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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

yay! so glad they are back.

So far I find this story interesting and different. Looking forward to reading this story.

goodness take care of yourself and hope you get better soon.

please don't give up. I look forward to reading this story. it is one of my favorites.

Sorry to see you are having complaints. I understand that English isn't your first language and it is difficult with all the rules. Grammar errors don't bother me. I am enjoying your story and don't find it boring. I think the reverse roles is interesting and I believe you should write your story as you see fit. I find that over describing characters and environment can take away from story so I have enjoyed the simple style of this story. Some individuals just like to complain no matter what you do. Your story is great and a joy to read.

Sorry to hear you are sick. Get well soon. As far as the reason for rejection, I believe you are better off. If you can be rejected for such a shallow reason that is definitely not the right person for you. it sounds like you would constantly be judge which would be miserable. Good luck and chin up as you are great.

Her horrible father.

yes definitely want them healed and able to have kids. personally I would like to see them have a big family. thank you for a great story. I always look forward to reading it.

Yes, thank you. I really like their characters. You are doing a great job on this story.

I am confused. I thought it was Enrique not Elliot. It feels like a different story.

If I found myself in a different land, I would be confused, scared and feeling lost.

What a bleeding heart chapter. I would prefer the child to survive but do what is necessary for your story.

I believe there are sparks of friendship. I really like how this chapter was written. [img=recommend]

intriguing story. off to a good start.

Haha Haha. That was too funny. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

the two chapters were great today. you are doing great and I really enjoy this story.

cute chapter