Webnovel Author: Anon20K - Fanfic&Novel Collection

I must have made a mistake, it happens.

So far no one, he is just a kid and I think it is preferable to strengthen the plot, which as many mention is quite weak.

why doesn't your review appear in the story... I don't quite understand your anger, but I'm glad you delivered your point of view. Thank you my friend. 👍👍

yes, it has some mistakes but it's not my style to make characters that can defeat everyone from the beginning, I like naive characters in the beginning, that mature and change over time. Of course your review is appreciated because I can see OTHER people's comments, thanks for the summary of comments.

I totally agree, unfortunately William is not me.

thanks, I really try to do my best to keep the story moving at a good pace.

Yes, I have some mistakes, I will pay more attention in the future.

nah

I am working for that

I am working for that

Gracias Men, estas críticas son las necesarias para crecer como autor y reconocer los fallos. Es como dices el comienzo tiene muchos fallos y aunque lo esté intentando arreglar ahora no es suficiente.