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It's providing blueprint thus far. View More

tabletaz: modern vs medieval ! what happened to his system?

World Development System · C205
1 day ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire View More
World Development System · C205
1 day ago
No problem, my power stones and spirit stone are only for this novel anyway. 😆



I've deleted the other books in my library, leaving this one alone in the summit View More
World Development System · C205
1 day ago
I tought it's gonna be another 2 chapters today😆 View More
World Development System · C199
1 week ago
Waiting for the next chapters😵😵😵😵😵 View More
World Development System · C198
1 week ago
Don't worry, i always enjoy your story😉 View More
World Development System · C198
1 week ago
Waiting for the next one 😁 View More
World Development System · C197
1 week ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Potion View More
World Development System · C197
1 week ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire View More
World Development System · C195
1 week ago
F*cked privilege.
That's why waiting for normal chapters is better.

But you can try to contact webnovel support to clarify. Last time i did (using another account), they respond me in not more than 48 hours. View More

GamerForLife: My privilege is reset why is that anyone know ????
I have spent 500 stones to unlock 15 chapters which was done but now the latest 3 chapters are coming up as locked since last 2 days ??????

Divine Beast Adventures · C266
1 week ago
Great news 😍😍 View More

autistic25: Yeah I did but I signed a contract with Webnovel and hence I can't post elsewhere. Well, currently I am trying to stock up on chapters so that I can do a mass release.

World Development System · C190
2 weeks ago

autistic25: Yeah I did but I signed a contract with Webnovel and hence I can't post elsewhere. Well, currently I am trying to stock up on chapters so that I can do a mass release.

World Development System · C190
2 weeks ago
This grimoire contain a lot of inspiration. I hope it suit your taste 😁😉 View More

NovelReader354: See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

World Development System · C189
2 weeks ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire View More
World Development System · C189
2 weeks ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Potion View More
World Development System · C180
3 weeks ago

Relhak: If you think this is another wuxia trope full of cliche stereotypes, then you're completely right - BUT with the exception that the author has used a nice twist on each of the cliche. Trash MC that cant cultivate, but then magically solves his physique problems? Got it, but it takes a long time, and as of chapter 170, he's still struggling with it. Childhood fiance that comes to break up the engagement? Got it, but then due to righteousness sticks with the MC, as it would go against her values to go against her father's arrangement and kick a person just because he's down. Arrogant sect comes to take revenge after a few insignificant disciples being beaten (and thus in their eyes being humiliated)? Got it, but then the sect comes to apologise after learning that it was actually their disciples that were in the wrong.

So yup, full of cliches, but they're refreshing. Another thing that's refreshing is the eccentric and very humoristic characters in the story. Yea, again, they're cliche, but they're pretty funny, and they each have their small quirk. Although the characters aren't that developed, it's a huge improvement to character development compared to many many other Chinese novels out there, where sometimes sidecharacters don't even have a sentence to describe them.

Though full of mild praise, the world background is pretty convoluted, and the reader is only introduced to a small area of the world as you go along. Although this avoids information dumps, after 100+ chapters, it's pretty hard to figure out where the MC is in this world, and what the world actually looks like. On the topic of convoluted, the martial system is pretty difficult to understand, he opens meridians to advance, but there are never give a clear explanation to as what element meridians belong to which level or how many meridians he should open of each. Things are kind of mentioned on the fly, making the read just having to deal with it by accepting it. E.g., suddenly the author could mention, "now I've broken through the water meridian and opened my acupuncture, I'm now 1 step close to the martial warrior stage". Great, but how does this work? How many acupuncture do you have to open? What elements are there? Etc. Just reading about it, makes it all seem so messy - where if the author explained the system proactively, the reader would be able to keep track of the MCs progress.

Another thing is the release stability - pretty damn horrible I'd say. Last release (as of writing) was 10 days ago, and before that it was pretty spotty with around a new chapter every 4~9 days. This really sucks, especially when this a really unique wuxia novel that does it's best to stand out from the crowd. So @translator, if you cant do your job stably, give it to someone else, hire more help, or give a clear message on what readers can expect from you. It says 8 chapters a week, but you're FAR from fulfilling that!

Regarding the translation quality, there are some mistakes in both translation and grammar. Move over, there are mistakes in for example translating key information like the martial warrior stages, where one stage is used twice. Big no no, that a basic proof read should have caught.

Overall, interesting story, funny characters with a world that feels developed. I hope that there will come a main heroine soon to bring some romance into the story, and a reveal of a deeper plot, which it really needs. So far the author has tried to hold back on filler chapters, but the translator stability and quality is a downside. I'd give the story 4.5/5, but the translator is bringing this story down by a notch.

TL;DR: Give it a go, if you like wuxia novels and you're looking for something refreshing with a different spin.

Divine Brilliance
3 weeks ago
Is it a good book? Honestly i placed it in my libraly but have no time to read it yet View More

niazhasnat: Need more readers for " Divine Brilliance "

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C148
3 weeks ago
Make it Exotic Human to simplify 😂 View More

PopcornSectMaster: Will turn into a human shaped exotic beast? Mc, you ARE a human shaped exotic beast. It's just that right now you can be classified as silver, borderline gold rank.

Divine Beast Adventures · C243
4 weeks ago
Thanks for the chapters.

My 2 account's power stones are yours😉 View More
World Development System · C173
1 month ago

NovelReader354: I see, look likes you are faster than the MC 😁👍👍👍

The Favored Son of Heaven · C20
1 month ago
I see, look likes you are faster than the MC 😁👍👍👍 View More

Mescali: So he managed to run 10 meters in the time it took to blink a few times ... I am impressed, how can he move so slow? ah, my bad, did he blink fast or slow?

The Favored Son of Heaven · C20
1 month ago

NovelReader354: @autistic

Thank you for the chapters.
I think i'll reopen my old account to give this story more **tones 😁
Really enjoy the story. But sometimes i got confused with the characters name. I mean the enemy's side. I often go back to earlier chapters just to remember who this person is 😂🤣😂🤣
That wasn't your fault, it was just i'm having a short memory😅

And can you draw the World Map?
At least the curent kingdom aurelius's map.

#pardon my bad english😁

World Development System · C163
1 month ago
@autistic

Thank you for the chapters.
I think i'll reopen my old account to give this story more **tones 😁
Really enjoy the story. But sometimes i got confused with the characters name. I mean the enemy's side. I often go back to earlier chapters just to remember who this person is 😂🤣😂🤣
That wasn't your fault, it was just i'm having a short memory😅

And can you draw the World Map?
At least the curent kingdom aurelius's map.

#pardon my bad english😁 View More
World Development System · C163
1 month ago
Oh, thank you 😄 View More

Tibbles: You can have your own opinion and not type in all caps at me. Good luck with your English grammar.

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C115
1 month ago
The best way to disaprove it is by NOT READING IT.

By reading racism novel, you've give the racist author more income. The more money they got from their novel, the more motivated they are to create another simmilar books.

If we think the book is so good to drop because of racism, At least we should stop voting for this kind of racism story.
If we still support it by giving the the power stones/vote, that means we support this novel, that was equal with approving the author's thought.


#pardon my bad english View More

Tibbles: If you don’t complain or point it out then what’s the difference between accepting it or even approving of it by silence? Racism is disgusting.

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C115
1 month ago
The author is one of yellow people

So please bear with it. You know, sh*t is also yellow 😂🤣😂🤣 View More

Marduko: Huh wasn't it suppose to be 500,000!? And reading white people white people I actually want to smack the Author... Thanks for the chapter Translator!

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C108
1 month ago

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Divine Beast Adventures · C221
1 month ago
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Divine Beast Adventures · C221
1 month ago
We all know that majority of chinese are racist. And they are curently suppresing moslem in china (search youtube for more info), hence the name used as vilain here View More

DaoistDumbalf: WHY always Mahmud or something similar ? its irritate me because I'm türk, always some arabian or turkish name pops for a vilian :(

Fishing the Myriad Heavens · C86
1 month ago

autistic25: Nah, I understand, Its always good have criticism which will improve your work in the long run. You see its hard to focus on Novel and work both together. But I am reading a lot more to improve my work. I basically started this out as hobby. But as I am charging my fans, I don't want to drop my first novel before finishing. If I was given more time( instead of 3 hours every day) then there would certainly have been an increase in the quality of work.

World Development System · C149
1 month ago
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