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The premise is good and the characters are well described and written. I liked the flow of conversation between Emma and others to be quite smooth. I wish you the best on your book author 👍

Though thr premise was short, it was interesting and the characters are well described. Your writing is very good and the characters emotions are described well. Good job! 👍

The premise is interesting and the characters are well described and written. I wish you the best on your book author and look forward to more. 👍

The premise is interesting and the characters are well described and written. I look forward to seeing how you develop your story and I wish you the best on your book author 👍

Hey I really like the story and how the main character goes back in time to redo his chances. I look forward to seeing how you develop your story and I wish you the best on your book! 👍

The premise is interesting and the characters are well described and written. I look forward to seeing how you develop your story and I wish you the best on your book author.

Interesting premise and the characters are well described and written. Your writing style is quite impressive and I wish you the best on your book author 👍

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Interesting premise, and the characters are well described and written. I look forward to seeing how you develop your story. I wish you the best on your book 👍

Great story you have there, and the premise is quite interesting. I can't wait for more chapters to come out. I wish you the best on your book!

Interesting premise, however there are quite a few grammatical errors and punctuation errors. If you can polish your book it would turn the book even better. Otherwise good job!

The premise is interesting, and shows how the MC takes it upon himself to investigate what happened. I look forward to seeing how you develop your book author 👍

Really good stor. Characters are described well and can't wait to see how your further develop your book and I wish you the best on your book author 👍

The premise is interesting and i look forward to seeing how you develop your story in the future. Keep up the good work Author and I wish you the best on your book 👍

Great writing style and story! Not only do you explain the details properly, the conversations between thr characters are smooth and well written. I wish you the best on your book Author 👍

Very interesting premise and introduces new elements which made me read evey line. Great job author, and i wish you the very best on your book 👍

The premise is interesting and i csnt wait to see how you do on your book. Though there are a few grammatical errors, it doesn't affect the story. I wish you the best Author 👍

A pretty interesting prrmise of two main characters and their own characteristics, i can't wait to see how the story unfolds and brings out more elements. Good luck Author 👍

Your book is pretty interesting and I like how your's is a fusion of transmigration and a system combined. Though there are grammatical errors and irregularities in the sentence structures, if you continue to polish your English, it would skyrocket the potential of your book. Keep up the good work and I wish you the best Author. 👍

Its an interesting premise and I like the characters different emotional perspectives. Though there are a fee grammatical errors, it doesn't confuse the reader. I wish you the best on your book Author 👍