BookWorm69

1yr

Commented

I'm having a hard time continuing this novel as it no longer makes sense, she has 3000 fragments which is way beyond her supposed saturation point which is supposed to be 1000 until she leaves, that was the whole point why being stuck in the forgotten shore was so bad for them, because they can't grow stronger once they reach that saturation point which is the same for everyone. so she shouldn't be able to grow stronger and she shouodnt have even gotten past a 1000 to begin with. I hate the fact that he's now nothing more than a dog and the author made it that way...

ch 380 Above and Below

BookWorm69

1yr

Replied to GOD_2122

it becomes worse...

BookWorm69

1yr

Commented

fate is just an excuse for authors to repeatedly create unlikely or impossible scenarios. later it is revealed just hoe big this place is, so much so that it is basically impossible to meet anyone unless it's close to ot at the place they are all heading.

And on the other end of the rope, Cassia, the blind girl, was carefully following behind.

BookWorm69

1yr

Replied to Xenofy

please don't spoil. I didn't know her name

Usually, rain always put him in a bad mood. But this time he was too thirsty to think about anything except for freshwater. Staying low so as to not be blown over the edge of the platform, Sunny cupped his hands and waited until they became filled with rainwater. Then he raised them to his mouth and greedily drank.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

BookWorm69

1yr

Replied to Duo_Sword_God

yeah but it probably has tunnels since the coral isn't just a maze like we humans build, ours is just walls but these are coral reefs with holes connecting some and alot of dead ends

The labyrinth was vast and multi-layered, making Sunny's head hurt after multiple fruitless attempts to memorize the layout of the nearest pathways. In the end, he sent the shadow up, forcing it to climb on top of the crimson forest and start jumping from one sharp coral blade to another — knowing full well that he himself would not be able to do the same.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

BookWorm69

1yr

Commented

yea but any person with a hint of intelligence would be able to realise that it wouldn't come until it turns dark by connecting the fact that it only started dissapearing exactly when the sun rose. for a guy that is supposed to be smart like that time he thought of using gravity to defeat an unbeatable monster he cannot figure out the oceans relation to the sun. some authors make these mistakes with characters where they seem intelligence when the plot needs it but are dumb otherwise, it also contradicts his character so far.

Despite the sudden disappearance of the dark sea and its hidden monsters, Sunny was in no rush to climb down from his circular stone platform. Firstly, he felt that if the sea was able to disappear, it was surely able to come back, perhaps at any moment.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

BookWorm69

1yr

Commented

no way he can see that far. even a hundred meters is a stretch to say the least, but hundreds as in many hundred is impossible for him unless he can see in pitch black night and has a vision that is lik e a telescope or a special ability. but so far his whole body is that of a human, his vision is no different from any regular human at the moment.

As he was gripped by a momentary panic, a remote sound suddenly drew his attention. Sunny turned around and saw a triangular dorsal fin moving in his direction. Luckily, it was still hundreds and hundreds of meters away.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

BookWorm69

1yr

Commented

then his growth shouldnt be stagnant, he now has enough nutrients that his halted growth should skyrocket henceforth. please don't make the mc into a midget.

He had completely forgotten about it. He was turning seventeen today.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

BookWorm69

1yr

Replied to Poet_Legion

it would be a dumb risk for the author, because the moment he gets a master is the moment most of the readers quit, even if the relationship gets abolished later, nobody would want to bother reading further with a real slave mc who can't even resist, its different to read a novel where mc is a slave but he can choose to lie and disobey but if he can't then it's boring and annoying as fuck to read.

Sunny was excluded from this whole side of the thing, of course. Firstly, he had already positioned himself to be perceived as an unlikable lunatic. Secondly, he simply had no time for anything except for his lessons and training. And lastly, he was wary of getting too close to anybody, afraid that a situation would arise where he would have no choice but to divulge his True Name.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

BookWorm69

1yr

Commented

I'm guessing that someone will speak his true name but it won't do anything because it needs to be said in the runic language to work.

By understanding the grammatical structure of the rune language, it was easy to extrapolate and see that the more correct translation would have been "Star of Change". More than that, there were different runes for "change", each with its own connotation. Depending on what exact rune was used to relay the meaning of the name, it could also mean "Ruinous Star" or "Star of Misfortune".

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

BookWorm69

1yr

Replied to Hassan_Baig

same, I don't want him to ever expose his true name or be made a true slave.. I've seen many good novels sink into garbage due to stupid things like that. not specifically the slave part, but rather the mc suddenly turning in to a simp or his character turns 180 into something he isn't.

"She's the only one left."

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

BookWorm69

1yr

Commented

cringe

"She is Nephis of the Immortal Flame clan."

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

BookWorm69

1yr

Commented

knew it, these people have no personality, they only exist to suck up to other people in the background...

"Caster, that was incredible!"

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

BookWorm69

1yr

Commented

why make everyone so dumb, she definitely used foresight or some ability similar to that otherwise she wouldn't have been able to react like that period. almost everyone reading this comes to that conclusion so why is it that the people in this novel are so bland and dumb, they don't feel like real people with their own thoughts and opinion, everything they do and say is just to either aggrivate mc or suck up to someone.

The thing that Sleepers failed to notice was that Nephis did not use her Aspect Ability when facing Caster. In fact, she had not used it at any point during today's testing. No one even knew what her Ability was.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

BookWorm69

1yr

Commented

honestly it's dumb that there isn't a limit to that, the system needs some kind of limit, like taking too much off it that wasn't killed by yourself will pose negative effects instead of just continuesly levelling a person up.

Who knew how many soul shards were fed to him prior to enrolling into the Academy?

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

BookWorm69

1yr

Commented

the only real problem I have with this novel is the fact that his aspect is really weak for something divine at the moment, he should atleast be able to blend or hide in the shadows or move through them to another location... unless the divine is just the potential and every rank is meaningless since humans have never even reached beyond saint. it just feels off when everyone has an attribute like 4-5 levels lower and yet they start off far stronger than his so called divine attribute.. I hope the author atleast balances it so that those have a limit. such as nobody being able to reach levels higher than their attributes/affinity potential, for its level is that persons final limit that they cannot break away from. that would atleast make the mc unique since he would have the potential to reach divinity.

'So that's an Ascended Aspect? That's… that's cheating!'

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

BookWorm69

1yr

Commented

authors always fail to make people in their novels lifelike, even I and another person instantly came to the conclusion that she possesses some prediction ability, could also be time related. so honestly the whole school should know after this from rumors.

Nephis moved with the calm precision of a battle machine. Her technique was clean, graceful and ruthless. No matter what type of attack was thrown at her, she was able to either predict or instantly react to it, then deflect and turn it against the attacker with the minimum amount of effort.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

BookWorm69

1yr

Commented

it's all over the place, everywhere. if you know what I mean...

It had a bed with a soft mattress, a table, a dresser, and even a separate bathroom! The materials were new and aesthetically pleasing, the air crisp and sterile. It was warm inside, and the outer wall was equipped with a hidden screen that seamlessly imitated a wide window, opening to a picturesque vista of a snowy park.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

BookWorm69

1yr

Replied to dirtywhoretits

they can inside their dreams like he did before, but it wasn't really a dream but more like a skipping the night

"If you can't locate or are unable to reach the nearest human Citadel, search for an unclaimed Gateway. It will usually be inside or near the most prominent landmark of the region. Work together to defeat its guardians and come back alive."

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

BookWorm69

1yr

Replied to Joshua_Candelario

aladeen for yes and no

However, in these moments between receiving the question and surrendering to the pain, the actual wording of the answer could be changed. The more it strayed from the initial thought, the more resistance he would meet — once again in the form of pressure, then pain. It still had to be truthful, but it didn't have to be so stark.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

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