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FloSGP

FloSGP

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2018-10-28 Joined Singapore

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Correction: take “responsibility”

Thus, other people who wanted Skyfire Planet to take responsibly was silent. Fang Family was even more direct and stated, "If you're afraid of getting beaten up, then don't accept the challenge!"

Astral Flower

Astral Flower

Sci-fi · Sorahana

FloSGP
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Correction: “safe” refers to having safety. “save” is used for the act of saving someone.

Ever since she was young, she was taught that the medicine was used to safe people. Even though Luo Qing Wei didn't have much thought when she was young, but she slowly learned many things.

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

History · Sorahana

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What “urination”???? I don’t think LQX is so crass right???

Old Master Long thought about his grandson's urination and shook his head. If this grandson of his could become much better, he would not worry so much when he was dealing with this brat.

Astral Flower

Astral Flower

Sci-fi · Sorahana

FloSGP
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Correction : he is a martial “artiste” or martial arts “practitioner” but he is not martial arts itself

He was already in his fifties and had already felt the decline in his body. As a martial arts and also a bit of medical practitioner, he was naturally aware that his body was no longer as good as he used to be. 

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

History · Sorahana

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Correction: affection to “her” s she is female and not “him” which is male

Yan Xi also asked a few questions about Nan Hua's situation and Nan Hua answered each and every single one of them patiently. It was clear that she was willing to accept Yan Xi's affection to him. 

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

History · Sorahana

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Correction: it’s “impending” war and not “impeding”.

Nan Hua didn't want to make trouble and made their journey much longer than necessary. The impeding war will start soon and Long Qian Xing and General Jun had to be in the position where they were needed. 

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

History · Sorahana

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FloSGP
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Correction: Acquaintances

But when he heard Long Qian Xing calling his daughter politely, he was also displeased. It was as if what he treasured was not valued by others and instead treated as nothing more than ac quittances.

Astral Flower

Astral Flower

Sci-fi · Sorahana

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FloSGP
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Correction: it’s “familial” and not “familiar” relationships

At the same time, he learned how to influence his other cousins to do what he wanted them to do. It might sound despicable, but he knew that it was simply used or being used. There was not much familiar relationship between him and his other cousins, who only wanted to use him as a stepping stone.

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

History · Sorahana

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Correction: had “dresses”
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The Masked prince

The Masked prince

History · Ada_5253

FloSGP
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It would be better to use the word “seen” and “see” instead of “watched” and “Watch” about the city viewing

Li Rui came out of her trance and nodded her head vigorously like a child. It might be strange but after so many years of her life, she had not even watched the whole Imperial City completely. 

His Rui

His Rui

History · Ada_5253

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A better word to use is “royal” and not “regal” in this context.

They reached the greeting hall soon and found regal members and Court ministers were already present there. Sheng Li first greeted the Emperor and Empress followed by the three consorts and a concubine. Ying Lili did the same and two were told to take their respective seats.

Married To The Cruel Crown Prince

Married To The Cruel Crown Prince

History · Light_ray

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It seems like she was threatening him. Why does he say appalling?

Seeing the tiny smile on the crown prince's lips, Xue Yu-Yan felt strange. "Xue, you are appalling me?" Sheng Li raised his brow with inquisitiveness.

Married To The Cruel Crown Prince

Married To The Cruel Crown Prince

History · Light_ray

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Commented
I don’t think the word “inn” used is the right one for their residences. Should it be “palace”?

As he was going to the Inn, he encountered the fourth Prince, Han Nianzu who bowed his head slightly and asked him from where he was coming. "I was in the dungeon, brother Zu," replied Sheng Li.

Married To The Cruel Crown Prince

Married To The Cruel Crown Prince

History · Light_ray

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Correction: getting “ready” - the “y” is missing

The next morning, when Zhao Zhuang Chen was getting read, his Eunuch told him that Yun Weilan wanted to see him. 

His Rui

His Rui

History · Ada_5253

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Correction: when the “latter” and not “letter”

He could explain General Li's presence saying that the letter was here to meet his daughter but he couldn't explain Yi Junjie's presence in his manor. 

His Rui

His Rui

History · Ada_5253

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Correction: than he “expected” not “accepted”

The old master's reaction was different from what his disciple had accepted. He hmphed more coldly and said in a sharp voice.

His Rui

His Rui

History · Ada_5253

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Correction: even if he “went” in
FloSGP
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Should it be “big” and not “bog”?

After knowing what kind of bog reach Xi Ying has in investigating the matters, he was afraid that Xi Ying would find out something that he shouldn't. 

His Rui

His Rui

History · Ada_5253

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