TanyaSilver

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Horrible recent short chapters

ch 1585 Chapter 1578: Ruled by Beasts (1)

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She didn’t need help. She would have won using her own preparations. She actually got robbed and lost a lot of the benefits from the absolute star if she had won

ch 1583 Chapter 1576: Peak

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ch 1583 Chapter 1576: Peak

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Let’s go back to the long chapters ok? Instead of these short ones. Too few things are happening because how short it is

ch 1582 Chapter 1575: Mad & Defiant (3)

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ch 1578 Chapter 1571: A Shrunken Heart; A Steady Heart

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ch 1577 Chapter 1570: Alone

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ch 1575 Chapter 1568: Heart of a Galaxy (8)

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ch 1574 Chapter 1567: Heart of a Galaxy (7)

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ch 1573 Chapter 1566: Heart of a Galaxy (6)

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ch 1570 Chapter 1563: Heart of a Galaxy (3)

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ch 1569 Chapter 1562: Heart of a Galaxy (2)

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ch 1566 Chapter 1559: Galactic Auction; Inspired!

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ch 1564 Chapter 1557: Violet Abyss; Prestige of a World-Saint (7)

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ch 1562 Chapter 1555: Violet Abyss; Seeking Audience (5)

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ch 1561 Chapter 1554: Violet Abyss; Planet Hollow Abyss (4)

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Border guards usually have many contact with other galaxy zones too. Maybe the leader is afraid they will secretly send messages to others about a WSA visit. He made the right move to prevent any information from getting out, while he bring the WSA to the higher ups. In more extreme cases, the guards would even be completely killed to prevent any witness. The famous First come First serve. It would not surprise me the higher ups will use this opportunity to try to send many beautiful females to entertain the alchemist and see if they can recruit him or even see what he has for trade.

ch 1556 Chapter 1549: Entry into the Abyss (2)

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ch 1555 Chapter 1548: Entry into the Abyss (1)

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ch 1546 Chapter 1539: Unkillable?

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TanyaSilver

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Author, you need a editor. The amount of grammar mistakes is horrifying.

ch 1546 Chapter 1539: Unkillable?

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