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story development-character design- world background. the author added nothing of his own to this story other than having the MC be control by the author like in the game where we play has the MC. and just follow the story, which explains the stability of updates. we all know these character, nothing is the authors. if the author made his own character than yea sure. but do something interesting. Because even now GI is still an developing story. you have the whole world of GI to write about and use but instead just copy and paste the story. that's something the author can do in the future. but now the author created nothing even if this's an fan-fic. which puts it in the low-ter of fan-fic

translated with google translation name of the novel is 漫威：从忍界开始交易 Marvel: trade, starting with Naruto the trading is just a way to take things from different world. and get stuff. first world is naruto than one piece.

the world background is very nice, great overall storyline, MC is hard working good talent, but the writing quality is very bad for some sentence. like the translator don't know how to or what it should be translated to.

the story is common in a lot of Chinese novel, go back in time-> use knowledge to make big money and an head start+ op grow gear (maybe). an big bad event is gonna happened and need to get ready for that and that's about it. this is a fine story but an big problem that some story have and a lot of people don't like this. and that is by making other people(side character) weak to make the main character strong, For Example: MC spent hours trying to mastery the spear, but somehow he still got first boss kill and first dungeon, even in todays gaming world, people that rush or try rushing past the mobs/group of people at the start of an new game is very common, and they are hardcore players. so the facts that MC still get first kill bonus. is pushing the plot a bit too much. like the first boss kill can happened in like the first 10 hours of the game. base on how long MC took to level.

i wanted to give this an 2nd try but i just can't get past the 2nd ch, an OP skill right at the start of the game... i mean when i first see the title of this novel i though he's going to *build* a character that's tankey with lifesteal or some kind of sustain to keep the character alive but nooo. just give the MC an OP skill at start of the game and f it to everything else. an point that alot of author make a mistake is that this is an *video game*. And theirs something call balanced. you don't make some very questionable *Easter egg* type thing in the game and just give out OP thing for basically free. this is a big turn off for a lot of people(me included)