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After several events Rayner decides to go to another world to live a more exciting life I do not own the copyright of the cover photo
After being chosen to reincarnate, our protagonist gains some legal spells and goes to live and a world next to his laziness and friends that he finds in the way ___________________________ I do not have the copyrights of the photo, so if you are the owner and did not like let me know that I will remove
People were chosen to enter a competition to succeed God the Creator, from now on not even he could decide who won or lost much less who will be his true heir This will be the battle for the greatest title This will be the battle for survival This will be the battle for supremacy. And it will also be the battle to define the strongest of all
After being transferred to a new body, Kizuna realizes that he is no longer human and is now also helping him to evade Follow your journey through the worlds as you evolve and become stronger. * first world: Kimetsu no Yaiba
Fourth Prince's Debauchery · C88
PPSH7: I think that this novel is one of the best I have seen. In the earlier chapters I didn't like some parts of it as the mc seemed like he was becoming OP at an extremely fast rate. But, in the mid 50-60s it got better and as more characters were introduced, and Draco didn't seem all too OP and it was more enjoyable reading the novel. (Cough* The Ultima Stunt was OP AF, so Draco didn't seem as OP)
If I had to say one thing I didn't like about this novel is that there aren't too many detailed fight scenes. Reading how Draco becoming stronger isn't a bad experience, but I personally just want more detailed action scenes. Yes, there were indeed some fighting scenes, but it wasn't all that long as I hope it would be.
P.S. Yes this is an message to the author that there should be more detailed fighting scenes, though the detailed 'bed time' scenes were nice. 😏😏Guild Wars
Flat_Moon: It's only been 4 chapters at the time of this review but it only took 4 chapters to know that this is amazing.
I noticed that the novel has OP MC tag which I understand for some that it's immediate disappoint as they mostly lack a certain charm.
Well from the 4 chapters I can tell that the MC(Nova) Is vaguely powerful. At the moment he's strong for a kid. What makes him so strong from the get-go is his stable thinking it's very much his strongest ability.
He's the quiet yet funny protagonist that has his own unique charm that separates him from the copy and paste OP MC
MC(Nova) in all sense feels real. His comedic reaction and execution for every scenario very much fits with crazy work that is one piece.
The writing is great and story developments well planned. The only set back I have for this novel is that even though the MC (Nova) Is quite the moment he begins to talk he spills on things for the future. I would normally stop immediately discard novels where MC tell characters as It at most times it becomes a mess.
However, the novel is just too well constructed and the quite MC is just too good to pass up. The author has mentioned that he has planned everything so fingers crossed for the future plot.
Please don't drop.Mythical Paramecia Fruit "Olympian"
ZevenSama: despite the few chapters and low release, this is the best fanfic I'm reading today
Keep this up author ....... MOREEEEEEDxD: Reign of Supreme King · C11
DxD: Reign of Supreme King · C11
WWFire: Writing style is a train wreck (especially the first 5 five chapters; barely readable): punctuation problems, capitalization problems, too much use of "...", confusing use of braces and brackets (why use this symbols for dialogue/thoughts at all?), lacking dialogue tags or action beats (author writes like a screenwriting). I have no complains for grammar though.
Instead of using symbols with unclear meaning (i.e. braces or brackets), just use the standard apostrophe or quotes for thoughts and dialogues. It is your job as an author to make sure that the readers understand whether it is the character's thoughts, mind communications, or dialogues by using the standard format. Do yourself a favor by researching more on proper novel dialogue writing (punctuation too!).
Here are other elements I feel that you are lacking:
1. The sense of the MC! That's right, a human has 5 sense, not just sight. How does it smells like when MC arrived in the world? When he drink the water, how does it taste like? Are there any sounds of cracking flames and wave of heat when he got near the burning mountain? If you want to create extraordinary immersion, you should improve this point.
2. What was his name again? Ah, Sam! I almost forgot his name without you mentioning it at all at chapter 10 and only once at chapter 9.
3. World building (visuals) is quite lacking in the first few chaps. You need to improve from this question: What is the MC's first impression on seeing the new world? Just "dumbfounded" or "awestruck" is not enough. If you think you can give more visualization more on the world , don't be afraid on making an extra chapter just for it. What I say is that, imagine yourself in that world, what do you see and feel in your surrounding?Shut up: You, Nymphomaniac Evil Sword
foxytail: more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moreI reincarnated as a friend of Slime
Piotr_Uklejewski: ******************************** Good work! ******************************************
***************************** And i need more! ***************************************I reincarnated as a friend of Slime
Lord_Fate_Master: Zeven-sama is returned from the bottom of the hell!I reincarnated as a friend of Slime · C24
Orazon: I really like how this story is going, but I can’t stress enough how much you need to work on your language skills.Final Evolution System · C2
Suzuha_Yuu: -grammar errors
-changing the characters gender be using her or she instead of he or his
-unnecesary words on some sentence
-some of the chapters needs some rewriting
-i hope the chapter releases at least 2 or 3 a week (i just hope maybe author will stop again)
-i dont have problem so far on story developmentI reincarnated as a friend of Slime
Piotr_Uklejewski: Good work !!!!!!!!!!!!! And i need more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ps: my english su..........................
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Ryuutaro: Thanks.. welcome back Author..I reincarnated as a friend of Slime · C24
Megumin_Explosion: YEAH!! ACTION TIME!!The Adventures of the Young Master · C219
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