kingotaku
Lv 4- Joined Jan 2019
- Senegal
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i'm just an african who likes anime , manga , and novels
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A Yonko level first mate
Our Mc Peter is sent in the world of ONE PIECE with three wishes as luffy's twin brother . Let's watch as make his way to the top as the straw hats first mate . disclaimer : I do not own One Piece or any charachter coming from it
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I've been sent back
Our mc was sent back in time . before the big event called "the beginning" and this is his new story
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The Demon Pirates
If you were thrown to the One piece world after dying. Obviously you would want to be the best and live a free life . In that case let's watch how our MC Moustapha Ndoye will work his way to prove that he is the strongest . schedule : One chapter every 2 days . The picture is not mine if the owner don't want me to use it e can tell it to me and I'll remove it .
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Chikao's Chronicle
As a person chosen to become a god Moustapha Ndoye or Chikao Morow now will have to train hard and prove himself worthy of the title of a god. Let's watch the story of the young man transmigrate in the Narutoverse to become a god. ..................... English is not my first language, it is not even my second one so I hope you could give me pointers about my grammar mistakes. ................... At the end of each chapter I hope you guys can give some ideas to write. I won't write a Harem, only one girl will be with the mc and he is in the same promotion as Kakashi and Obito. .................. I will stop writing other novels until I get far with this one. I'm going to write one chapter per day, but on some day I may not write anything so if that happens I'm gonna make it up to ya'll with another one. ................. And please write reviews about what you really think about the story. I'm open to critics as long as they are justified. Thank ýou in advance. ................. I'm out ?
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kingotaku: I like the way you started the novel and I think that you can improve further by just concentrating to the main story.
I'm not saying you're not but for the future refrain from doing many filler chapter.
I'm not a good reviewer and I'm only saying this for my enjoyment, it may sound selfish but hey who isn't...
I really like it dawg so try not to drop itRETRY: Going Back in Time to Play Basketball
Heavenly_Devil: And, I meant that everything in Kakashi’s childhood was a big plot hole
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Heavenly_Devil: The Mc talking about there being a plot, is hilarious! Didn’t you know that Kakashi childhood was a big plot hole?
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Heavenly_Devil: The Mc talking about there being a plot, is hilarious! Didn’t you know that Kakashi childhood was a big plot hole?
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ShadeofOblivion: Really good work, just missing things about his life before he dies(like his age). And I would like to ask you to use the metric system alongside the american, it's gonna help a lot.
RETRY: Going Back in Time to Play Basketball
Deepsea: A good start for sports story. With no instant OP MC 4 chapters in. Will update this review as more chapters comes up. For now...good work author san, keep it up!!
RETRY: Going Back in Time to Play Basketball
I'm not saying you're not but for the future refrain from doing many filler chapter.
I'm not a good reviewer and I'm only saying this for my enjoyment, it may sound selfish but hey who isn't...
I really like it dawg so try not to drop it View More
RETRY: Going Back in Time to Play Basketball
Pripriri: It feels like Mc will die when he won't teach techniques on other people. That really makes me dissapointed. Can't he just make his life stable first and then teach people some OP techniques??? He just got there in narutoverse and he just train for 3 weeks and I find it acceptable but teaching techniques when you are still weak thats really annoying.
I'm sure those brats will tell their parents he teach them those techniques and hokage will observe him again and again.. And more annoying is Mc is saying he doesn't want konoha to get stronger but he don't want it to get destroyed..
And if he want to become strongest in that world then he can just become alone wolf no need for companions no need babysitting peopleChikao's Chronicle
dragons_fire: The knowledge of the future is as big of a plot armor as I’ve ever seen...
Need a technique, or ability?
It’s in the future!
(The author can literally pull a technique out of his a*s, and blame it on future knowledge...)Chikao's Chronicle · C0
dragons_fire: The knowledge of the future is as big of a plot armor as I’ve ever seen...
Need a technique, or ability?
It’s in the future!
(The author can literally pull a technique out of his a*s, and blame it on future knowledge...)Chikao's Chronicle · C0
But hey if you have more critics or suggestions I'm open you can say it. It's gonna help have more idea and correct myself to make the story better View More
Pripriri: It feels like Mc will die when he won't teach techniques on other people. That really makes me dissapointed. Can't he just make his life stable first and then teach people some OP techniques??? He just got there in narutoverse and he just train for 3 weeks and I find it acceptable but teaching techniques when you are still weak thats really annoying.
I'm sure those brats will tell their parents he teach them those techniques and hokage will observe him again and again.. And more annoying is Mc is saying he doesn't want konoha to get stronger but he don't want it to get destroyed..
And if he want to become strongest in that world then he can just become alone wolf no need for companions no need babysitting peopleChikao's Chronicle
But hey if you have more critics or suggestions I'm open you can say it. It's gonna help have more idea and correct myself to make the story better View More
Pripriri: It feels like Mc will die when he won't teach techniques on other people. That really makes me dissapointed. Can't he just make his life stable first and then teach people some OP techniques??? He just got there in narutoverse and he just train for 3 weeks and I find it acceptable but teaching techniques when you are still weak thats really annoying.
I'm sure those brats will tell their parents he teach them those techniques and hokage will observe him again and again.. And more annoying is Mc is saying he doesn't want konoha to get stronger but he don't want it to get destroyed..
And if he want to become strongest in that world then he can just become alone wolf no need for companions no need babysitting peopleChikao's Chronicle
Tensei_Rigan: Bad troll... My MC can one shot your 5 years old Kakashi...
Reborn as Neji Hyuga with a system
I really enjoyed them so ho check out if you didn't . View More
A Yonko level first mate
cycloraz: I don't think you committed any sin, actions are judged according to their intention besides it's just a story and there are 99 names of Allah so I don't think you using Allah which also means God counts as a sin, it is your intention that matters
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Akagami_no_Shanks: Exactly... I even often hesitate to write fantasy to fear of doing shirk unconsciously, this isn't a game.
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Akagami_no_Shanks: StarfAllah... dear brother I don't think what you did is good... I wrote multiple fanfic but it never crossed my mind to mention Allah like this, may He forgive us.
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Drunk_dragon: You do realize that there is no reincarnation in Islam but for the sake of the story I shall overlook it. Not bad though it looks unique
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Wolfbine: Balance of the two
Also what’s the update schedule going to be likeChikao's Chronicle · C0
Aknalogya_El_Layto: [ ► I do not know what to say ... this is strange •_• .... This is the first time I read novel like this one ... but it is not too bad, I enjoyed it ... upload soon please ◄ ]
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Aknalogya_El_Layto: القصة حلوة استمر. مصطفى احسك جايب العيد صح xD . . .. .
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And I'm inviting you to read my other novel " The Demon Pirates " . View More
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Yup that's me and I hope you enjoy this terrible novel of mine View More
The Demon Pirates
SUNNY2346: Devil Fruit- Moa Moa no Mi
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