Badges 3
Moments 179
2yr
Commented It seems you got chp 22 and 21 mixed up, you should swap them and fix that.
ch 22 An Ambush of Horrific Proportions
Damien Nightshade The Villainous Vampire
Fantasy · XKARNATION
2yr
Replied to DaoistBsBz8Q You also need to work on your grammar if you really think there are no errors...
ch 167 Union Head
The Ruined Death Knight
Fantasy · Allenheim
2yr
Replied to Lord_Bell Oh, one last thing, you didn't mention it happened to the mc, that's kind of a big deal.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
Marvel: Darkclaw Origins
Movies · Lord_Bell
2yr
Replied to Lord_Bell I didn't even register there were 4 stars there until you told me and I went back to look.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
Marvel: Darkclaw Origins
Movies · Lord_Bell
2yr
Replied to Lord_Bell You're right I should of somehow known what the four stars were...
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
Marvel: Darkclaw Origins
Movies · Lord_Bell
2yr
Commented I liked it when he finished his revenge and cut all ties. This chap ruins that... I guess I should have been prepared for this though based on the title.
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Replied to Kido_TO That's not true, plot armor refers to things that make no sense in the scope of what is happening, like things that come out of the blue, out of no where to save the mc... It's not plot armor if it is built up and falls in line with the story.
ch 144 Defeating Death!
Consuming Earths, Devouring Skies
Eastern · KevinAscending
2yr
Replied to Absolute_Author Maybe, but what about the pain power? I thought he feels no pain and can even send it back or something?
ch 25 Red Snow - Sunstone - Breakthrough - Cedric's Greed
The Fated Omega One
Fantasy · Absolute_Author
2yr
Replied to Absolute_Author Well you make your mc seem like an alpha but then you give him beta moments, also his powers for some reason don't always work for whatever reason I may or may not have missed. And I personally don't like when obvious threats are ignored and then the mc gets beat by someone as if surprised, when he should have known the entire time.
ch 25 Red Snow - Sunstone - Breakthrough - Cedric's Greed
The Fated Omega One
Fantasy · Absolute_Author
2yr
Replied to Mel_Aniv So he's going to teach bandits how to get stronger so they can hurt innocent people better?
ch 0 5 Farming Village
Grandmaster Of All Job Class
Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
2yr
Commented Are you serious, no wonder this never became popular... Whelp good luck, I'd put a review but I bet it'll just get deleted.
ch 25 Red Snow - Sunstone - Breakthrough - Cedric's Greed
The Fated Omega One
Fantasy · Absolute_Author
2yr
Commented So far the MC has been very disappointing, to put it mildly.
ch 20 Eventful Morning - Unreasonable Jealousy - Affection - Intervention - Portal to the Spirit Mines
The Fated Omega One
Fantasy · Absolute_Author
2yr
Replied to Pool_Swimmer I can't believe I missed this review, wish I saw it earlier.
2yr
Replied to Ailzonius It seems you missed a big portion of what I wrote or choose to ignore it, either way it's fine just write however you want don't worry about me. Not like I said anything all that negative anyways, don't let me stop you from writing about kids if that's what you want, it's just not for me.
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Others · Ailzonius
Wallker
ch 24 Blood Race!
Heavenly World of Killing: I Can Extract Everything!
Fantasy · OmniPrime