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Don't repeat 'morning' twice. I suggest maybe write it like this... "Nine o'clock on a Friday morning when the sun beamed beautifully, casting a golden glow upon the earth." Nah, that's just too dramatic. anything will do as long as you just remove one of the two mornings.
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