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Another shit story made like a Chinese keyboard warrior wrote it.

This would be really good if it were not a typical “skip a couple paragraphs” keyboard warrior book.

This is a true gem. Unlike most, if not all recent “system” genre novels, this one makes things truly interesting and immersive. From the initial revenge development, to the self improvement and intellect in what is tantamount to kingdom building process. This author brings some truly fascinating blends of the modern era technology and the “magi-tech” of not only this current civilization, but also that of other possible civilizations throughout the universe/multiverse/epochs/eons. The only detriments could be found in the editing of the writings, this is evident in sentence wording including: redundancies in the authors thoughts and what appears to be overly verbose explanations; which could easily be rectified with a little bit of proofreading. All in all a great read. Every chapter release feels like a good cliff hanger as it makes me sad there are only two chapters released a day. I truely look forward to what comes next, as there is so much potential for development whether through the continuation of this book or others using it as a base to branch off in the future. -To the Author May your imagination continue to soar and your inspiration never cease as embark on your journey as a writter and in everyday life. Be well.

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