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moaz11: Love this novel.
Anyway I just reached the final chapter so I’m gonna comment everything I think about the story in this comment.

1.I really like that it is not harem.

2.The setting is really unique as a naruto fanfic and gives the author better control

3.I like that the story doesn’t have an op mc but one who has potential to be op

4.For a combat focused story there aren’t enough fights and I was really frustrated when the academy competition got canceled

5.The author mentions a lot of stuff once and returns to it after 3-5 chapters(i.e:talking to shukaaku and improving relationships with temari and kankuro).I know he wants to foreshadow but for me it makes the story confusing as if he forgot what he said last chapter

I know that I’m being critical, but it is because this novel has an extremely high potential and a good writing style, it is still my favorite fanfic in this site.

Gaara · C27
2 months ago
Love this novel.
Anyway I just reached the final chapter so I’m gonna comment everything I think about the story in this comment.

1.I really like that it is not harem.

2.The setting is really unique as a naruto fanfic and gives the author better control

3.I like that the story doesn’t have an op mc but one who has potential to be op

4.For a combat focused story there aren’t enough fights and I was really frustrated when the academy competition got canceled

5.The author mentions a lot of stuff once and returns to it after 3-5 chapters(i.e:talking to shukaaku and improving relationships with temari and kankuro).I know he wants to foreshadow but for me it makes the story confusing as if he forgot what he said last chapter

I know that I’m being critical, but it is because this novel has an extremely high potential and a good writing style, it is still my favorite fanfic in this site. View More
Gaara · C27
2 months ago
Reading Status: C21
This novel world setting is really interesting and could be made into a much better story. Sadly,there are no real characters in the story,only arrogant bullies,and the most annoying thing is that the mc is a wimp and doesn’t stand up against them.
Could have been one of the best under a good writer
3/5 View More
Super Gene
8 months ago
Thanks for the chapter View More
World Domination System · C70
8 months ago
Thanks for the chapter View More
Versatile Mage · C255
8 months ago
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