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Thanks for the chapter, and it's good to see you well. ps. Sorry for the bad english

I am realy liking this story and its concepts, my only fear is that other people had being isekaied to the same time-line as the MC

In the servant aspect i think sticking with the original should be ideal, him summoning Fran would open interesting interactions and, just trowing ideas here man, potential romance trying to use the grail to heal his sister and "fix" Fran mental state as well incarnate her. ps sorry for the bad english

please no Yuri, every interesting story with a female mc ends up as a yuri

Why a system out of the blue? The progression bar and the word quest really take the suspense out of the situation and appear far too modern for someone like Merlin......

Gostei muito da sua estoria até agora mas cara da uma segurada no hate com o Constantine kkkkk ele não é tão ruim assim e ficou meio repetitivo com todo mundo tratando ele que nem lixo.

I think you should give him a normal shikai, nothing too powerful or overpowered, as you already have told that his bankai will be op so it will be a nice balance and will give the MC challenges in battle and a reason to train harder. Now on the kidou aspect, you should be careful and try just use the cannon ones for now and later in the story the Mc can make some kidous, and will be more believable ( just nothing too absurdly powerful please), hope that I had been of some help. Ps: Waiting for the next chapter

No problem man I'm just worried that it would become more difficult for you to write, generally, I have no problem with you putting Esdeath in your story and hopes it works. ps: I'm really liking your story

Why put in Esdeath? It just complicates things for you as you write..... oh well thanks for the chapter.

And here it comes the unnecessary drama that I hate......, this type of thing just artificially creates conflicts in the story. Author, I really like your story and the world you constructed ( even if it is a fanfic), but I think that you posting a chapter every day is making it difficult to imagine where to go with the story, I can't talk for everyone but I would gladly wait and have something like a chapter a week

Is Fleur not too old for him ? and why does he blame Filius, he does not know what would hapend and he had a bad fealing at best

Sorry, I forgot.... who is Abrahan?

Will he finally meet his beautiful hagraven wife? ps: really hoping that the Dragonborn is not a skilled but a being native of Tamriel and Nirn

While I'm liking your story this chapter was kind of strange to me, I just don't understand the logic, if the chapter before this one has shown us that he can interact and navigate in this political mess of a school then why is he isolating himself in his own house? the advantages does not compensate for the disadvantages, the little time he could have lost in helping his classmates could have been compensated at another time, logically speaking this way he would create a base to where he could stand in the coming raining days, not to mention that teaching a subject is a nice way to learn more about it as well