Stealth95

13d

Commented

There are so many grammar mistakes, besides people in rl don’t talk like that.

ch 0 1 Infinite Money System?

Infinite Money System: Never Ending Fun

Movies · Humo_Sofi

Stealth95

5mth

Commented

Needs work. The way it’s written makes it seem as if the family was safe from the fire and fled the city but at the end it says he is looking for his family’s killers. Who lived and who died? It’s also confusing when the sister went missing.

ch 0 1 Birth Of a new wolf and the tradegy

Rise of the true alpha in Teen Wolf

TV · j_k_l

Stealth95

7mth

Commented

It’s too soon to pick since most of these characters haven’t been introduced into the story yet. Right now jean is in the lead just based on the cosmic connection, although I wouldn’t mind Natasha winning since he might be able to heal her physically and mentally plus they both use martial arts.

ch 16 Update

Stealth95

8mth

Commented

Ryuu is overrated in my opinion. Tiona would be better plus they both like combat.

The FL will either be Tiona or Ryuu, I haven't decided yet. Fortuna was always meant to fulfill the role of a friend/family member. Riveria would be an interesting choice, but I admittedly don't like the age gap despite the fact that the MC's lifespan is multiple thousands of years.

Reborn in Danmachi with a Tensura System

Anime & Comics · SaltyGamer

Stealth95

8mth

Commented

Tsubaki 100%

There will definitely be no Harem since it is literally my least favorite trope of all time, but I am conflicted about who to make the FL since there are quite a few good options

Reborn in Danmachi with a Tensura System

Anime & Comics · SaltyGamer

Stealth95

9mth

Commented

Haxorus

[Do tell me which dragon type you would want in his team]

The Legendary Trainer

Anime & Comics · BoredMortal

Stealth95

1yr

Commented

+1

No OC.

Reborn In Chicago Fire

TV · HiTherefic

Stealth95

1yr

Commented

+1

1. Leslie Shay Chicago fire.(yes she is gay in the show but with a little Author magic I can make her bi, plus we can save her season 3.)

Reborn In Chicago Fire

TV · HiTherefic

Stealth95

1yr

Commented

+1

2: Gyarados

Pokemon: Tales of Duskborn (Posted on another account)

Anime & Comics · Lord_Of_Creation

Stealth95

1yr

Commented

+1

1

Werelion In Twilight

Movies · TheOnlyAlpha

Stealth95

2yr

Commented

Great Pokémon just weird how it’s egg moves are garbage if you take their parentage into account

ch 16 PSM-15

Pokemon: Story of a Master

Anime & Comics · devil_trainer

Stealth95

2yr

Commented

The suspense is killing me. I hope it is a pseudo legendary since you can easily get fire, water, and grass in the wild.

ch 15 PSM-14

Pokemon: Story of a Master

Anime & Comics · devil_trainer

Stealth95

2yr

Commented

Great story. I just wish it is updated more regularly

ch 0 6 Chapter 6

Reincarnated In Power Rangers

Movies · Just_for_fun1997

Stealth95

2yr

Commented

I really enjoy reading this story. I love how the eternals interact with each other and how you incorporate history into it. It must’ve taken a lot of time to research the time period but it pays off and makes the story interesting. I would say you should either time skip close to modern day to make it easier for you or add opponents on a similar level to the Mc cause there isn’t much of a challenge.

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Marvel: Breezing Through History as an Eternal

Movies · mark_kiple

Stealth95

2yr

Commented

There’s no transitions between these past 3 chapters.

ch 20 (A bit of a flirtation.)

Marvel: l am God.

Anime & Comics · Odette_Annabelle31

Stealth95

2yr

Commented

You either skipped a chapter or this doesn’t make much sense

ch 19 (The tail of the One Above All.)

Marvel: l am God.

Anime & Comics · Odette_Annabelle31

Stealth95

2yr

Commented

Awesome chapter. It hits you right in your feelings.

ch 0 1 Prologue: The Great Pyramid

The Campione of Marvel!

Movies · GabrielRott

Stealth95

2yr

Commented

Keep it the same. I like the story as is and there isn’t a need to change how he got his powers.

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Pokemon: Blood Bonds

Anime & Comics · Alan_demonic

Stealth95

2yr

Commented

It’s weird how you start off in 1st person POV and then immediately go into 3rd person pov. It’s ok to change POV as long as it’s a different paragraph. So In this case the first sentence should change to 3rd person. Ex Alexander Mathews was reincarnated by accident into this brand new world.

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Reincarnated In Power Rangers

Movies · Just_for_fun1997

Stealth95

2yr

Commented

Happy New Year. Loving the story so far keep up the great work.

ch 0 3 The Heist, Problems And Earning Some Cash

MCU: The Greatest Spider

Movies · Peter_B_Parker

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