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  • My World To Live

    My World To Live

    Fantasy strong female lead slow romance Magic Adventure Psychological Mystery Action Spirits and Demons Reincarnation Mages Kingdom

    4.6

    Essairyn had never felt truly alive on Earth. It felt like something was missing ever since she born, but even after nearly 20 years of mundane living, she could never pinpoint what this or the emptiness in her heart was. Suddenly, she awakens in a grandiose, primordial forest and encounters both demons and spirits in a parallel world called Sol'h'meyr. She befriends, in particular, a sassy fox-spirit named Akari who just reincarnated after three millennia. Essairyn is an abnormal human with elemental powers, and Akari is being chased by those of her dark past. Together, they set out on an adventure in a world of magic, danger, mystery, and intrigue. But this not a game. That simple adventure is actually the modest beginnings in a chain of disruptions that tear even the dimensional fabric of time and space. No one, not even Essairyn, was who she thought she was. And not even the gods can change the destiny of the universes... A single promise shook eternity’s existence. — Fantasy || Adventure || Romance || Action || Mystery || Drama || Science Fiction — The My World To Live (MWTL) series, the alternative short name is Canaan, is comprised of three books symbolically named My World, To Live, and My World To Live. Two years prior, the entire story had been planned and detailed out from start to finish before actual writing. Thus, updates might be slow after a period of time due to real life matters, but the story will never be dropped. While the genre is largely Fantasy, the book is comprised of many other elements including a School Life (Magic Academy) story portion. MWTL has a lot of scattered symbolism and allusions, hence, the mystery aspect. The science fiction elements progressively become more pronounced, and the slow romance is a late bloomer. The female lead is strong and independent, and her backstory and identity unravel as drivers of the plot. Expect lots of action/fighting throughout and scattered philosophical and psychological themes arising. It's a human journey to find the essence of one's living and purpose. What kind of world do I wish to live for? Any feedback is greatly appreciated. I hope to share the journey with you~! **The book cover is an original artwork by Chryiss please don’t reuse elsewhere. Thank you~**

  • RE: Life as a Tree

    RE: Life as a Tree

    Romance

    4.8

    Rialyne (Ri-ah-line) was the laughingstock of her school--the fatty, the witch, the loser, the nobody. Ostracized, bullied, and pushed to the brink of insanity, her intense resentment led her to carry out atrocious deeds that led to her classmates demise as well as her own. She didn't ever think she would see the light of heaven if it actually existed, and she didn't want to see the cruel creator who dealt her such a luckless hand in life either. To bring everyone down with her, that was all she desired upon death. But as fate would have it, she reincarnated..... into a damn peaceful tree! What is this?! Retribution?! Join Ria on the journey to become the natural ruler of the world she so despised through a mysterious system. On the way, she makes amends with her dark self and unexpectedly finds love. However, no matter how powerful she becomes, she is but a tree... Will she rise up out of the ashes, or will everything end up in tragedy yet again? Writing Contest Prompt #62: Become a tree Forewarning: I'm literally writing this story on the spot because I thought the prompt was hella hilarious. Even though I'll try my best, if you really want a seriously written/planned out story, then read my other novel: My World To Live. Cheers!

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LIght_Novel_San: Thank you for your review Yey! Tenses are my weakness, and you hit it right! 😂

Quick Transmigration: Picked Up By Stud Horse System
3 hours ago

jensseng: This review is done as a swap. Although I’ve ready fantasy stories before, this story is still quite different from the fantasy stories I’ve read but in a good way. I guess I was expecting more of the typical xianxia novels since that’s what I’m used to reading. However, this novel gave me more of a RPG-feel, kind of like playing Final Fantasy.

Writing – 5/5
You have a good command of English and grammar. Your writing is succinct and accurately paints a picture of the world you are trying to create. Some few errors here and there but so minimum it’s negligible. I wish the chapters were longer but this is a personal preference since I’m used to reading longer chapters.

Characters – 4/5
Essairyn – She’s pretty easy-going, adventurous and curious, can fight when needed, and quick to adapt, although in a way I thought that kind of makes her a tad bit unrealistic. I understand the prologue was trying to paint how the heroine was bored by the mundane things on Earth, and has a yearning for something more exciting to happen. And then when she was transferred to this new world filled with magic, spirits and demons, it fulfilled the yearning for an adventure of hers. However, a tiny part of me couldn’t make peace with how it was so easy for her to let go of her life on Earth, especially her loved ones. In the beginning, I also thought it was quick how she just accepted this new world and kind of acted as if she was part of this world to begin with. After reading the chapter mentioning Cyrienne, I wonder if Essairyn has any relations to this god considering her ‘anomalies’. Maybe she was originally from Sol’h’meyr, which could somewhat explain her indifference (probably even excitement) in leaving Earth and her easy acceptance for this “new” world.

Akari – My favourite character actually. She’s kind of haughty at times but also really adorable as she tries to look out for Essairyn. At certain times though I feel a little suspicious of her character and intentions for tagging along with Essairyn. Especially since everyone’s been saying this fox has got a not-so-good reputation in the previous life. Anyways, I’m curious about the back story, about why she had to reincarnate so many times.

Darren – Honestly, I don’t know what to feel about him for now since he just appeared. I don’t know if his appearance is coincidental or for a reason, so I guess we will see. Although I have to say I find his reactions toward this whole new world more believable than the heroine.

Also, I think I got a bit confused with the boy named Gerran/Jerry. I was confused with the interchange of these two names.

Story – 4/5
As it is still fairly few in chapters, I can’t say much about the storyline other than the heroine and her entourage traveling the kingdoms and learning things as they go at the moment. I’m sure there’s something big the author is planning as the story progressed but so far, so good. I’m fine with the progression of the story as I prefer flushed out character development and taking time to build the world rather than fast-paced updates just for the sake of it.

World – 5/5
The author has put a lot of thought and effort into creating the world with its own language, places, species, government and political/magic system. It’s already hard to write a normal modern-day setting fiction but in a completely new world takes a lot of imagination so kudos to the author.

Updates – 5/5
In general I don’t have an issue with respect to original novels’ update since I know it’s not easy to write a novel. Sometimes there’s no motivation, writer’s block, life gets in the way, etc. I totally understand. For me, I don’t put much weight on rating update speed. Maybe it’s also because I have a whole bunch of novels to read so it’s actually better, for me personally, that updates are not too quick and spaced out.

All in all, I really enjoy this story and was pleasantly surprised because this is something different from the stories I usually read. This story makes me reminisce about the days when I still played Final Fantasy and the whole mystery/adrenaline of going on an adventure with the characters. So I’m definitely going to be following this story!

My World To Live
11 hours ago
Reading Status: C5
Updates, Character: 5
Writing, Story, World: 4

Firstly, I recommend making the chapters shorter for Webnovel at least. Most of the audiences on here aren’t used to this length, especially in the auxiliary chapters. Making them more bite sized can help readers comment better as well as help with stats a little. For example, you update more frequently with shorter chapters (1-2K words no more than 3K), and then it’s more consistent too. Lastly, the auxiliary chapters should be part of the regular ones. They were very much a part of the whole story as anything else and didn’t come across as Prologue-ish at all.

Character wise, you made the FL very brash and probably the most domineering one I’ve ever read. Her personality is well displayed and fleshed out; we hear her internal monologues; overall, very well done. I can’t say that I’m completely ok with her character; there’s still some iffiness I have. But that’s more personal than anything else. From a direct, general standpoint of creating characters that aren’t flat, you’ve accomplished that thoroughly. I do hope to see more character development though as she goes through these stories.

I’m also curious about the system. 008 is actually Eight who is her brother trying to keep her alive/restore her body through Virtual Therapy? Reminds me of SAO Alicization, and I don’t mind at all. I hope to see that clear up/their backstory become more manifest. (Hopefully I didn’t read this wrong, but I did get somewhat confused on what was happening. I only realized well after the auxiliary chapters that her missions were through fragments and stories. Seeing the initial stats sheet I thought this was a typical system transmigration novel, but you actually put a nice twist on it!)

So I sorta went through story a little in the parentheses lol. It’s an intriguing concept although unclear a little at first. Along with world building of the stories and the overarching story with Xi Sheng as herself, it’s pretty well done with good detail. The world information and backstories almost felt like info dumps at times, but it wasn’t quite that level of obvious or blatant for me to exactly say it was considering the story missions aspect of this novel. Also, I do wish the missions were clearer. I also wouldn’t mind more litrpg elements with ‘side scenario unlocked’ as a system announcement or something. The beginning made me expect that, but in total so far, there were only two stat sheets with basically no mention of anything really ‘leveling’ up. Regardless, you don’t really need to have more game elements, but then it doesn’t seem necessary to have the system be called as such, or even have the stats screen at all. I think this might work better this this type of multiple transmigrations story. But it can go either way with more or less elements, just some suggestions.

Ending with writing, (funny I usually mention this first in a review lol!) it was good overall. Nice description and imagery at times. The only errors were tense and sentence structure. It would turn lovely descriptions and word phrasing ideas into something kinda awkward; for instance, the first paragraph of chapter 3 (not counting auxiliary ones) iirc. The sky was nicely described, but the tenses and structure of the sentences were off. I tended to find these errors when usually describing things in more detail. With more general common things like when talking, this didn’t occur as much. Maybe grammarly could help, or someone confident and knowledgeable in grammar could too.

Overall, great work! This story is oddly more original than a lot that I’ve read so far despite it having a system and transmigration. A refreshing read! Keep it up! (: View More
Quick Transmigration: Picked Up By Stud Horse System
11 hours ago
Reread from 30 whee~

Pulled out her hair and is bleeding... Wow I wouldn’t be able to take someone ripping out my hair like that. I wouldn’t even let them close enough to do that. o_o Such pretty silver hair wasted eh. And Che Ling supporting her lol this boy.

Now she’s really going to catch all the girlies with her short hair too. XD View More
The Girl With Scars · C35
19 hours ago
Due to glitches the app before, I lost my placement in this story and didn’t realize until today that there were chapters I hadn’t read yet! 😱

Anyway, Yi Lan’s attitude is on point as usual. I also see that minister’s daughter liking her. XD Too bad, she’s a lady, I bet she’d get all the girls with her domineering style muaha! View More
The Girl With Scars · C31
20 hours ago
What’s going to happen? o_o Your A/N has me worried now.

Back to this chapter, I like the subtle details you put about Yeo Ri’s character, how she pretended to move to the teacup so she wouldn’t have physical contact with her grandparents. She seems to be the same as before the ordeal, but these details alone show how she can put on a farce. So sad to see someone young be so hardened like this. ): Great work yet again. I hope the sister can not be jelly and that the grandparents will be the familial love she needs, so she can slowly open herself up again.

Strange how they don’t know about their daughter’s death though. View More
Angel Smile · C201
20 hours ago
Reading Status: C9
Writing, Updates: 5
Character, Story, World: 4

The writing is good overall; the only real errors I saw were some missing periods at the end of sentences, but that’s minor. As for italics, sadly this site doesn’t have them in place for Original stories yet (silly right). I’m ok with the asterisks, but another common way on this site to indicate internal monologue without italics is through ‘single quotes.’

I’m not at all familiar with HunterxHunter, but I’d say that you did a pretty good job with introducing the characters! I also liked how you introduced them mostly in pairs rather than all at once or in a handful. That easily makes character identification difficult. But since you didn’t, I grasped/kept track of the characters pretty well overall. You also flesh them out to a decent degree, but I hope to see more of their distinct personalities and train of thoughts and motivations.

Plotwise, I feel like nothing really big has happened yet. This is also written in a more of Slice of Life style rather than the action I was sorta expecting from the name of the series this fan fiction is based. Again, don’t know it well, so this could very well be a null point to make, but a little more action doesn’t hurt for the non fan fiction reader who can’t pick up on the subtleties and humor of some non-action scenes like with the shopping and the dress.

World building, I wish for more description of settings and a basic overview weaved into the story about the premises of HunterxHunter, like what they do. Again, this isn’t necessary for people familiar to it, but as a general story for anybody, the clarification/set-up is missing a little.

I feel like I’d probably appreciate this more overall if I was familiar with the series, but from an outside perspective, you’ve done well! Keep it up! View More
Eva (HunterxHunter)
1 day ago
Reading Status: C15
Updates: 5
Writing, Characters, World: 4
Plot: 3

Firstly, the writing is good overall. I’m I don’t see a lot of weird word tense and phrasing. The only errors are minor, usually punctuational with the rare misspell (typing error it looks like).

Although the characters lack in thoughts and identification of their motivations and beliefs (inner mind and deeper personality), they’re described physically well and act in relatively distinctive manners. The biggest obstacle holding them back at this point is the plot.

While the world is pretty well established, it’s often in the form of info dumps. (I myself have this problem since I made mine really complex/detailed.) Whole chapters or almost the entire chapter, are dedicated to background on the world and its current situation with the beasts. More weaving of info snippets into the actual progression the story would be better as the chapters with actual fighting and action are the best.

At this point, the plot has moved very little. And at the end of the last chapters, it seems to deviate into lots of dreams—which I imagine are important considering the first chapter in MC’s past life, but they should be connected into one chapter rather than spread out in short passages. It’s hard to piece together what’s exactly happening/the significance of those dreams otherwise. —and a lot of time and perspective shifts. I’m a fan of allusions and mysterious characters that go initially unnamed, but there was a tad too much mystery for me to form a coherent idea of what was happening or had happened.

So with world info weaved into plot progression, restructuring of the mysteries and dreams, and character introspection, I can see this becoming a really good story—like the initial statement of making this story somewhat atypical of the isekai genre. Good potential, keep at it! View More
C: Summoner & Magic
1 day ago
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The CEO's Woman · C128
1 day ago

MoonlightTear: Ohohoho when Elder Wu discover that his company was taken by a "child" as he says, would he die out of rage ?

The CEO's Woman · C103
1 day ago

MartialRose: Option I: You do what I say.

Option II: You do what I say.

Sounds about right

The CEO's Woman · C103
1 day ago

Mitsumitsu07: omg Wu Sheng!!! please for the love of god do something about this crazy family of yours!!! don't be stupid! you're the only one with a brain in that family at this point, snap out of whatever it is your own man!!! drivin me nuts!

The CEO's Woman · C100
1 day ago

Winkiautumn: Oh no the whole family is crazy

The CEO's Woman · C96
1 day ago

Hutley: Let's see whether his friendship with you is more precious than his grandson.

The CEO's Woman · C96
1 day ago

Manas06: She is like mad, but at least her father is good not like fathers in other novels.

The CEO's Woman · C95
1 day ago

AbieMaze: First one that met him?
Damn this means the midwife that helped deliver Mama Fu should be the one marrying Jin.
So stupid.

The CEO's Woman · C95
1 day ago

MartialRose: So the dad knows his daughter killed her sister and did nothing about it.......what a loving father

The CEO's Woman · C95
1 day ago

AzuraPurple: This family is toxic, I mean the family knew about the murder yet they didn't do anything about it but instead cover it up. Argh. Trash!!!

The CEO's Woman · C95
1 day ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God · C1392
1 day ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
The CEO's Woman · C88
1 day ago

GraceMonts: Madam Fu is a total badass. Love her. Yeah

The CEO's Woman · C82
2 days ago

MartialRose: Madam Fu is officially my favorite character

The CEO's Woman · C82
2 days ago

GraceMonts: You’re probably the one that’s going to end up being scared, granny. 😂

The CEO's Woman · C80
2 days ago

DaoistKaname: 👿I HATE IT👿 when people won't stop bothering the main leads because they think they are important. Especially ones who basically abuse and or brainwash them for years and when they finally get away from them they keep trying to bring them back into their fold so that they can continue messing with them. Leave my main leads alone!!👿

The CEO's Woman · C80
2 days ago

ishimori1: Mother Fu proposed to father Fu? Truly a very decisive and bold woman. Love it!

The CEO's Woman · C79
2 days ago

LawreeseHale: Mother Fu!! I love your character so much😘😘😘!!! Can you adopt me? I'm willing be Jin's adopted sister... 😄😁😁😁

The CEO's Woman · C79
2 days ago

ifybaby03: 😂 I can't stop laughing what an interesting Mother in-Law

The CEO's Woman · C79
2 days ago

WhiteElephant: So he HAS a twin brother and that brother is JY’s father. Mind blown 🤯

The CEO's Woman · C71
2 days ago

ifybaby03: I think LQ has no idea dat JY is his biological daughter cos I'm suspecting there was a rift between WR &LQ so she probably kept d secret of her pregnancy away from him. Dat is why she wasn't bothered about JC's infidelity with his other family bcoz she had her own little secret to protect. Hmmmmmmmm what a twist 😕

The CEO's Woman · C71
2 days ago

skyIsBlue: I think li qiang is the relative of jiang yue's father... maybe the twin brother?? Cause he said some thing about 'that man's daughter' which we can guess refer to jiang yue. Gg this go deep 🤣🤣🤣

The CEO's Woman · C70
2 days ago
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