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  • Enter the Game: I own a Dungeon?

    Enter the Game: I own a Dungeon?

    Magical Realism

    Ehhh... If I remember correctly, It all started when I downloaded a certain app recommended by my best friend. It was a game about heroes conquering dungeons and beauties. The typical stuff. Since I was bored, then why not? However, never did I expect.... El Reid: "System, why send me here when, other than the synopsis, I know absolutely nothing about the game?" System: "....." ––––––––––––––– Author's Note: I would like to inform you that this is my first time writing, so if you spot any mistakes, please write a comment for me to correct it. The reason I'm making this novel is for the sake of growth and experience. So put down those reviews, and comments; everything is fine as long as its good advice. Overall, thank you and have an enjoyable read.

Moments

Avaricious: - "Your Translating speed is only 30 points, while I'm currently at 80 points. It is many times higher than yours. the speed I translate novels is much faster than you. "
"No Need"
The Translator walks toward the Chapter.
"Translator!"
The Other Translator was bursting with rage. Yet, he could only talk nicely as the fate of the readerws depended on this. " This kind of chapter, with your 30 points of Translation Energy, you need at least 3 minutes to post it. I only need 1 minute. I..."
The other translator had not even finished his sentence.
*post notification sound effect*
His Mouth stood agape , not closing after a long time.
Damn.
One Second Posting Speed?
What heaven defying Translation skills was that. This was their translator of The Strongest Gene? Was He even a Translator. At this moment, They suddenly has a feeling that even if Translator did not enter QiDian, He was still someone who the readers Love.
"Chapter 32 of The Strongest Gene was posted" * Readers Cheer*
Other translator's mouth still open.
XD Thanks for the Chapter.

The Strongest Gene · C32
5 months ago
After MC barely dodged an incoming truck out of nowhere.
Truck Kun: "Sh*t! How can I, the great truck-kun fail thirty-six times!? This... This... You did this to yourself youngster!!"

*Summoning Great Earthquake-chan*
*Summoning sucessful*
*Transmigration successful*

+ 2100 Profession EXP.
+ 1 Set of Dimensional Wheels
+ 120 Detect MC Proficiency View More
The Strongest Gene · C7
5 months ago
Cliff Sect View More
The Lord’s Empire · C660
11 months ago
More Sect View More
The Lord’s Empire · C643
11 months ago
Mass Release Sect View More
Monster Pet Evolution · C38
11 months ago
Thouth beth awesometh👌 View More

Loose_T_Shirt: I am author of this novel. I initially started it as a joke. I forced myself to make it funny and introduce betrayal or an Evil big brother.
But I was not enjoying the story which I was writing.
I was getting a good response therefore I continued writing it, but with an empty soul.
Then finally, I decided that this is my FANTASY. This is my imagination and I started writing the story the way I want it to be.
And BOOM, I started enjoying the story and the response I got increased exponentially.
I have experienced many things in life and I include that in the story.
My friends always told me that I am a good motivational speaker and sometimes says unique and great things.
Therefore I started inducing those things in the story and would keep doing it.

I don't think I can write forced betrayal and other things.
I made this FANTASY and would induce every bit of experience I had in my life.
If you ENJOY this, then I would be very HAPPY.

Monster Emperor System
11 months ago
MOAR SeCT View More
The Legendary Mechanic · C55
11 months ago
More Sect has begged for more View More
The Legendary Mechanic · C54
11 months ago
Mass Release is life View More
The Lord’s Empire · C630
11 months ago

MochizukiTsukinoki: This story was created with pretty interesting concept, yet few aspect could be seen immediately that they're lackluster. It wasn't about the system or something that has to do with the power and anything along those line, the problem here was the fact that the character wasn't really get the spotlight they deserves.

It was already on chapter five, and yes, focusing on the plot and world building is important. Sometimes you need to sacrifice which one need to be become more mundane than the other aspect, that's what happen on this story.

The world building was pretty solid, I could even give it full star for that. But the development was hath to be paced down a bit. It was too fast, even entering the conflict was could be seen as the author being excited and wanted to continue the story already, something I could sympathize too to be honest.

Problem here is the character, they didn't feel so alive, because yes, they just don't. Problem wasn't on the writing or anything like that, it was more on how the atmosphere was created by the words that connected each other into one sentence, it was obviously not strong enough.

Advice are given from this point.

Try to paced your story, make it bit slower. If you could, focus on what is so important in the story for one chapter only, don't be afraid to do that, this is Webnovel, it's okay to slow down things by doing this.

Also to improve more there are more reference could be included inside the story, by what I mean reference is the books that the writer reads that'll become something he study from and learning.

The planet system could become a much more realistic with this in mind.

It wasn't bad, but just with more tinkering, it would be more great.

Godhood: My Planet System (previous edition)
11 months ago
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The Lord’s Empire · C628
11 months ago
Exp View More
The Lord’s Empire · C613
11 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Transmigrated Enhancement Specialists · C1
11 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
The Lord’s Empire · C1
11 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
The Lord’s Empire · C1
11 months ago
Thanks. I'll do just that. View More

AridontheWatcher: Upon reading, I certainly think that the story has more to show. Such as leaving questions of what gonna happen will he be evil for good or will he find a way to escape his fate. What would happen if he finds another "chosen"? You did pretty much about leaving question, though be descriptive about the mc. Nonetheless pretty much well done.

Enter the Game: I own a Dungeon?
11 months ago
First View More
The Lord’s Empire · C599
12 months ago
Reading Status: C0
I would like to humble myself, rather, tell you the absolute truth about this novel. It's not bad and if you have nothing else better to do, why not give this a try? View More
Enter the Game: I own a Dungeon?
1 year ago

Chou_Osara: You can spam me for free xp i don't mind

Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God · C969
1 year ago
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