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protagonist is an idiot. Could refuse or try to break the marriage lol

guess authors are much obsessed with harems lol

another simp lol

In a perverted serie, Idiotic non-sense trashpad style, Issei’s family is perverted, his grandfather and father dreamed to be the harem king. 🤣🤣😂 mind reading is much op, would not allow to read minds trained people or stronger than him, so far umptheenth random remplacement, no explanations where is Issei, why the mc is adopted, neither why he’s the Red Dragon instead Issei, author just wanted non-perverted Issei.

Hey author welcome back. 🥳 the mc will be friend with Issei nice. 👍 Keep up the good work.

if you could reducing the number of ❤️ it could be perfect I think.

You inversed chapter 1 and 2 I think?

this ending, I can’t stop laughing 😂😂😂

remplacement bc harem such original (sarcasm)

Would more probably more funny/logic with Issei rather virgin simp lol.

I greatly appreciate that this is not the usual tasteless copy that Sao authors force-feed us. 🙄 I think an introductory chapter would have been necessary if only to understand the differences with the canon. I really hope it’s Kazuto x Suguha! 🤩 If you could also reduce the number of emojis it would make reading a little more enjoyable. 😉 Keep up the good work.

don't worry about being an "expert" or not, but if that bores you too much you could always try the novels or get in touch with other Sao authors (Questionnable Questing and Spacebattles, discord Sao Fanfiction Central are ideal). I hope you will not get discouraged and persevere 👍

you save the Moonlight Cats 🥺, first time in years that I have seen an author save the Cats👏👏, believe as someone who’s ’s fed up with copy-pasted Sao stories, I really really enjoyed this part 🤩 but that's precisely the problem with wanting to stay (too) faithful to the original, you miss out on a lot of character development, changes, in short you are limiting yourself too much in terms of possibilities. I’ve the feeling to read a Wattpad story, 5-6 chapters to describe the entire Aincrac Arc hop next arc and then too! Here i’m not even sure Nicholas The Renegade was indispensable. Good ideas as Cats’ rescue but wasted because you want speed too much.

So it’s a harem? i was expecting find normal story without sl-insert harem 😒😒😒

huh ok i’m out, no reason for fem Issei lol.