Dao_Of_Matter

1yr

Commented

ok don't use "norm" to describe sexual orientation. I would cut that.

Draco noticed that he wasn't the only one with this reaction. In fact, all the men around had lost focus, only staring at this woman's form as if it were the only thing in the world. Some of the weaker ones had tents in their shorts while others were drooling. Only Kwaku and Draco fought with their hormones and instincts to remain staring at her face. Even some of the girls were watching the woman hungrily, showing that they had a variety of orientations outside the norm.

Guild Wars

Games · Kotario

Dao_Of_Matter

1yr

Commented

for a person that has lived cumulatively 32 years he sure is very child like. his thought process is both smart and stupid at the same time. trauma usually won't manifest in such a way and will instead cause him to have thing such as dissociative identity disorder.

ch 25 Sealed

First Stygian Diviner:Apocalypse

Fantasy · Isaac_black

Dao_Of_Matter

1yr

Commented

getsuga-tensho

"Have a taste of this! Roars of the thundering swords!" Roy shouted out as he swung his swords downwards, and as he did so, a wave of inky darkness gushed out of each of their tips, painting the fabric of reality black.

Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!

Fantasy · Crimson_ink

Dao_Of_Matter

2yr

Commented

obviously joker

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White Online

Games · Alekzi

Dao_Of_Matter

2yr

Posted

overall a very well thought out interpretation of the revenge hero plot. an absolutely amazing read that does not get trapped in the harem echi style of writing but instead focuses on plot and building out the character. wish it would update regularly

Edea: Hero Summoning Conspiracy

Fantasy · Ruruci

Dao_Of_Matter

2yr

Commented

I would give anything to have my mom back. I fully understand what is going through his head.

I have to get back home! Although he loved to be in a world of magic, he wouldn't trade anything for his mom.

My Space-Time System

Fantasy · xImpulse

Dao_Of_Matter

2yr

Commented

I know level 11 is a milestone for the character but I think seeing as how that nothing on the power scale it's a little to slow. great concept though. (I do hate Aiden back seat driving dudes an idiot half the time)

ch 141 Chapter 140: Bully Being Bullied

The Mech Lord

Sci-fi · ReincarnatedSaint

Dao_Of_Matter

2yr

Commented

it's definitely cat girl.

"Is the person being controlled dead?" Harry asked with a complicated look on his face.

The Mech Lord

Sci-fi · ReincarnatedSaint

Dao_Of_Matter

2yr

Commented

Roadhog junkrat for sure

"You idiot! Stop wasting bombs. We don't have a lot of materials here!" Said Gamma Hog, the round, huge one with a deep husky, wheezing voice that spoke of violence, not even flinching as a tall undead covered in decaying muscles lunged at him, ripping a hole in Gamma hog's stomach with a punch.

Enlightened Violence (Hiatus)

Sci-fi · Wicked132

Dao_Of_Matter

2yr

Commented

rito~

But because of the sudden movement, she ended up losing her balance and falling on top of him, her lips slamming down on his.

Re: Evolution Online

Fantasy · Yolohy

Dao_Of_Matter

2yr

Commented

yo. my man needs a chill pill. just because his boo 8s not thier does not mean he goes off the deep end.

ch 352 We meet again

Hitman with a Badass System

Action · don_offl

Dao_Of_Matter

2yr

Commented

he needs to get rid of the grandpa ring if he wants independence.

"You wanna ask why I'm telling you these right? I'm telling you this because in the future I would like to work with Ghost to help the people. I know he's building his own empire and I want us to work together for the greater good"

Hitman with a Badass System

Action · don_offl

Dao_Of_Matter

2yr

Commented

just to let the author know 10 miles in and 1 and a half is roughly 8 min per mile for 10 miles straight..... that Olympian level conditioning.

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Tyranny of Steel

History · Zentmeister

Dao_Of_Matter

2yr

Commented

home town represent

It would be hosted by the governor of Massachusetts state and the guests would be just the heavyweight authorities in the state.

Supremacy Games

Sci-fi · MidGard

Dao_Of_Matter

2yr

Commented

that's a stupid easy workout

"Alright give me your attention. This task purpose was only to give us a glimpse at your fitness level and to be frank, it's horrible. So starting from today until you awaken, you will have to run 5 km on the treadmill, do 50 pushups, 50 sit-ups, 50 squats for the next 30 days."

Supremacy Games

Sci-fi · MidGard

Dao_Of_Matter

2yr

Posted

honestly super confused as well. starts the story from Max's perspective but apparently Nico is also reincarnated and Max's memories are sealed? so complex and confusing. I understand the need of having a long lasting companion for max but this is unclear and glossed over for such integral characters.

Aoki Is Fixing This Novel

Sci-fi · Aoki_Aku

Dao_Of_Matter

2yr

Commented

so who was reincarnated max or Nico. very confused at this point.

ch 0 9 Chapter 9

Aoki Is Fixing This Novel

Sci-fi · Aoki_Aku

Dao_Of_Matter

2yr

Commented

very smart

Gustav still wanted for each of his attributes to rise evenly so for now he had decided to put off adding attributes to other stats till mental fortitude will have the same points with them.