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I think instead of that you can make it that the system gets him to choose an op ability at certain hallmarks(I.e chunin and hokage) to improve his power.I think deidara explosions would be really cool and can fit with his sand abilities and add an explosive factor to them View More

T0X1N: If most of you think this is a terrible idea, I don't mind scrapping it, just so you know.

Gaara · C57
4 months ago
It’s because sharingan is so cliche View More

T0X1N: If most of you think this is a terrible idea, I don't mind scrapping it, just so you know.

Gaara · C57
4 months ago

moaz11: Love this novel.
Anyway I just reached the final chapter so I’m gonna comment everything I think about the story in this comment.

1.I really like that it is not harem.

2.The setting is really unique as a naruto fanfic and gives the author better control

3.I like that the story doesn’t have an op mc but one who has potential to be op

4.For a combat focused story there aren’t enough fights and I was really frustrated when the academy competition got canceled

5.The author mentions a lot of stuff once and returns to it after 3-5 chapters(i.e:talking to shukaaku and improving relationships with temari and kankuro).I know he wants to foreshadow but for me it makes the story confusing as if he forgot what he said last chapter

I know that I’m being critical, but it is because this novel has an extremely high potential and a good writing style, it is still my favorite fanfic in this site.

Gaara · C27
10 months ago
Love this novel.
Anyway I just reached the final chapter so I’m gonna comment everything I think about the story in this comment.

1.I really like that it is not harem.

2.The setting is really unique as a naruto fanfic and gives the author better control

3.I like that the story doesn’t have an op mc but one who has potential to be op

4.For a combat focused story there aren’t enough fights and I was really frustrated when the academy competition got canceled

5.The author mentions a lot of stuff once and returns to it after 3-5 chapters(i.e:talking to shukaaku and improving relationships with temari and kankuro).I know he wants to foreshadow but for me it makes the story confusing as if he forgot what he said last chapter

I know that I’m being critical, but it is because this novel has an extremely high potential and a good writing style, it is still my favorite fanfic in this site. View More
Gaara · C27
10 months ago
Reading Status: C21
This novel world setting is really interesting and could be made into a much better story. Sadly,there are no real characters in the story,only arrogant bullies,and the most annoying thing is that the mc is a wimp and doesn’t stand up against them.
Could have been one of the best under a good writer
3/5 View More
Super Gene
1 year ago
Thanks for the chapter View More
World Domination System · C70
1 year ago
Thanks for the chapter View More
Versatile Mage · C255
1 year ago
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