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This week I'm typing my first book...same as last week.

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well, I figured out the 'how'. you have a bunch if creepy dudes remove and replace their clothing. But WHY?! I have been in a few instances where I was required to change clothes. It would be faster and easier to have them change their own clothes. What purpose does it serve changing their clothes for them? If it is so they don't see the rags vs expensive clothing, that is thrown out quickly as they immediately start setting up a 'powerful' vs 'weak' dynamic which threw out any benefit of them being equalized by the use of uniforms. It just sits as CREEPY, which is why I felt the Why was more shocking than the How.

The green plain was not the only thing the students saw. There were three futuristic, huge buildings directly in front of them. The buildings were human images sculpted entirely out of glass. Each one stood at least sixty feet tall, but that was not the only thing that the field overlooked. They were standing on an elevated platform with a city in front of them, a hidden city. Everyone was already dressed up in a military uniform and there were technological marvels appealing to them all.

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Fantasy · JKSManga

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your mother was a banshee!

The ten soldiers that Leo had been training how to use Qi, started to run past the knight in a line. The knight wanted to intercept them, but Erin wasn't giving him any chances. He might be able to heal such a wound, but he had a bad premonition that turning his back on her might lead to a fatal outcome for him.

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Wow. Daughter calls her dad "General".

"Fine, fine whatever you want, how can I say no to my daughter."

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Fantasy · JKSManga

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Replied to Leo_Franklin
an item / ticket / couple in a relationship dating lovers / in love seeing each other sharing a bed hot for each other inseparable oh so many terms that have similar meanings.

While Quinn walked down the hallway, he got quite a few looks from the other students, it wasn't strange to see someone carry an injured person in the school, but it was strange for a boy to carry a girl unless they were an item.

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chapter one. No friends, a girl distances herself and is mocked for being near him. Now, he takes the same position as that girl had, wanting to distance himself to not be associated with the guy.

Looking at the people around them, Quinn could tell what the others were thinking. It was on their faces. Instinctively, Quinn moved away from Vorden, hoping that others wouldn't mistake the two of them as friends.

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wait, the 500 new arrivals are all dressed in uniform?! How? no even better: Why? getting recruits to change clothes quickly helps to indoctrinate them to do everything quickly... follow orders quickly. You changing their clothes while they are unconscious... just creepy and time consuming. wait did they have a machine for that? Again, why? If you have a machine that can undress and dress 500 people, why? Would you even need the people? Or are they actually all connected in a VR thing and are actually all not there?

The green plain was not the only thing the students saw. There were three futuristic, huge buildings directly in front of them. The buildings were human images sculpted entirely out of glass. Each one stood at least sixty feet tall, but that was not the only thing that the field overlooked. They were standing on an elevated platform with a city in front of them, a hidden city. Everyone was already dressed up in a military uniform and there were technological marvels appealing to them all.

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