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Irina_Akashira: Ty for the update
If really was Danzo, the MC should take their bodies and remains with masks, and expose them before the Hokage
It doesn't matter if your fanfic world has elders, nija or civilian councils or whatever political setting you want
No one of them would help Danzo, if MC and Hokage get evidences to attack of the the own villages' teams
On the other hand, your MC was quite stupid to present himself as a sharingan user in this point
If I was in MC's place, I would have focused in training sensor skills, and then use sunglasses or covering my eyes, which I would can justify, if someone ask, to be training sensory skillsBecoming a ninja · C5
Peace12345: I hope he gets stronger than Itachi and just hides it. It would be awesome if he is way OP in a few years like your other stories MC. Also are you going to update that story soon?Naruto: Road To Godhood · C5
LucasVictor399: author he is a highest ranking seraph in an angel .... is his karma good? what are his skills? and please don't get ninya you already have a sister for himOverlord and the Seraphim · C3
H_Alex: Of course, you're right! But let me ask you just one question. Will you read a novel where female has her own male harem? Or will you find it... disturbing.
P.S. Occasionally I myself can enjoy a novel with up to four heroines. *It just shows my crappy taste.* However, it should never be the main selling point. Yes, there are authors that can combine such things flawlessly, but most of the time it just ruins a nice novel, turning it in a full-blown stage 3 wish-fulfilment.Overlord and the Seraphim · C3
Mirokawa: You did well in giving him a background of a PvP player, the next you should do is setup the power levels of Nazarick vs the denizens of that world (I.E what Momonga did vs Sunlight) and then follow it up with what kind of a PvP player Jack is (I.E he might like challenges or beating weaklings or just straight up outhinking people, but keep it in mind all of those are not mutually exclusive from one another)Overlord and the Seraphim · C3
ZGearCecil: Mainly to show the MC that someone has their eye on him, someone with powerful World Items.Overlord: Blue Citadel Alternate · C11
GreatWolf: Hmm more action in the lemon secne wouldve be nice but it's good so farOverlord: Blue Citadel Alternate · C6
fearlessj2008: that was a good lemon scene too bad it got blocked sort of since technically he still went inside her.Overlord: Blue Citadel Alternate · C5
JimmyBlah: I’M CRYING LAUGHING RIGHT NOW, FUCKIN MOMON WITH THE PERFECT TIMING 😂😂Overlord: Blue Citadel Alternate · C5
Zetheryl: The awaited lemon scene appears~「Obsolete」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction · C45
Nirvanic_Sun: Don't spread lemons out over multiple chapters. Every chapter that is just a lemon might as well be a few days without a chapter. We're 45 chapters in, I never expected lemons in this story, it just feels like the plot got delayed. Especially since it was just 20 paragraphs explaining them kissing「Obsolete」Blue Citadel: An Overlord Fanfiction · C45
Blasphemer: What a passive/eloquent way of saying **** off if you dont understand and just read.Doulou dalu: Reborn As Ma Hongjun · C7
KSt0n3: I am indeed rather carefree and lazy person but I am not gonna challenge bear even if I have superpower. About Oscar I was just commenting on commitment to be with single woman and how hard it should be.
Dong was raped by her trusted teacher and Renxue is raised by religious fanatic also her mother hates her. MC could get close to Renxue but Mother/Daughter God duo, now you're just crazy.
By the way I like where this story is going but really scared of it becoming Generic Harem Fanfic №XX.Doulou dalu: Reborn As Ma Hongjun · C7
Loli_in_Disguise: Yeah but both mother and daughter duo could easily be manipulated if you divert there hatred somewhere else right?
Also I'll try to make the relationship reasonable, but please dont expect a realistic relationship as that is way too hard for a beginner author like me lol.Doulou dalu: Reborn As Ma Hongjun · C7
Peace12345: This is kind of stupid. I was hoping to mainly stick to the original storyline at least until Shippuden where he would not need others to save his ass. Also powering up all the enemies does not really make sense when he literally wiped them all out in his timeline so he should not be that impressed with them. The kid being curious about him also does not make sense unless he is dead in the future and the kid does not know his father. Well this is all just my complaints since I never watched that crap called Boruto so I am not really sure if parts of this are canon.Naruto: Space-Time Lord · C43
Saint: he litteraly just came back in time.. and he already got a visitor from the future? really.. duhNaruto: Space-Time Lord · C43
Kain4less: Since main protagonist is demon she should get the ability to enslave females to her harem by marking them and breaking them since demons are about domination in sex play.Godly Devourer System · C29
I_love_Rem: Isaki, Irina, Clara, Tosca, Akeno, Kuroka, Kiyome, Kunou, Yasaka, Grayfia, Raynare, Asia, Rias..... Current thirteen who are officially in his harem... This is also the order in which they agreed to be in his harem...Reborn in DxD with OP Barrier and Enhancement Magic · C73
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