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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
If the Deep Sea Forgets You · C192
1 month ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Heidi and the Lord · C37
1 month ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Heidi and the Lord · C37
1 month ago

Nzoputa: TYSM for the support

My brother's friend · C4
1 month ago

MyCharacterLeads: I agree with 2218.. though this chapter has already it's own feelings..👍
Such vivid descriptions, around of applause!

My brother's friend · C8
2 months ago

IceSnowball: This is interesting:)

MAY · C2
2 months ago
TYSM, for the advice, and for reading my book. But I was wondering about the part you mentioned about it being a bit too western, what would you recommend me to do about that so I can fix it and better the book. Thanks again View More

dusty_angel: The story doesn't immediately get you immersed into the world. Instead, it slowly introduces the characters and the plot. I wasn't too overly invested with the main character, or any character really. They were kind of bland, but the personalities are gradually developing, so I hope to see how they grow. One thing I want to point out is that, this story uses Asian names, but the world feels a bit too western.

As for the writing, it isn't bad, but I feel like it's too distant from the characters. Try using a close 3rd-person POV. Imagine writing it in 1st-person, but then replace the 1st-person pronouns with 3rd-person pronouns. It's just a tip though, so don't worry about it of you don't want to use it.

Overall, the story has potential. Keep up the good work!

My brother's friend
2 months ago

dusty_angel: The story doesn't immediately get you immersed into the world. Instead, it slowly introduces the characters and the plot. I wasn't too overly invested with the main character, or any character really. They were kind of bland, but the personalities are gradually developing, so I hope to see how they grow. One thing I want to point out is that, this story uses Asian names, but the world feels a bit too western.

As for the writing, it isn't bad, but I feel like it's too distant from the characters. Try using a close 3rd-person POV. Imagine writing it in 1st-person, but then replace the 1st-person pronouns with 3rd-person pronouns. It's just a tip though, so don't worry about it of you don't want to use it.

Overall, the story has potential. Keep up the good work!

My brother's friend
2 months ago
So sorry, I'll check what the problem is View More

Kaazuka: I didn'tget anything

My brother's friend · C1
2 months ago
TYSM for the support View More

nanaamiyona: Just go on author

My brother's friend · C4
2 months ago

Kaazuka: I didn'tget anything

My brother's friend · C1
2 months ago

sharoncumaldi: What happen????suddenly her mom is behaving that way....aiiyyoo

My brother's friend · C9
2 months ago

gab27: Thank you author!!! So far so good! I like your story!! 😉👏👏👏🤘

My brother's friend · C5
2 months ago

kenzie3567: I like this story but I feel like these a lot of explaining of what stuffs looks like

My brother's friend · C7
2 months ago

nanaamiyona: Brother's friend hunh , interesting🤔🤔🤔

My brother's friend · C3
2 months ago

nanaamiyona: Just go on author

My brother's friend · C4
2 months ago
Thank you so much, I'm really glad you like my book View More

Andreasky_Oppong_3748: Wow... everything x amazing author.... great work....👍💖💖👍👍💗❤️❤️❤️❤️💕💞💞💞💃💃💃💃💃💟💓💓💓💜💜💜💜💜💜..💕💕💕💕💖💖💜💖💕💕💕😀😀💙💙💙💙💙💙💙🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

My brother's friend
2 months ago
TYSM for the positive review, so glad you liked my book View More

Nightmare_Taichou: This book is a very interesting read, and quite different from the regular novels posted. The suspense was at a moderate level, which is good and the relationship between the characters were very well done.

Worth the read.

Good job.

My brother's friend
2 months ago

Nightmare_Taichou: This book is a very interesting read, and quite different from the regular novels posted. The suspense was at a moderate level, which is good and the relationship between the characters were very well done.

Worth the read.

Good job.

My brother's friend
2 months ago

Andreasky_Oppong_3748: Wow... everything x amazing author.... great work....👍💖💖👍👍💗❤️❤️❤️❤️💕💞💞💞💃💃💃💃💃💟💓💓💓💜💜💜💜💜💜..💕💕💕💕💖💖💜💖💕💕💕😀😀💙💙💙💙💙💙💙🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

My brother's friend
2 months ago
Hopefully, in later chapters yh. View More

potato_dude: Are you doing more?

My brother's friend · C12
2 months ago
TYSM for reading my book View More

Andreasky_Oppong_3748: I luv them already💖💕💞💟

My brother's friend · C12
2 months ago

potato_dude: Are you doing more?

My brother's friend · C12
2 months ago
omg, thank you so much for the positive comment, so sorry for the late reply though.... Its really nice to see someone with such enthusiasm for this book, its really inspiring and motivating. makes me want to do more. :) View More

AnimalLover: I so wish I could help Tang An with her mom problem!! It makes me mad to think that they can't treat her with any respect just because she might have possibly killed there other daughter. Another thing I don't understand is, why wouldn't this mom just say the name of she wanted Tang An dead? Although, I'm glad she hasn't. Tang An is amazing!! Also, her and Lu Xiang are quite the couple!! They were made for each other!! Can't wait for more chapters!! Love the book!! Will do LOTS of reviews!!🥰😍😍

My brother's friend · C12
2 months ago

AnimalLover: I so wish I could help Tang An with her mom problem!! It makes me mad to think that they can't treat her with any respect just because she might have possibly killed there other daughter. Another thing I don't understand is, why wouldn't this mom just say the name of she wanted Tang An dead? Although, I'm glad she hasn't. Tang An is amazing!! Also, her and Lu Xiang are quite the couple!! They were made for each other!! Can't wait for more chapters!! Love the book!! Will do LOTS of reviews!!🥰😍😍

My brother's friend · C12
2 months ago

Andreasky_Oppong_3748: She should go to hell 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🙁

My brother's friend · C12
2 months ago

Andreasky_Oppong_3748: I luv them already💖💕💞💟

My brother's friend · C12
2 months ago

Cool_Ted: Lu Xiang's dad is the worse.

My brother's friend · C6
2 months ago

nanaamiyona: I'm thinking the same ,lol

My brother's friend · C6
2 months ago

Cool_Ted: Wow, her reaction was so uncalled for.

My brother's friend · C1
3 months ago
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