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1. Galactic Systems Alliance
Star Wars: Scion Of The Sun
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
8mth
Commented nice to see the mc acting smart instead since he knows this world follows more real world logic in some areas unlike the games and anime. though i wonder how he is going to grow if he avoids all the trainers by teleporting. he needs more real combat experience and team coordination if he wants to take on the gyms. though i guess unlike the games he can not just spray potion on them and fix every injury they would get from repeat battles. maybe he can learn to use the fairy move floral healing to help his team. and moonlight if he gets hurt himself. or catch a pokemon that can help with keeping his team healthy
ch 26 Infiltration.
The Journey of a Psionic Champion
Anime & Comics · BonAurevoir
8mth
Commented its only been a week or so since i started to read this but man this is an addicting story
ch 22 The Journey Begins
The Journey of a Psionic Champion
Anime & Comics · BonAurevoir
8mth
Commented I am glad to see our mc will try to train his fairy traits. psychic fighting and ghost type trainers seem to be the ones with the more obvious effects from strengthening there type so i am curious what you will have him strengthening his fairy aspect will have. only example i can think of is Valerie and her eyes. i know fairy makes you more likable(unless you are greeting a dragon) wonder if strengthening his fairy aspects will affect his innate charm. also i know you said ash is fairy type but wonder if they are duel with fighting type with his aura ability's we rarely see and his love of battle and battle smarts.
ch 21 A Birthday To Remember
The Journey of a Psionic Champion
Anime & Comics · BonAurevoir
8mth
Replied to drake2378 gyms. it cut that word off for some reason
ch 20 Quick Update: Changing the early pokemon from 10 to 14.
The Journey of a Psionic Champion
Anime & Comics · BonAurevoir
8mth
Commented i don't mind honestly. its better to make the story have a better timeline and fix things that don't make sense early on then to let them build up and make the story worse. was honestly wondering how he would with 5 years to work on his team with 2 strong starter pokemon. one a top contender on both psychic lines and fairy lines which he could make an apex pokemon on his own and one of the psudo legandary line how he would not just breeze through the first 3 or 4 gyms.
ch 20 Quick Update: Changing the early pokemon from 10 to 14.
The Journey of a Psionic Champion
Anime & Comics · BonAurevoir
8mth
Commented man this chapter added some extra depth for the mc. he will probably feel guilt for what he did for a good while. and dreepy fearing him maybe flinching or such in some interactions will make the mc feel regret going the fear angel. cause after all he was told to earn respect but instead of earning it the hard way of proving he deserves it he went with the short cut of respect through fear
ch 19 How To Train Your Dragon
The Journey of a Psionic Champion
Anime & Comics · BonAurevoir
10mth
Commented honestly like the way you write relashinships. at least its better then the majority on here that think mass harems are the way to go and significant others are things to be won. in my opinion those stories are not enjoyable as to me harems have a massive problem there will always be a favorite and least favorite and that is not fair to anyone. also if they have kids chances are the dad would care about his favorites kids more then his least favorites which is just awful. while even the best parents have a favorite even if they don't want too and feel guilt about it and will never say it this just magnifies the problem
ch 40 Chapter 39
Young Justice: Ghost
Anime & Comics · Arokey
10mth
Commented i wonder with him not being able to absorb all the orbs how many he has managed to stockpile
As a result of which, the number of orbs he was getting per day was becoming quite significant. Unlike before, Cain was not even able to finish off all the orbs he earned in one day by himself, as even he had a rate of digesting energy.
DC - Pocket Hunting Dimension
TV · Krishna_Is_Here
11mth
Replied to Carnic_321 i figured he could figure out his own version of it that resolves around mysteries instead of thaumaturgy since mysteries based magic in the age of gods is supposed to be more powerful since they are not constrained by what modern humans think is possible. that and the much higher levels of magic energy in the world. he could probably make a quiver that does it later on when he gets better at it
ch 33 [Workshop]
Fate/Defiance
Anime & Comics · theMadLad
11mth
Replied to Carnic_321 i mean he watched the fate series and with his eyes he could probably use projection and tracing like Shirou Emiya with enough experimentation and just custom make one super good unique arrow then use trace along with his eyes ability to understand anything he sees to just make more with magic. so he could have near limitless(based on how much magic he has at any given point) high quality arrows. and the spinning thing can be done with both cheap and high quality arrows
ch 33 [Workshop]
Fate/Defiance
Anime & Comics · theMadLad
11mth
Commented if charon could make an arrow spin maybe Ikares can make his arrows spin super fast on firing for extra damage. probably even shape the head of the arrow to make the process more effective. the bow is already powerful if he made more powerful arrows out of good materials and have the arrow rapidly spin he could have the arrows burrow deep into the boars flesh when he faces it in the future
ch 33 [Workshop]
Fate/Defiance
Anime & Comics · theMadLad
1yr
Replied to TanveerBilling2002 actually recently kubo stated hollows could have kids. whether he just meant aarancar since they are part shikigami who can have kids or hollows in general i have no idea
ch 56 Chapter 50 R-18
A Hollow in DC and Beyond.
Anime & Comics · Azazyel
drake2378
ch 0 7 Meeting the team?
Young Justice: Vampire
Anime & Comics · Master_Atlest