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GreatJerk: what does "AU" means?
pls replyHarry Potter but AU???
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leonel551: Just explain what is going on and why is he doing stuffGame of Thrones: The Golden Lion · C29
Killerarrow007: Continue author just add another chapter of why he did what he did that's more than enough it's life not everything is going as predicted he wanted to save Dany so she could bring dragons and deal with white walkers so just send them away now that he ows nothing to them and continue the plotGame of Thrones: The Golden Lion · C29
crywolfseven: If I could offer some advice I would say that everything so far feels a bit too... I guess bare bones is the closest word for it. I mean he shows up on earth and can breath perfectly, then his powers start to kick in and he’s almost instantly got a rather good control of them, then he just so happens to run into a nice farm family instead of any of the countless beings who would sense his magical arrival, the he just so happens to speak the same language, then they just so happen to have lost a son 14 years ago and all but cut themselves always from the world so nobody would know their John didn’t survive allowing the MC to take over, then they offer him a spot in the family after like 10 minutes worth of talking.
Basically I’m saying that the story feels more like a story outline at the moment then an actual story. This isn’t meant to be insulting, the outline is much harder then going back and filling out the story to have more detail and less just happenstance where everything just boils down to luck or magic. I mean come on we know that earth has people like The Ancient One, Professor Xavier who are highly sensitive telepaths and can sense sudden changes and people like shield who would likely pick up some kind of changes in the energy readings since he litterally just popped up in their reality. I’m just saying,
I look forward to where this story will go from here and hopefully now that we’re passed the myriad of impossibilities that brought him to earth and got him adopted (which I admit is rather tough to write in) I’m hoping that the rest of the story will be more flushed out. I mean like I said I accept it would be very hard to introduce the MC to a family on earth without making several impossible things happen so I’m more then willing to give all that a pass and just basically count everything before this chapter as a prologue that is a bit rushed in order to get into the story. I really hope this doesn’t come off as insults or complaints I am trying to offer constructive criticism. Since again I understand how difficult it can be to get into a story when you’re doing a crossover.Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C5
ZenoSlayer: at least call white beard 'father' or 'pops', calling him daddy just feels wrongInvincible System start from One Piece · C64
IWANTMYDINNER: to be honest at first I was a little turned off by the gender bender tag...but im a total sucker for sci-fi and video game novels so I caved in and read it. if you are on this page and are hesitant about reading it then FOR FUCKS SAKE DO IT ALREADY!! Seriously its great.Lilim Heritage Online
Code Geass: Azure Prince · C0
DC: PROTOTYPE · C7
Playing with other Supernaturals · C148
Ruined_Leprechaun: Jon: How dare you compare me to that old man...i look nothing like him...I'm atleast thousand times more handsome than him...Dragonborn Saga · C476
Uberscout: Don't underestimate Don. So many spectagular fights that he eventually topped: the semifinals, then the finals in the annual tournament in Solitude, the fight in the pit vs Jull's dad,raiding the Orc fort during the Hircine arc, Alina 60seconds, coming of age vs the pirate kids, the trial of GM Fyr was epic too. Every fight in Solsthein, everything with the forsworn, the ending of Coldharbour arc was one of my favorites, against the attackers on Winterhold, vs Darius, aand the most recent fight. Everyone of them is unique, and this is only the most of it that I can remember rn, so dont you underestimate Don, because he will prove you frong, buddy. Sorry I was a bit brief there.Dragonborn Saga · C465
HaziqRosli: Not consistent in updating...haizzOut of Space · C316
Supreme_Leader: Besides a 6 year old doesn't have much personality to be honest.
His thoughts too would not be too deep to have any major affect on the MC.
If he transmigrated with a teenage Draco
That would have been bad.
There would have been a drastic change in personality and the MC would have to act like draco
And it's very hard to act like someone else.
Especially since people show different personalities with different people.
No matter how good an actor the MC is there would be flaws.
That is why I prefer complete rebirth or reincarnation instead of transmigration.
Transmigrating into anyone of age 1 - 5 is okay.
6 is still okay I guess.
I always hated how MC's transmigrate into teenagers or adults and no one suspects a thing. Its okay if no one suspects anything in a world without magic etc
But in a world of cultivation or magic where people's souls survive after being killed etc why won't people suspect anything?Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy · C1
Exallion: Hello everyone, Author here.
This would be my first time to actually write a something so I want to thank those who wanted to read and those who had already gone through the current chapters.
I'm not shameless enough to give my own writing a 5 star rating but I of course it still being a bit shameless giving this rating. Well, it's my own written story after all.
As a newbie author I know that there is a lot that I needed to improve at but I guarantee that my concept in creating the whole background of the story to be quite interesting.
Anyways, I would appreciate if you guys leave reviews or even criticize me for errors on my writing and things I needed to improve on.
Again, thank you and have a nice read.Mutagen
ArchEyeTech: Hear Ye! Hear Ye!
Our dear author has been admitted to the hospital due to his constant fever. The doctors will be diagnosing his condition and and find a proper treatment.
Due to this situation, expect major delays to chapter releases. Go about in your day or just binge read the already released chapters of "Out of Space".
Prayers of a Speedy Recovery to the Author.Out of Space · C315
Curiosity44: YOU REALLY DID IT! I AM HONORED!Dragonborn Saga · C436
Lebensohl: Haha Hopefully Wang Baole makes the battle axe bigger, sharper, and more impressive!A World Worth Protecting · C296
CaTastrophy427: WB: You're one step away from sending me off the deep endA World Worth Protecting · C292
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