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  • The Three Realms

    The Three Realms

    Fantasy

    Follow Aureus Astrea as he journeys across the three realms, Gathering a Team, Building a Kingdom, Fighting Demons while facing internal strife. Join him, as he struggles through it all.

Moments

Reading Status: C6
Decided to change my review upon further consideration.

The reincarnation theme is interesting as I foresee much development on it. Looking forward to it.

Author follows the mold of a cultivation novel well, infusion of personality comes through in the work.

All the best! View More
Memories Blossoming in the Jianghu
1 week ago
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Memories Blossoming in the Jianghu
1 week ago

MishaK: The story is developing nicely. However the only thing I would ask is that you update the chapters at least twice a day! Rest everything is good.

The Three Realms
1 week ago

luoshenhua: You seem to have really thought out the world that you're building really well, and it stands out to me as a genre I haven't seen much of on this site. However, I think that it's a bit too dialogue-heavy, with a lack of description about the setting and characters who are talking, so it kind of reads to me as more of a script than a novel.

The Three Realms
1 week ago
Reading Status: C21
The structure of writing and direction of the story is clear.

The author's strength lies in having a clear idea of how to steer the story.

All the best! View More
The Inconvenient Wife
1 week ago
Hey hey, no worries. Take your time. My novel isn't flying anywhere. Heh. View More

Asteralles: Jamison_C, please give me more time before giving you a review. I have something urgent to do today so it'll come a little bit late. I'm sorry.

Virtually and Genuinely in Love with You
1 week ago

ArcaneDragon: This is a fantasy story but for it's more like military fiction. I think everything is ok and the story will develop later. Writing quality seems ok to me. The story, world and characters seem interesting. As long you want a detailed report of all your mistakes, go and ask Demon lord on our thread xD If I have time I will try to update review after you write more chapters.

The Three Realms
1 week ago

ASlyDrake: An interesting story, that is at the moment heavily inclined towards a military setting. How this will change with time is something we will have to see. Overall few mistakes, most of them relating to punctuation, a good read I'd recommend.

The Three Realms
1 week ago

Apophis9: Writing quality is good as far as I see, what it lacks is the details that make it easier for readers to comprehend what is happening, else everything else is okay :).

The Three Realms
1 week ago

SmarthLad: Thanks for the review!

I'm still struggling with grammar but it's slowly getting better as i keep writing.
Writing in the end is a craft that need perpetual training.

I'll try by best to keep publishing Fell's story, i hope you'll enjoy the read!

The Universe is Innately Just
1 week ago
Reading Status: C37
The author has created an interesting and engaging premise with the starting chapters.

Idea of humans equipped with powers after an apocalyptic event comes across clearly.

The ******* of dealing with the environment and one's new powers creates an engaging background.

All the best! View More
I Hate Systems
1 week ago

AkaGin: I've gotten the inspiration from pretty much watching anime and reading manga. But then I discovered and read light novels and decided to write my first work. Thank you for the review!

Normal in Parenthesis
1 week ago
Reading Status: C17
Author shows an improvement as he progresses through the chapters.

Something on my mind would be in the latest chapter, the partnership that forms between N and A. It reminds me a little of two thieves plotting a grand heist before it all happens. The image of partnership comes across clearly but there seems to be something off about it. All the best, yeah! View More
Legend of Aurum
1 week ago
Reading Status: C4
I found myself liking the MC much more starting from C3. The characterization feels humorous with an underlying serious tone. I have a personal preference for such atmospheres and the writing accentuates that chapter.

Moving on to technical issues,
I feel that the novel will improve with less usage of adverbs.
I notice that you have a heavy inclination of using the word 'had' and using the phrase 'a small'. Perhaps some variation would help here?
All the best! View More
Resurgence of the Rogue Blacksmith
1 week ago
Reading Status: C4
I think that the contrast between the bleakness of the start and the color still in the protagonist's life provides a nice contrast when viewing into the story's world.

The story is easy to read and the imagery comes across clearly. As a result, intentions are easier to grasp too. Cheers! View More
Virtually and Genuinely in Love with You
1 week ago
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Virtually and Genuinely in Love with You
1 week ago
Reading Status: C5
A unique and cute perspective takes over when reading the novel.

I believe that the novel can enhanced by further playing to author's strengths of creating unique interactions.

However I seldom read BL , please take my review with a pinch of salt.

Cheers! View More
Raising Child System
1 week ago
Reading Status: C23
Can see the author's skill improving in the recent chapters.

The world building has a consistent feel.

The progression to the latest setting made me feel more comfortable with the series.

Good luck! View More
Rise of Destruction
1 week ago
Reading Status: C6
Refreshing world building. I think it is pretty cool to have a new take on the cultivation world. It will be interesting to see how it develops in the future.

There are some ****** grammar mistakes etc. I believe an editor will be able to help with your work.

That said, reading through the work, it does feels as if the author has put in effort into his grammar and such.

All the best! View More
The Universe is Innately Just
1 week ago
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Memories Blossoming in the Jianghu
1 week ago
Reading Status: C5
The book felt like an anime in novel form.

Can see the author making efforts to establish his premise.

Fans of classroom settings etc may find this suited to their tastes. View More
Normal in Parenthesis
1 week ago

AerynSun: Thanks for the feedback and encouragement! Really appreciate it. 😊🙏

I've been a little undecided about how to handle the elves. I let my writer friend read the chapters and he told me that he didn't like that the elves had too much emotion until they almost seemed human in their irrationality and intensity of feelings, such as Thorhelm and Tallahad. He said he always envisioned them like an emotionless Spock from Star Trek.

So I'm still torn between giving them more personality nuances, and keeping them more 'Spock-like'. 😭😭😭 Hope to figure it out more as I continue writing...

Goddess of War
1 week ago

Anya_Nesh: This is the first fantasy novel I read. Although not all details seemed clear to me, it was very interesting to emerge into the work of the author. I liked it that the author let the readers know about the update schedule. This has raised my confidence that the author is serious about the project and will not abandon it on the half way through.

The Three Realms
2 weeks ago
Reading Status: C3
Never really read a romance novel before. Please take my review with a pinch of salt.

The dialogue is engaging and sparks of personality shows through.

At this point in the novel, I am unable to see the progression of the novel (first comment, please) however, within four chapters the direction of the story becomes clear and as a reader I like that.

All the best =) View More
The Numbers That Brought Our Fates Together
2 weeks ago
Reading Status: C8
I like the way the prologue and chapter 8 was handled. The emotional resonance is there.

The concept of Freya comes through quite clearly. She fits the bill as a protagonist in all aspects.

IMHO, the elves felt a little monochrome to me. There wasn't something that jumped out at me and went "These are Elves!". I understand the part of the long lifespan but just that and Elves are long lived does not have much impact.

Enjoyed the creation of Aeron. All the best ^^ View More
Goddess of War
2 weeks ago
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