Borrowing the flames found at the collapse of the way of eternity, I shall reduce to cinders everything that you have loved, except for dogs and apples.
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Ehhh... If I remember correctly, It all started when I downloaded a certain app recommended by my best friend. It was a game about heroes conquering dungeons and beauties. The typical stuff. Since I was bored, then why not? However, never did I expect.... El Reid: "System, why send me here when, other than the synopsis, I know absolutely nothing about the game?" System: "....." ––––––––––––––– Author's Note: I would like to inform you that this is my first time writing, so if you spot any mistakes, please write a comment for me to correct it. The reason I'm making this novel is for the sake of growth and experience. So put down those reviews, and comments; everything is fine as long as its good advice. Overall, thank you and have an enjoyable read.
Avaricious: - "Your Translating speed is only 30 points, while I'm currently at 80 points. It is many times higher than yours. the speed I translate novels is much faster than you. "
The Translator walks toward the Chapter.
The Other Translator was bursting with rage. Yet, he could only talk nicely as the fate of the readerws depended on this. " This kind of chapter, with your 30 points of Translation Energy, you need at least 3 minutes to post it. I only need 1 minute. I..."
The other translator had not even finished his sentence.
*post notification sound effect*
His Mouth stood agape , not closing after a long time.
One Second Posting Speed?
What heaven defying Translation skills was that. This was their translator of The Strongest Gene? Was He even a Translator. At this moment, They suddenly has a feeling that even if Translator did not enter QiDian, He was still someone who the readers Love.
"Chapter 32 of The Strongest Gene was posted" * Readers Cheer*
Other translator's mouth still open.
XD Thanks for the Chapter.The Strongest Gene · C32
The Strongest Gene · C7
Loose_T_Shirt: I am author of this novel. I initially started it as a joke. I forced myself to make it funny and introduce betrayal or an Evil big brother.
But I was not enjoying the story which I was writing.
I was getting a good response therefore I continued writing it, but with an empty soul.
Then finally, I decided that this is my FANTASY. This is my imagination and I started writing the story the way I want it to be.
And BOOM, I started enjoying the story and the response I got increased exponentially.
I have experienced many things in life and I include that in the story.
My friends always told me that I am a good motivational speaker and sometimes says unique and great things.
Therefore I started inducing those things in the story and would keep doing it.
I don't think I can write forced betrayal and other things.
I made this FANTASY and would induce every bit of experience I had in my life.
If you ENJOY this, then I would be very HAPPY.Monster Emperor System
MochizukiTsukinoki: This story was created with pretty interesting concept, yet few aspect could be seen immediately that they're lackluster. It wasn't about the system or something that has to do with the power and anything along those line, the problem here was the fact that the character wasn't really get the spotlight they deserves.
It was already on chapter five, and yes, focusing on the plot and world building is important. Sometimes you need to sacrifice which one need to be become more mundane than the other aspect, that's what happen on this story.
The world building was pretty solid, I could even give it full star for that. But the development was hath to be paced down a bit. It was too fast, even entering the conflict was could be seen as the author being excited and wanted to continue the story already, something I could sympathize too to be honest.
Problem here is the character, they didn't feel so alive, because yes, they just don't. Problem wasn't on the writing or anything like that, it was more on how the atmosphere was created by the words that connected each other into one sentence, it was obviously not strong enough.
Advice are given from this point.
Try to paced your story, make it bit slower. If you could, focus on what is so important in the story for one chapter only, don't be afraid to do that, this is Webnovel, it's okay to slow down things by doing this.
Also to improve more there are more reference could be included inside the story, by what I mean reference is the books that the writer reads that'll become something he study from and learning.
The planet system could become a much more realistic with this in mind.
It wasn't bad, but just with more tinkering, it would be more great.Godhood: My Planet System (previous edition)
Transmigrated Enhancement Specialists · C0
The Lord’s Empire · C1
The Lord’s Empire · C1
AridontheWatcher: Upon reading, I certainly think that the story has more to show. Such as leaving questions of what gonna happen will he be evil for good or will he find a way to escape his fate. What would happen if he finds another "chosen"? You did pretty much about leaving question, though be descriptive about the mc. Nonetheless pretty much well done.Enter the Game: I own a Dungeon?
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