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Came back to leave another review after my previous one was deleted for being too low of a score. Any novel with three pinned comments is hoghly likely to be garbage, and this one is no exception. Not to mention one that has to delete reviews to keep its score afloat, as if reviews on this site even mattered. Nothing else needs to be said.

Massive amount of grammatical and punctuation mistakes, without even mentioning the glaringly obvious terrible mastery of capitalization. The only review I can give this novel: unreadable. When half of the novel is written in capitals, it really detracts from the story. The plot might be fine, but I would be surprised if you retained more that 20% of new readers by chapter 10. It’s simply that off-putting. The content of the story is simply not outweighing the chore of reading your story. Regardless whether people are looking for actual plot or simply lemon, its not worth a read. You just simply cannot get immersed in a novel with such unprofessionalism as this. Author, seeing your responses to other reviews, it seems you dont take negative reviews very well. I’d recommend you to heed some of the advice from your negative reviews. Your current chapters need massive amounts of editing, and simply ignoring it and continuing to write more chapters is fool’s play. Hope to revisit your novel another time and be surprised, as small a chance as that may be.

The first volume was fairly engaging desite being dragged out a fair bit. Apart from a massive mistake regarding the MC’s flaw, the rest of the first volume didnt really any glaring plotholes and such. However, that being said, it certainly feels like the author lost track of what is important in the story. The MC’s ability never changes and it feels like the entire story focuses on what I can only presume is the FL. The key moment for me was the beginning of the second volume, where the story just showed that the author was dragging things out and making cliche scenarios that no readers care for. After such a long and dragged out plot, for the second volume to be the same plot, just adds fatigue to the reader. Not to mention the MC remains this side character all the way past the first 100 chapters. Who is the MC? Why is no character development happening? These are the things have gradually annoyed me and led me to drop the book. All in all, it just feels like the author lost sight of the story, who is actually the MC, and is seemingly too focused on drawing the plot out rather than writinng conclusive endings to plot arcs.