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Heidi_ramram
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2yr
Commented I hate when people do fan fics that dont make Sense. Nen is Part of the hunter X hunter universe no one Should be able to Use it in AnOther UniverSe. the mc can Use it because he got it from a wiSh. unless god said hes making Nen apart of thE vampire diaries then that would make sense Why other people can use it
"Very well, be careful who you teach Nen, you can be stabbed in the back "
Alex Salvatore(Teen wolf / The vampres diaries)
TV · Alexmorgan
2yr
Commented If your going to do a dc and marvel fusion then you Better have an Idea of how iTs going to work and a clear plot because both universes literally have too Much information and too many characters with their own stories. I dont want to see this get dropped Because you dont Know where to take it because you bit off more than you can chew
ch 21 Time Skip
Marvel Super God
Anime & Comics · GhostyZ
2yr
Commented Im not gonna lie i feel like you ended up Kicking yourself because you gave The mc the arc of embodiment Which basically makes him like a god so theres no reason for certain scenarios To play out. Like him needing time to teleport When he can just create perfect teleportation or GIve himself infinite energy. not to mention with all the powers he has and can have he Can just body everyone. So the father getting taken away doesnt make sense and him escaping or encountering certain situations doesnt make sense. I feel like your following the ploT of the novel because if you change it too much you dont Know where to take it. I think you should rewrite the Story And Change the Powers given to the mc so it actually makes sense for things to happen. like if the mc only Had the power to copy other mutants powers but he still had to master the Them himself then it would make sense whY he woould have trouble teleporting or why he would have to eScape Since hes op but Not too Much yet
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Reincarnated in Gifted
TV · Anonymous2000
2yr
Commented I kinda like it i hate Goodie two shoes mc so im glad hes gonna be colder plus most Fan fics that change the plot of the Story drastically usually dont Know where to take it afterwards and end Up dropping the Novel so dont Completely change the plot if you dont know where to take it and the uchiha clan surviving is a big plot change
ch 0 6 The Massacre
Reborn as Sasuke with Talent
Anime & Comics · Suggestive
3yr
Commented I Hope he gets more Superpowers how else will he stand a chance in the dc universe
ch 39 [AT] A Brand New Me!
Swallowing The Spider
Anime & Comics · DragonField
3yr
Commented Bro its your Book and your art you shouldnt have to write warnings or messages if they like the book great if they dont then leave. continue doing you. i like Everything so far. The gay part through me off but i didnt think anything of it because it didnt impact the story i just moved on and continued reading
ch 12 Making Connections.
The Legend of Baldur [DROPPED]
Movies · HelloDarkness07
3yr
Commented What would he need a weapon for he’s already op and a weapon just makes it redundant
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I Reincarnated In Twilight
Fantasy · Roh594
Heidi_ramram
ch 54 A Subtle Shift Final Part
Aden Strong: Avatar In DC
TV · Saintbarbido