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The Geared Immortal · C132
6 months ago
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World Development System · C236
8 months ago

Brayon101: Check our my translated novel
Peerless Martial God
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Invincible Divine Dragon's Cultivation System · C11
8 months ago
Can you please write a book with a fresh storyline, no cliche, no plot-hole, and can satisfy every reader without a single complain from the reader? If you can, then please write the story ASAP so that we can be satisfied with your book alone even if it goes premium View More

God_Of_Books: so far nothing special i consider it a mix between im a fish book and dragon kings son in law so far nothing special also already using crappy cliche plots like as soon as he is about to go sell his 1st pot of gold it just so happens he gets hit and he loses out on money and tries to sell fish again because he didnt get cash just goods worth cash but cant be easily sold odds of those shoes going to his sister or new gf pretty high compared to him actually selling it also for some odd reason he still finds the need to go to college even though he is going to be a dragon in the future he can get anyfish in the world to sell for money no need for college thats sucking the money out of you etc etc etc etc lots of flaws in my eyes so simple dumbass mc tag needs to be apllied along with cliche troupe based off of the current chapters

Invincible Divine Dragon's Cultivation System · C11
8 months ago
I've open the app once every 3 hours only to find out that there's still no new chapters 😅 . . View More
World Development System · C233
8 months ago
Dude, i'm saying the christian, not the bible. If you are a christian then you should read your bible carefully. Then you'll understand what i mean. A good christian is the one who know their own bible. What i mean in my previous comment is in the bible, matthew 15:24. If you are an atheist, then i'm sorry, religion is not your cup of a tea 😉 View More

Rahkheid: Dude if you dont read the bible and have alot of criticisms about it its fine but dont twist and add stuff thats clearly not in the bible. Dont just reference stuff you have heard and not read yourself.

A Wizard's Secret · C43
8 months ago
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World Development System · C233
8 months ago
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World Development System · C229
8 months ago
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World Development System · C225
8 months ago
Dear author, can you please give us a mass release this week?😁😁 i want to see the end of this arc already View More
World Development System · C220
9 months ago
Yes, there is big and small bones, not slim or fat bones 😁 View More

Bartzabel: Big bones, small bones. Tiny people have small bones, ginormous muscular people have big bones to support their weight and pressure from their muscles.

Wholly Undead · C1
9 months ago
Messing with him yes, but still it provide the blueprint View More

LEONOFZION: What system? The AI has been messing with him the whole time

World Development System · C205
9 months ago
It's duke fjord's port city. correct me if i'm wrong View More

TheHisag: Laguna where is that, is that in the elves land ???

World Development System · C214
9 months ago
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World Development System · C213
9 months ago
It's providing blueprint thus far. View More

tabletaz: modern vs medieval ! what happened to his system?

World Development System · C205
9 months ago
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World Development System · C205
9 months ago
No problem, my power stones and spirit stone are only for this novel anyway. 😆



I've deleted the other books in my library, leaving this one alone in the summit View More
World Development System · C205
9 months ago
I tought it's gonna be another 2 chapters today😆 View More
World Development System · C199
9 months ago
Waiting for the next chapters😵😵😵😵😵 View More
World Development System · C198
9 months ago
Don't worry, i always enjoy your story😉 View More
World Development System · C198
9 months ago
Waiting for the next one 😁 View More
World Development System · C197
9 months ago
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World Development System · C197
9 months ago
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World Development System · C195
9 months ago
F*cked privilege.
That's why waiting for normal chapters is better.

But you can try to contact webnovel support to clarify. Last time i did (using another account), they respond me in not more than 48 hours. View More

GamerForLife: My privilege is reset why is that anyone know ????
I have spent 500 stones to unlock 15 chapters which was done but now the latest 3 chapters are coming up as locked since last 2 days ??????

Divine Beast Adventures · C266
10 months ago
Great news 😍😍 View More

autistic25: Yeah I did but I signed a contract with Webnovel and hence I can't post elsewhere. Well, currently I am trying to stock up on chapters so that I can do a mass release.

World Development System · C190
10 months ago

autistic25: Yeah I did but I signed a contract with Webnovel and hence I can't post elsewhere. Well, currently I am trying to stock up on chapters so that I can do a mass release.

World Development System · C190
10 months ago
This grimoire contain a lot of inspiration. I hope it suit your taste 😁😉 View More

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World Development System · C189
10 months ago
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World Development System · C189
10 months ago
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World Development System · C180
10 months ago

Relhak: If you think this is another wuxia trope full of cliche stereotypes, then you're completely right - BUT with the exception that the author has used a nice twist on each of the cliche. Trash MC that cant cultivate, but then magically solves his physique problems? Got it, but it takes a long time, and as of chapter 170, he's still struggling with it. Childhood fiance that comes to break up the engagement? Got it, but then due to righteousness sticks with the MC, as it would go against her values to go against her father's arrangement and kick a person just because he's down. Arrogant sect comes to take revenge after a few insignificant disciples being beaten (and thus in their eyes being humiliated)? Got it, but then the sect comes to apologise after learning that it was actually their disciples that were in the wrong.

So yup, full of cliches, but they're refreshing. Another thing that's refreshing is the eccentric and very humoristic characters in the story. Yea, again, they're cliche, but they're pretty funny, and they each have their small quirk. Although the characters aren't that developed, it's a huge improvement to character development compared to many many other Chinese novels out there, where sometimes sidecharacters don't even have a sentence to describe them.

Though full of mild praise, the world background is pretty convoluted, and the reader is only introduced to a small area of the world as you go along. Although this avoids information dumps, after 100+ chapters, it's pretty hard to figure out where the MC is in this world, and what the world actually looks like. On the topic of convoluted, the martial system is pretty difficult to understand, he opens meridians to advance, but there are never give a clear explanation to as what element meridians belong to which level or how many meridians he should open of each. Things are kind of mentioned on the fly, making the read just having to deal with it by accepting it. E.g., suddenly the author could mention, "now I've broken through the water meridian and opened my acupuncture, I'm now 1 step close to the martial warrior stage". Great, but how does this work? How many acupuncture do you have to open? What elements are there? Etc. Just reading about it, makes it all seem so messy - where if the author explained the system proactively, the reader would be able to keep track of the MCs progress.

Another thing is the release stability - pretty damn horrible I'd say. Last release (as of writing) was 10 days ago, and before that it was pretty spotty with around a new chapter every 4~9 days. This really sucks, especially when this a really unique wuxia novel that does it's best to stand out from the crowd. So @translator, if you cant do your job stably, give it to someone else, hire more help, or give a clear message on what readers can expect from you. It says 8 chapters a week, but you're FAR from fulfilling that!

Regarding the translation quality, there are some mistakes in both translation and grammar. Move over, there are mistakes in for example translating key information like the martial warrior stages, where one stage is used twice. Big no no, that a basic proof read should have caught.

Overall, interesting story, funny characters with a world that feels developed. I hope that there will come a main heroine soon to bring some romance into the story, and a reveal of a deeper plot, which it really needs. So far the author has tried to hold back on filler chapters, but the translator stability and quality is a downside. I'd give the story 4.5/5, but the translator is bringing this story down by a notch.

TL;DR: Give it a go, if you like wuxia novels and you're looking for something refreshing with a different spin.

Divine Brilliance
10 months ago
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