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The whole safe layer thing makes me suspect that the layers becoming unstable after a while is unnatural. View More
Reborn: Apocalypse - Volume 3 · C0
4 months ago
The fun plops into your mind with this story, but the conflict kinda plops into the ground as well. I'm a novice in any kind of writing, and I like the story a lot, but the general action scene isn't engaging. One of the good ones was when we first met Isaac Bird. Not just comedy, but the terror and desperation resulting from having to use absolutely everything you have and it still might not be enough is what draws me. There are a bunch of kinds of conflict: person v. nature, person v. fate, person v. society, etc. The extreme circumstances is nature, fate is a everything I'm doing isn't working out (like how Chinese movies have the protagonist die at the end), and society is like fighting racial discrimination. View More
Chrysalis · C344
5 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire View More
True Space Mage · C1
8 months ago
One of the focuses of the story is how tireless ants are, but most organisms don't actually work more than humans. I'm pretty sure ants work only 20% of the time whereas many humans work from 9 to 5 (33% or 1/3). View More
Chrysalis · C274
8 months ago
That would make sense, but Crinis is the one that follows to the letter. Vibrant is shown to be much more independent (forming her own squad as evidence) and I don't recall any scenes where Vibrant is especially enthralled (Although she did hang around and on top of him a bunch, but I assumed that was because he was the only ant besides THE GREAT THWACKY MAMA that had pheromone language) View More

Aquadiver289: Vibrant is different from the other ants in that she was completely enamored with her senior (Anthony) from the time she was a grub. She worships him and follows his advice to the letter. She can also be considered a variant of the normal everyday ant and so her thought process would be unique in this monster world. The 20 hatchlings are not variants, but the new standard of the colony which shows in the fact that their desire to die for the colony nearly overrides all other thoughts despite being more intelligent than other ants.

Chrysalis · C272
8 months ago
Suicidal ants is a unique and fun way to add to the story, but what about Vibrant? She could talk and had better intelligence; it's wierd how different she is from them. Unless she isn't really an ant... View More
Chrysalis · C272
8 months ago

RandomLazyGuy: extra ability slot

Reborn: Apocalypse - Volume 3 · C23
8 months ago
Ability: Tree type. Description: enough with these quadro/bipedal organisms, bring on the ultimate agender disguise! Cost: it's a type, so it can't be deactivated. View More
Reborn: Apocalypse - Volume 3 · C23
8 months ago
The actual ability to read the future. View More
Reborn: Apocalypse - Volume 3 · C23
8 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
The Mech Touch · C1
10 months ago
I'm not an expert at writing or anything, but what I think is a big weakness to the story is how characters don't receive motives. At the start of the story, we hear about how Ves's dad disappeared and his struggle to start up a company. In this case, there is a motive; Ves wanted to survive and thrive. Although that is important, to survive and thrive applies to all but the most crazy. If Ves had a younger sibling or something that required him to pay for extra living expenses, then readers would feel suspense and a connection to the protagonist. One of the things that make Raella frustrating is how she seems to disregard survival so totally that she CAN'T thrive. It is described that she wants fame, but survival is something that naturally comes before fame. What use is fame if you die, let alone before you're famous? It is unnatural for a person to want fame so much without a MOTIVE. If you add a traumatizing event to trigger her desperation, like her parents only cared for her sibling, thus creating a need for attention, or that one teammate of hers (that betrayed their mech sports team) was able to do so only because she wasn't famous enough, then Raella would become more lifelike. Seperate scenes to describe in detail the motives of characters would drastically improve the story. Of course, that's just my opinion. If someone else has a better idea, I'd definitely like to hear it. View More
The Mech Touch · C319
11 months ago

Lykonis: I just want the skill description for "Fancy Feet"

Chrysalis · C206
11 months ago

heartburst: RISE MY MINIONS !!! THE WORLD WILL BEND UNDER YOUR IRONS FISTS, AND THE EARTH WILL BE PAINTED PINK!

Chrysalis · C206
11 months ago
Currently Vibrant seems rather plain. Compared to a cuddly murder ball, a fuzzy murder ape, and a sparkly murder lady/man with a shiny behind, Vibrant just doesn't seem so vibrant. We haven't seen much character growth. In the beginning, Vibrant was fun because she stole cores and rode Anthony like a horse, maybe she can class into something that really likes cores again? I can imagine Vibrant as a cheerful monster tamer with a horde of sparkly and pink destructive monsters. View More
Chrysalis · C206
11 months ago
I'm hoping whatever the legion is fighting is truly terrifying. Like your mo- "cough cough", like magical parasites that control their hosts, read their minds, and talk to their families to infect more. Or maybe giant not so acidic slimes that are invisible and drown your friends in a transparent liquid so you can watch them die slowly, but not know what's happening. Something scary like that to traumatize the side characters enough for ANThony to gain a new pet "wink, wink". View More
Chrysalis · C205
11 months ago
Are you sure? My dog is pretty sad whenever I eat in front of it. View More

MichelAyres: humans have regret. They are the only know souls that have it. This is why they are the only ones that become spirits. the rest just pass to the otherworld

My House of Horrors · C235
1 year ago
Why can cats see spirits? Why do only humans become spirits? What is different about humans? Do humans become ghosts because they're intelligent? Do cats see ghosts because they're extra-dimensional overlords? View More
My House of Horrors · C235
1 year ago
Are you misunderstood by doctors? Tired of the unfeeling "treatment specialists"? Well, wait no more. Here at the Third Sick Hall, all of our staff were once patients themselves. They'll do their utmost to ensure you're understood and properly cared for. So come to the Third Sick Hall, where those who truly understand your pain help. View More
My House of Horrors · C165
1 year ago
Chen Ge said that it's possible for someone to possess the item closest to them when they die... What if it's a poonicorn? View More
My House of Horrors · C209
1 year ago
I'm reading these comments wondering why everyone's so scared. My mom is scarier than this. (Mother walks in with frying pan) "PAN PAN PAN!!!" View More
My House of Horrors · C159
1 year ago
Reading Status: C143
Love the story. A fantastic idea executed perfectly. I personally don't find it that scary, but I can see why others would. I also like how in the discovery page, under ladies picks, next to a bunch of romance fiction, My House of Horrors shows up out of nowhere. View More
My House of Horrors
1 year ago
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