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Tales of Demons and Gods: Story of Red Moon Immortal (Hong Yue Xian) · C46
8 months ago
Reading Status: C8
I'll review based on the grades,
Writing: Pretty average. Mistakes are noticeable, but don't affect the reader's capacity to understand the story very much. It's not bad, but not great either.

Updates: Seems somewhat irregular.

Story Dev.: Story's too rushed. MC's just 4 years old and already killing dozens of people and monsters. I can suspend my disbelief, but this story just keeps pushing over my limit. One of the worst parts is that author gave the MC a System. Too many authors have been relying on systems lately, and just like a lot of them. It has become the lazy author's tool for powering up MCs.

Character Design: Biggest failing of this story. I don't even know how the MC looks because because of lack of any details, except for his eyes. Author has the same problem in his other story (the spider man one). Only idea here that was interesting were the chakra beasts, and even that was messed up by the author.

World: Half the time I don't know where the MC is at. Practically no location is described in any detail.

Conclusion: Interesting idea, poor execution. View More
Reborn in the Narutoverse
8 months ago
Dropped the story. Couldn't take it anymore. Author wastes too much time with either blowing up mc's ego or flirting with underage girl. 3 Entire chapters just freaking talking with her and not moving the story along. I could (barely) get pass how enormously disturbing it is for a 1 year old baby to flirt with a 6 year old girl IF he didn't waste so many chapters just doing that. View More
Ultimate Legend Of Dragon Ball · C25
8 months ago
Reading Status: C89
DO NOT READ THIS FANFIC unless you're already prepared to be disapointed. Story's great up to around chapter 70, then it crashes and burns. MC's personality does almost a complete 180 spin from his usual calculist, cautious and rational, to rash, irrational and berserker. The ABSOLUTE WORST PART is that at chapter 89 the author decides to insert another trasmigrator who has all the knowledge of all spells, just to give a bull**** enemy for MC. Author's already made it pretty clear that he doesn't care about the reader's opinion. I wanted to give 1 Star because of time wasted, but his writting quality isn't bad and his update stability is regular. Seriously though, don't waste your time on this story. View More
Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin
8 months ago
Dropping this story. Not gonna flame it, just gonna say that this other trasmigrator bull**** doesn't work for me and seems like a REALLY lame attempt at giving the MC another enemy. Author doesn't even realize that the letter is a plothole, since if he had written it before all this, then he obviously would have known how everything was gonna happen. Anyway, I'm just sad that what was a good fanfic just crashed and burned like this. View More
Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C89
8 months ago
I'm kinda sad that the chapters' lenghts are getting smaller. View More
A Knight's Will. · C20
8 months ago
I did think that Nie Li's rejection of every other girl, besides Ye Ziyun, for most of the novel was incredibly annoying. It feels pretty satisfying to see a MC that gives them attention (If you know what I mean heheh). Letting Nie Li be in a relationship with Ziyun was a good move imo. Keep in mind that Ziyun's constant rejection of Nie Li in the novel had a lot to do with Xiao Ning'er's affection for him, so she shouldn't have as many reservations in your story. Anyway, can't wait for the next mass release. View More

Bisneto: I've read up to the 27th chapter and so far it's pretty good.
Very few mistakes; Fast paced development; Characters have their own personality; The 18+ parts are nice and not excessive in quantity; MC's personality is actually pretty realistic (though quite horny XD) for someone in his situation.
I don't really have any issues so far, except having to wait a month for more T-T.

Tales of Demons and Gods: Story of Red Moon Immortal (Hong Yue Xian)
8 months ago
Reading Status: C27
I've read up to the 27th chapter and so far it's pretty good.
Very few mistakes; Fast paced development; Characters have their own personality; The 18+ parts are nice and not excessive in quantity; MC's personality is actually pretty realistic (though quite horny XD) for someone in his situation.
I don't really have any issues so far, except having to wait a month for more T-T. View More
Tales of Demons and Gods: Story of Red Moon Immortal (Hong Yue Xian)
8 months ago
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