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Brambler

Brambler

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2018-11-19 Joined Global

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watch him make some sort of blood contract or some bs

The sense of fear somehow had to reflect in my aura or face, alerting the fox and drawing it away from its meal…

Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!

Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!

Fantasy · MotivatedSloth

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Replied to GifflarGod
I'm already almost completely done with this train wreck. please tell me it gets better?!

"So he is your junior looks handsome, by his outfit I confirm that he will be recruited in an ARMY Squad future. Considering the SAFE ZONE 1012 is under ARMY Federation.He is one of many promising young samplings in this zone". Dr Mearov told.

Ancient Tears BloodLine

Ancient Tears BloodLine

Fantasy · Aravind_S

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proper grammar includes punctuation and capitalizing the first word in sentences. it is never appropriate to abbreviate words like though in writing.

"Lad let's go, I already called him he is here". Uncle James opened the front door.We walked in, soon the receptionist saw us, she recognized uncle immediately made a gesture to move to the upstairs room! she looks beautiful tho I laughed internally! hope it turns out to be a good day.

Ancient Tears BloodLine

Ancient Tears BloodLine

Fantasy · Aravind_S

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A.I. don't forget the second period. also, the correct order of a sentence is opinion-size-age-shape-colour-origin-material-purpose noun, so it would be, "long white beard"

Soon we came to a place! high tech building with huge A. I Screen which shows Dr Mearov Photos and his inventions! He looks tall, old with a white long beard I believe he is in his late sixties, no one is sure about his age maybe he will turn out to be an old monster.

Ancient Tears BloodLine

Ancient Tears BloodLine

Fantasy · Aravind_S

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Commented
Holy run on sentences batman

"Lad, I thought you like to look at few places considering your first visit here since you want to finish our work, Let's go now. Zack, Dr Mearov is a good person, try to give a good impression as much as possible, if he likes you he will help you whenever it needed". Uncle James said to me.

Ancient Tears BloodLine

Ancient Tears BloodLine

Fantasy · Aravind_S

Brambler
Commented
"I mean whatnot" and "I mean" are never acceptable to include in any sentences unless it is dialog or inner thoughts. also, it is usually always best to write in past tense- "I saw," "I thought," "he said."

Ah, finally we came to the snow-white city, it looks magnificent with huge towers glass buildings, skyscrapers I mean whatnot, the streets are very clean many people are walking down crowded, patrol guards are everywhere.

Ancient Tears BloodLine

Ancient Tears BloodLine

Fantasy · Aravind_S

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dejected is not a verb. you can't deject something.

And these warriors blindly sign the Hell Contract. Headmaster William dejected quite sadly, He asked the Parazam hunter league for funds to provide orphans left behind by the Parazam hunter league warriors, but they never listened to his pleading.

Ancient Tears BloodLine

Ancient Tears BloodLine

Fantasy · Aravind_S

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Replied to _wilyn_
I don't think so. it's not in my library any longer, so I think I quit reading after a couple dozen chapters.

Soon a boy came with swaggering, on his head was a Three-Eyed Monkey, is laughing and dancing. I was shocked seeing it because of that Monster is infamous Three Eyed Devil Monkey, I have never been so jealous of someone else monster than I am now and I am not the only one feeling envy seeing that Monkey.

Monster Integration

Monster Integration

Fantasy · AnWan

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Replied to Daoist284519
if you ever see a square citrus, you could probably be the luckiest person on earth. or in minecraft.

The Curse Cemetery was a very large place. It was like a city of the undead. This place was 600 kilometers in diameter. That's why no person would dare to enter this place if they weren't sure that they could get out before it gets dark. Thousands of undead will swarm those people when the night falls.

The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak

The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak

Fantasy · DonnEll

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Replied to Icywinds365
It's like those sections in Zelda with the cursed forest when you go through the same spot in a loop..yeah. thats what it is!

"I need to get out of this place before it gets dark." Saying this, he dashed forward to the direction of the woods. He wouldn't survive this place if it gets dark. It wasn't a forbidden place for nothing.

The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak

The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak

Fantasy · DonnEll

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