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Abaddon: Need a dark castle instance now, where the templars raid surrounding villages, and its up to the customers to stop their demonic rituals.

Number One Dungeon Supplier · C501
1 month ago
Reading Status: C393
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Chrysalis
2 months ago

Queue: Now he’ll never go thirsty. Great for desert exploration.

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C36
3 months ago

HeartPiercingSpear: I concur

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C36
3 months ago

ExodusGaming555: Rather then kidnapping him....... Why not kidnap his family and threathen him if he doesnt release fast and high quality novel lol

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C36
3 months ago

Tyyphoon: Ahh, someone has been reading too many web novels

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C36
3 months ago

Kaioner: The author has just stayed silent looking at this comment section.

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C36
3 months ago

Queros12: Author run, run for your life. I have the most perfect safe house for you. Equipped with a computer, a laptop, safe internet connection. They will never find you. mwamwamwa... I mean oh oh oh...

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C36
3 months ago

Will00: If you kill him he can no longer make chapters but if you kidnap him then you can make sure he works only on the novel

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C36
3 months ago

BookMaster: hey no worries... and for a creature... wait whenever i give you a creature in the chapter that it is in you will have to say you got it from me because i will only give you creatures that i have made up and drown... so any way the creature is a "Scor-olf-eal" it is half scorpion half wolf and half seal it has gills can live on land or sea can be a loner or live in a pack and if you raise one from a young age it will follow your every comand

The Dungeon Horde · C0
3 months ago

Gerrit_Valkering: I can't find a pm system here and I'm not going to type the mailaddress out so in two parts: gerritvalkering -yes, my name without a space- @yahoo.com. not sure about rules on this, forgot to check the tos on it so lets hope it works. It's an old mail I don't use anymore so I'm not worried about spam 😀

The Dungeon Horde · C0
3 months ago
Oh and yes ill read your story View More

Moonsshadow666: I appreciate all ideas please share if you have a idea for a monster

The Dungeon Horde · C0
3 months ago
I would love to have your help editing and fixing previous and future chapters please let me know how to get in touch with you View More

Gerrit_Valkering: Hey there. I admit I haven't actually read everything all the way to the end, it's a bit hard to slog through the text wall.

I've helped people out writing texts for school and college and I'd like to lend a hand. I'm quite good at adjusting the text without impacting the story, let me know if you're interested. In the meantime I'm going to scroll back up to read the rest.

Thanks for your writing!

The Dungeon Horde · C0
3 months ago
I appreciate all ideas please share if you have a idea for a monster View More

BookMaster: hey Moon are you still writing this?
i have some ideas for creatures and other stuff if you like.
and can you read my stories?

The Dungeon Horde · C0
3 months ago

Gerrit_Valkering: First off, I do enjoy the story and wish I could score it better, but if I'm honest this is as far as it gets.

Second, a tip: I read this story on a mobile app. Due to that, the insurmountable text wall becomes much more readable. I don't know if the same would apply to tablets, but on laptops or desktops the lack of proper punctuation and paragraphs will hurt.

The MC also seems to say everything he wants to say in one go, 'tell me about this, this and this, then list all the options for this'. This makes everything feel rushed and pushy.

Updates seem to have stopped, with no comment from the author if it is on hiatus, if it will resume or if it has been dropped.

The story is quite standard dungeon master type, but I do like dungeon masters who actually act like one and who use their brain more than the goodie goodie two-shoes beta dungeon masters.

The MC is more ruthless than others would make him, but I don't find it disturbing. He grew up isolated, discarded and owes nothing to other people. When you're looking through a screen it's easier to watch someone get injured. Don't know if he'd wield the knife himself though. The MC is, however, the only actual character so far. There are a few potential candidates for more development, but at this point in the story he is the only 'person' and still underdeveloped. Some of the candidates are monsters.

I kinda like the world. After apocalypse earth, with a mix of fantasy and technology. Extra credits for getting the army involved, it shows the author remembers that this is a world that knows to look after itself and doesn't take the appearance of any dungeon for granted. The monsters are also summoned from somewhere 'real' and not out of thin air, I look forward to the troubles and complications this can cause.

My tips for the author is to first unravel the old chapters. Either do it yourself or ask help from someone you know, or ask help from someone online. Paragraphs and punctuation matter.

A conversation has a tempo, the MC can ask for them in turn, ponder on the answer, consider his options for a second and ask his next question.

The Dungeon Horde
3 months ago

BookMaster: hey Moon are you still writing this?
i have some ideas for creatures and other stuff if you like.
and can you read my stories?

The Dungeon Horde · C0
3 months ago

Time_Dragonlord: That last bit made me laugh pretty hard

Rise of The Undead Legion · C280
5 months ago
Best comment ever lol View More

SlimCrack: A staff in one hand and a bukbuk in another. Ultimate close combat summoner !!!

Taming Master · C33
6 months ago

SlimCrack: A staff in one hand and a bukbuk in another. Ultimate close combat summoner !!!

Taming Master · C33
6 months ago

_Alex: summoner class is literally a dark souls Pokemon game that I always wanted

Taming Master · C21
6 months ago
Amen my friend View More

crackedcacti: I’d sign my army over too if I could get an iron man suit

Number One Dungeon Supplier · C406
6 months ago

crackedcacti: I’d sign my army over too if I could get an iron man suit

Number One Dungeon Supplier · C406
6 months ago

HeartPiercingSpear: pandas keep him down

Number One Dungeon Supplier · C389
7 months ago

NomadicFenrir: STILL WAITING FOR DA ZIs STATS! I SHALL WAIT FOR AS LONG AS IT TAKES!!!

Monster Pet Evolution · C317
8 months ago

SmellyToes: FROM NOW ON, I'M GONNA VOTE THIS NOVEL EVERYDAY. HOPE IT SOMEHOW BECOMES PREMIUM AND PEOPLE HAVE TO UNLOCK THE CHAPTERS TO READ SHIT PFFFTTTTT

Book of Answers
8 months ago

Nashi: Best story I've read on here, the biggest problem I had with it is the Harem. To each their own, but I rather enjoy it when they develop romance between two people rather than 41 different women.

For a first chapter it was the most action packed, jaw dropping action filled chapter that I've seen. I've never seen someone put so much drama into a few pages!

Book of Answers
8 months ago
Its the us army what did you think would happen he's weak as **** right now it was more bargaining for his life then taking advantage of the situation View More

Primalgod: Uhhh he lost massively in that contract wtf

The Dungeon Horde · C0
8 months ago

heartburst: Having the same dedication as ant in humans and keep humain brain speed would change profoundly the structure of our society, i don't think that we would progress fast as today in science stuff (except if the queen ask so) we would be and for a world without war we would need that there is only one queen(ant-like with a huge busyness district) if non the différants species of ant-man whould fight each other like forever, but the strength of a such society would heavyly depend of thep "political" power of the queen over her children and the intellectual power of the queen and her mindset (ex: écologie is super important) (that would be feminists paradise in a sense because male die early and the totality of job with responsability would be done by a femelle)

Chrysalis · C265
8 months ago

VaishnavC: Back to the meddlesome one again?

Chrysalis · C265
8 months ago
Great chapter View More
Chrysalis · C264
8 months ago
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