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in a new world where martial cultivation is everything... what will our protagist bo Cheng do when he finds out at his awakening ceremony on his 5th that he has no talent for cultivation. *new author,would appreciate good sugetions or constructive critsm on how I can improv my work. *not the drawer of the book imige if you are please let me know and I'll take it down.
univesity student shoto was on his computer waching anime when sudenly a pop up asking him if he can be any anime charachter,which one would he be. now we find little shoto crossing over to Tetsuya Kuroko's body with a system. Follow his adventure to stoping monster and creating his own harem. Authors note: my English isent so good so i might slip up with words here and there.please bear with it and comment on how I can improve or if there anything you would like me to add for example friends chrachters or potential harem members for kuroko. Disclaimer: I do not own The kuroko nor do I own High School DxD or any other non-original concept in this as it is directly copied from the fanfic Reincarnated As Kuroko they were created by There own BadAss Writer. They belong to their rightful owners and I am not making a profit of this fictional work and only doing it for fun. So if your enjoying this book leave a comment or a rating down bellow.
waking up in an unfamiliar environment we find our mane protagonist waking up in a cave deep underground chained,chains whiched looked similar to narutos mother kushinas adamantine sealing chains. The weird part of all was that right when he opens his eyes the first thing he sees is a 30 meters by hight and 100 in length giant green scaled snake staring at me with a glee in its eyes and the next moment that giant snake turned into a human with horns on top of her head mc"uuummmm who are you and were....." before our mc could even finish his sentence the great beauty in front of him ran straight to him grabbed his face and pushed it inbetween her breast while crying snake lady-san"maaaaaaaassssttttteerrrrrrrrr" mc"nnnnaaaaaaaannniiiiii"
SUPREME GODDESS :What do you desire? Money and wealth? Glory? Honour and pride? Authority and power? Revenge? Or something that transcends all of them? Whatever you desire I CAN GIVE. Now mortal what do you wish for. Mc:can you give me a drill. SUPREME GODDESS :???????,IM SORRY I DONT THINK YOU HEARD CORECTLY LET ME REAPEAT MY SLE.... mc:I heard you the first time and I said I want a my drill. SUPRRME GODDESS :'what's wrong with this stupid mortal.'"wh,why do you want a drill." mc looks at the supreme being and then at his transparent self.The mc was looking at something that the supreme being couldn't.In the middle of his chest there was the tiniest of swirls tho negliable to some it wasent to the him. The mc smiles And looks to the supreme godess with a smile so genuine even the supreme godess can't help but be mesmerized. Mc:ah ha ha hehe hahahaha,why I chose a drill over all others things I could have. well it's pretty simple really, it's because...it's because...I believe ... ........................MY DRILL IS MY SOUL..................... (AN"will anyone get the reference to what sort of powers he will have.")
This has a lot of the original danmachi plot but im adding my own character.which will be bells new familia. I'm just messing around with this one.im not gonna put my all but will make it as pleasantly readable as possible. Be warned that A lot of the words either come from the book danmachi, or the anime so I'm taking no credit in writing all of it.but I'm just putting my little spin on things. And BOTH my charachter and bell are THE MAIN FIGURES OF THE NOVEL. This isent a op mc charachter novel were he gets all the women then hops to another world to continue.but a moderately slow slice of life. so for those that want me to focus on the mc at the very bigning.It wont happen.i will only focus on the mc more later into the story.
This is a stretch so don't quote me on anything I might miss in the time line of jojos bizzare adventure as I've only just started to wach the series. Well mc dies and is reincarnated in the world of jojo with four wishes.
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Elude: Forgive me if there any mistakes in the review, I'm typing this out on my phone.
It appears that the author does not accept constructive criticism?
I read until chapter 20; while many others only read a few chapters before reviewing, so I hope you do not attack me for reading only '20' chapters when reviewing.
The grammar is subpar, to say the least, but the flow of the story is somewhat understandable and I can vaguely comprehend the general direction of the plot. Furthermore, the characters are like cut out cardboard figures with no real personality; it appears that they exist only to push the plot forward. Writing about a 'billion-year old master' is difficult, to say the least, when reading you somewhat expect for the MC to know of a limitless abundance of skills yet this not shown very well.
Are we supposed to expect for the MC to have only been sleeping for most of those years? To even try to believe that is extremely unrealistic and requires a very broad mind from the readers.
For a person who is writing to make money, the quality is honestly not high enough. I've read many other originals on the site which have far less publicity than this, yet those stories have a more defined plot and much better grammar/flow.
So, I'll try to give my review according to the general system of WN.
Writing Quality: 2.5, although the writing/grammar leaves something to be desired; it is somewhat understandable.
Stability Of Updates: 5, the updates have been punctual as far as I can see. (Although I'm not sure if the quality has dropped over time as I stopped at C20.)
Character Design: This is honestly a 1-1.5 for me, the idea of a 'billion-year-old' master is extremely badly portrayed. My personal feedback is this: Don't bite off more than you can chew, for your type of novel, the MC being designed as a legendary 50-100-year-old genius that once reached the peak would have been much better. Why? This leaves room for error, as it is extremely unbelievable for a billion-year-old monster to know such limited information. Furthermore, the way the MC acts is far too unbefitting of someone that ancient. But if the MC was only 50-100 years old which is still considered an elder in human terms, it allows us to actually have leeway in our mind to believe that the MC is human and can make mistakes; even though he was at the VERY PEAK of the ENTIRE universe in his last life. The side characters that I've seen up to C20 are also extremely plain, they exist solely for the readers to have a 'funny' and 'unreasonable' read when one is drunk and not thinking straight. This is fine for some, but not for me.
Story Development: As I've said before, extremely plain where the chapters are spewed out only to be 'there' yet with no essential plot or meaning. 2-2.5.
World Background: Although it's not fantastic, there is still a vague world I can picture while reading up to C20. - 2/5
Overall, this novel was extremely dull and boring to me which disappointed me greatly due to the number of 5-star-reviews, which made me feel a need to review this novel myself so as to balance it out. This novel's idea even though not crafted very well may appeal to some but not me. (I may have an higher expectation than your average reader which could be because I've been spoiled from the number of good novels — which naturally also includes originals, where the grammar is much better than this story and they also have very well-thought-out plot but have a lower rating/less popularity than this story.
This was just my 2 cents on this novel. (I primarily created this since the large number of 5-star reviews did not match the content I expected)Unsealing: Omnipotent Father
TheGirlWithCurls: Why. . . Did you kill him 😦Reaper Of The Wizarding World · C4
Elsontiger987: THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER.
Normally I would just yeet novels with bad grammer and sentences. But you'res is an exception. But that dosent mean you should slack off and not try to improve.
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Elsontiger987: I wanted to write both povs of kara and kai and improve my writing abit so I decided to do that for each chapter until the bomb arc ends then I would solely concentrate on kais pov. Sorry if you feel like kai is becoming third wheelyish. I'll change that the coming chapters.
Thanks for the comments.The flashes op twin brother. · C35
Baitlover99: First thanks for the chapterThe flashes op twin brother. · C35
Avery_Rogers: Hey dude you should be careful because with these kinds of stories when you leave the girls alone with each other too long it seems as if the Mc is a third wheel in the girls relationshipThe flashes op twin brother. · C35
kelpshake: Man is Kai even the mc anymore. Novel Should be called Supergirls boyfriend instead. It’s like being Barry’s twin had no matter at all to the storyThe flashes op twin brother. · C35
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Medusa17112001: Author-sama I just had a terrifying thought. U have said before that the MC is made up of Natural Chakra right and in essence a combination of Normal and Nature Chakra. What would happen if he were to change it to elemental chakra. For example Lightning, he would be like the logia user of Rumble-Rumble no mi in One Piece, he would be fast and deadly (Much better than Raikage's Lightning Armour) and intangible causing anyone to touch it to be paralysed and hurt (Much better than Obito's Kamui.U can also decrease the Chakra cost by drawing the Nature Chakra from the surroundings since it's not just a simple jutsu but a change to his entire body. Just like this u can recreate other logia powers. For example Lava and Ice. Thought I don't know what would happen if he combines all. Might be a Paramecia body of Six paths Truth Seeking Ball.The Uchiha-Senju Immortal · C18
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Zeffur: in your info of characters chapter, it said that boa hancock was gonna be a character and your having him draw one piece like wut?Kuroko in one punch man · C3
LoSap: This world is rotten.Said the guy who caught the deception and almost ate the poor lion who was the Manager of the test: / while saying that the beast is an evil thing:/Chains of Heaven · C14
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Elsontiger987: I have no words to say except for amazing. From the start I was already emersed in the storry. From the charachter design to the unique world background, everything is set perfectly.
Side charachter are used well and are fleshed out properly. Normally you would just skip side charachter poves, but here there actually enjoyable to read.
Update stability is good and so is the writing. All I can say is I definitely recommend you stay and give it a go.
**: Keep up the good work arthur.Felix's Classroom of the Elite
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