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Was fine until the premium chapters started, first big conflict of the novel, could've been solved in 10-20 different ways (vampire saves him, he gets new powers with his system, etc...), instead when he's about to die his system enters what I like to call a "MCs are immortal as long as plot armour exists mode" and gives him a temporary powerup to kill the enemies and win the fight, in my opinion that's a solution for a lazy writter, one who doesn't bother to think about the direction of his novel and only wants to write a basic novel to get some money. (not saying it's the case, but that's usually the case for most harem writters) Anyway, I didn't like the way he solved the conflict, therefore i'm dropping the novel :P

The supporting character's harem is very normal

Fantasy · HikaruKiki

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If we think about this, Alec said that if it weren't for Lathel being there he wouldn't be able to attack that globin cave, so technically nothing in there is his loot/opportunity, but sure..

"AA!! Okay, I have no intention of stealing that, okay?" Lathel shouted angrily. He felt that the system was too sensitive.

The supporting character's harem is very normal

Fantasy · HikaruKiki

A few minutes into their journey, a distant roar echoed through the air, accompanied by the sounds of fierce battling. Taro looked at Yves, a curious expression in his eyes. Yves simply bopped his head and said. "Let's check that out first."

Era of Pet Monsters: I Can See Their Evolution Routes!

Fantasy · kaeeeee

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So, he posted an item for auction and increased the price by bidding in his own item... Sure.

ch 26 Scamming Jason

VRMMORPG: Rebirth of the Strongest Necromancer

Games · AstridStorm

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The edgelord mentality is fun for awhile, but after 30 ch it starts to get boring :/

ch 32 Crafting Defenses

Dead Man Walking: Living By Day, Dead By Night

Urban · Zentmeister

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Reminds me a lot of High School of the Dead, but then again it might just be because it involves zombies and a high scool…

ch 0 1 The Beginning of the End

Dead Man Walking: Living By Day, Dead By Night

Urban · Zentmeister

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I mean, dude just ordered every1 to fall back so his 7 tier 0 golems can hold an entire army of zombies back :/.

ch 11 Time To Act

The Golem Mage

War · mystic dark

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CHARGE! procceds to defend a wall :P

ch 10 Titan's strength

The Golem Mage

War · mystic dark

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Dude had a 14 day headstart and used it doing the same things he was ised to doing in his old world, talk about being stupid, am I right?

Looking back at it, I couldn't help but wonder, how was Lucas so stupid enough to challenge someone who was leagues above him in the novel?

I Will Kill The Author

Fantasy · Night_Crawler619

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I kept wondering about his sense of smell, this chapter failed to say anything about it.

ch 36 Dinner Plans & Failure

Blessed by Night

Fantasy · AnathaShesha

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Can’t face slap the ex girlfriend if you stop going to college completely, am I right?

ch 0 8 Invitation

Blessed by Night

Fantasy · AnathaShesha

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Shadow walk?

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Necromancer Of The Shadows

Fantasy · Zero_writer

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You could just say Arora instead of Arora World

In the Arora world, most cities were protected by barriers that prevented monsters from approaching. However, once someone left the city, they lost the protection of these barriers and had to rely on their own strength to defend against monsters.

Necromancer Of The Shadows

Fantasy · Zero_writer

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If he increases the level of Spirit Summoning will it be easier to make contracts or just increase the duration? Either way it would be a good skill to focus on

Spirit Summoning: Summon spirit bound to your soul. Duration: 5 minutes. Mana cost: 100 (Exp share 0/100)

New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live

Games · Galanar

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Can he stack skills? Like use enchance weapon in the bow, piercing shot and burning (in the arrow), that would be 3 skills in one attack, should create some kind of burning piercing shot :P

Enhance Weapon Lvl 5 (Max)(Mastery Lvl 0/5): Gather mana into your weapon, to enhance it magically. Weapon damage +10% - 100%. Mana cost: 5 - 50 (Scales depending on how much mana is poured into the weapon)

New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live

Games · Galanar

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For some1 who loves a challenge he gave up qite quickly…

ch 0 6 Dead End?

New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live

Games · Galanar

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I see, thanks for explaining :)

'I would like to keep being carried by these guys until I hit Level 30, but I can wait for tomorrow.'

Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

Games · Follower_of_Abadom

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Thanks for the chapters and the 1st volume, don't know why we ended here tho, a lot of the first volume problems are still left to solve, could have continued going in my opinion, but tyvm.

ch 65 Throughout the Ages (End of Volume 1)

Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

Games · Follower_of_Abadom

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Didn't he already hit level 30?? I thought it was +1 to all stats per level and he got like +12... Not to mention the 6000% exp (btw how does this work?? I thought It was 100% = 1 level, but apparently I was wrong...)

'I would like to keep being carried by these guys until I hit Level 30, but I can wait for tomorrow.'

Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

Games · Follower_of_Abadom

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Isn’t the big thing about pods that ppl can sleep and play at the same time?

'There is also the question of the time... To some countries, it was in the dead of the night, so many top clans should still be sleeping, albeit some are definitely awaken by now.'

Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

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