NatsumeRikka - Profile

Though I agree with some points, there are many points that you pointed out that are totally baseless. First of all the scenes such as how the hand of a person is suddenly cut off, describes how fast Raven was in her attack and in the POV from the general public, they could not notice anything. Moreover, the point of the monster being 8 meters and able to hit from 20 meters. The 20-meter distance was just from the start. Do you think that the time when Ozul ran towards the monster, the distance was still 20 meters? and yes, I agree with the part where the battle was drawn out for so many chapters. Then comes the point of his Character Design. Did you even read the synopsis of the story? It literally describes how the Main Character does have emotions, but he can't describe them! He.can't.express.them. And that is exactly what we saw happening in the story! Then comes the part where 'Author contradicts himself'... The author did describe how Ozul can control the ball of purity until a normal human can't see it, but did u notice that he said, 'CAN' <-- that is a future possibility when his control over it increases. Then there is the part where you said that 'Author said that Ozul can control the ball of purity over 10 meters.' NO. AUTHOR NEVER SAID THAT. The spell of Raven could cover an area of 10 Meters! Not Ozul's Ball of Purity! Before Ozul's huge boost, it was only controllable in 3-meters radius, and the huge boost got him to 9-meters! Moreover, if you think that it is irritating of you to read the MC having a headache during the fight which limits his abilities, it is your personal preference, and that should not include the rating at all. But that is also just my opinion, so you can ignore this part.