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Good chapter, keep up the good work. Not sure how you are planning to deal with the immediate stalker issue from the mage but i wonder if the Nyx powers because being X grade would allow him to have early access to skills back in his world. Would make it easier for him to deal with threats to his family in the early stages at least. Maybe even one of the Mythical chests provides an item that lets him masquerade as a different user or profile to hide himself in game.

keep up the good work. this has the chance to be really great.

I understand he wants revenge on many people but the overall cold attitude will make him a loner in the end...not sure if you plan to have him reach some kind of epiphany through the help of Leonel or someone else, but if he stays this way for too long he'll just become an unfeeling dictator. you can gain money and power without having to sacrifice your empathy and compassion. its just harder that way, though probably more rewarding in the end. just my thoughts.

Very cool idea. Interested to watch how hid interactions with key people and places alter the timeline. Does his system also allow him to gain longevity as well? Maybe as he grows stronger he is getting closer to joining the Pantheon himself. And fights with the Champions of other pantheons should be a good concept if you go that route. Might even help explain why so little (or no) magic exists today.

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