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Deadrick

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2019-01-04 Joined United States

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Deadrick
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Deadrick
Commented
So, nobody finds it weird that there are cameras in patient rooms?

Director Huang hurriedly said, "Don't be anxious. This matter has nothing to do with our hospital. After checking the surveillance cameras, we learned that a masked man entered your sister's ward and destroyed the camera inside. He should be the one who did this!"

Global Job Change: Starting With The Hidden Job, Lord Of The Death

Global Job Change: Starting With The Hidden Job, Lord Of The Death

Games · Frozen Tenderness

Deadrick
Replied to Ceaseless_Voices
he got them from a quest, 3 of them

Ning Shi did not dare to be careless. He took out an armor-piercing arrow and put it on the bow. He held it in his mouth but did not fire.

I Have A Game Clone

I Have A Game Clone

Games · This Fisherman

Deadrick
Deadrick
Commented
as long as the demon is slumbering they are good. only one man could fight the demon and win

"Thanks, but we have to go. In which direction is the city of Xaanth?" Kigan looked around for the exit from the underground cave.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Deadrick
Replied to Khollan_Da_Esky
auto correct changed it on me

Well, that is to be expected. They can't have some dodgy malaka discovering my true identity and coaxing me into a fight to regain my lost status.

How to Raise Your Regressor

How to Raise Your Regressor

Fantasy · Anit666

Deadrick
Commented
diseased, not deseased

"They are living in poor conditions, deseased, starving and are in rags, though from what I have seen, the town is exactly the opposite."

A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world

A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world

Sci-fi · SagelyDaoist

Deadrick
Commented
frown, not grown

Michalina helped Ryan drink some water, who then spoke with a grown, "ugh, the water tastes so bitter, yuck."

A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world

A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world

Sci-fi · SagelyDaoist

Deadrick
Replied to Tarbo
think "join this one" would be what the author is looking to say
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Super Necromancer System

Super Necromancer System

Fantasy · John_Doever

Deadrick
Deadrick
Commented
Ryan ran*

Ryan as fast as he could, but the creature was gaining on him when suddenly a door appeared in front of him.

A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world

A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world

Sci-fi · SagelyDaoist

Deadrick
Commented
were waiting *

Captain Estar, the new second in command, led the way through the army base to the inner courtyard where the rest of the soldiers was waiting for them. Enough long rectangular benches had been set near similarly shaped tables to accommodate them all.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Deadrick
Commented
were waiting, not was, was is singular were is plural

Captain Estar, the new second in command, led the way through the army base to the inner courtyard where the rest of the soldiers was waiting for them. Enough long rectangular benches had been set near similarly shaped tables to accommodate them all.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Deadrick
Replied to IP2
that makes more sense
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Limitless: The Evergreen System

Limitless: The Evergreen System

Fantasy · IP2

Deadrick
Commented
but non should be but none in the middle of the paragraph
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Limitless: The Evergreen System

Limitless: The Evergreen System

Fantasy · IP2

Deadrick
Commented
but non should be bit none in the middle of the paragraph
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Limitless: The Evergreen System

Limitless: The Evergreen System

Fantasy · IP2

Deadrick
Commented
"would being about" can be "would be about"
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Limitless: The Evergreen System

Limitless: The Evergreen System

Fantasy · IP2

Deadrick
Commented
you want "he knew better" here, and I think you want now instead of bow in the sentence prior
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Limitless: The Evergreen System

Limitless: The Evergreen System

Fantasy · IP2

Deadrick
Commented
what is thar supposed to be?
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Limitless: The Evergreen System

Limitless: The Evergreen System

Fantasy · IP2

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