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  • Devolved: Path Of The Beast

    Devolved: Path Of The Beast

    Fantasy Evolution

    4.0

    (Novel is currently on pause and is being rewritten.) [Does host wish to integrate DNA?] [Does host wish to evolve?] Michael is reincarnated into another world with the ability to evolve. However, this process strengthens his body but destroyes his mind. For he will see them again. Even if it means throwing his humanity away. (This is my first novel! If you want more then don't forget to vote! :) (Plan on building up the story with several different mythologies and folklores. But please beware that the first two volumes mainly consist of character/power development. Hell truly breaks loose in vol.3)

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I completely agree with everything that you say, Elano. However, I want you to know that I have learned from my mistakes. The story is currently put on hold, as I am planning on rewriting everything from start to finish - And hopefully create something worth remembering.

Either way, thank you for the comment! And I hope you have an amazing day! View More

elano77: Author, I have to be honest, with the developments I've seen so far, it seems like you have tried to force the story to go in a particular direction.

1. The inconsistencies with MC's character. In his previous life, his overly trusting nature and faith in others made him lose his life. That, combined with the fact that he learnt to be strong to do what he wants, paints the picture of a person with a warm heart, forced by circumstances to act in a certain way. Yet, when his new life starts, you paint him out to be this cold, uncaring person who seeks to 'use' Marss and only lets him live to that end. That is the personality of a psychopath. So are we to believe that his personality received a reboot as well as this second life? That he is a completely new person? This pinches further bc his only motivation to do all this is to reunite with his family. And yet he cannot even empathise with his host and his family's circumstances? Not only is that dumb, it feels forced and creates a flawed MC from the get-go

2. The contract with Jenkins. Given the above, it is unclear why Michael chooses to enter the contract. There is no specific benefit to him and his goals whilst it seems, in this chapter, that he is helping Jenkins out alot. Michael has no guarantee that Jenkins will do as he says or that he even has the capacity to and with his powers, he could pretty much absorb all the creatures anyway. As to whether Michael would lose his life if he didn't or whether Jenkins would look for ways to deal with him if he didn't, using that as his motivation to enter the contract sets a bad precedent. Does that mean that, going forward, anyone who threatens MC can enter a contract with him? Seems like a stupid standard to set to me. What the acceptance of the contract in the way you have portrayed it, does is not only does it paint your MC in a bad light, it also gives us little reason to care about him bc we cannot see the logic of his actions. He supposedly has life experience and is apparently very strong in his old world. Yet despite being betrayed by his most trusted individual, he signs a contract of partnership with a person whose character he doesn't know and who has only displayed the desire to kill him as well as killing the host's mother and trapping her soul for good measure, all this not even a week into his new life. With his little understanding of magic, the contract could easily be a way to dupe him. Very easily. I hope you can see how this makes a stupid MC readers do not care about. It is enough to make anyone drop your novel very early on.

3. The sudden trust in Jenkins. I do not think I need to point out how forced this comes across. It makes MC seem like a naive child and not a grown man.

I like that you tried to do smth different I just think you executed it poorly. I will stick with the story for now bc I believe it and you are something special, Mr Author, but if you carry on this way, I'll have to drop it and recommend others do the same.

Devolved: Path Of The Beast · C16
1 week ago
Lith: (Opens warp gate)
Vexal: (Opens eyes) "Why do I hear boss music?"

Another wonderful chapter, Legion! And as amazing as always! View More
Supreme Magus · C256
1 week ago

LuciFallen: "I would I was crazy, Then I use th reversal card and said no u." That's how this chapter was made

Devolved: Path Of The Beast · C80
2 months ago

god_of_wheat: Thank to you for the chapter

Devolved: Path Of The Beast · C81
2 months ago

sockery4: Also, first

Devolved: Path Of The Beast · C81
2 months ago

sockery4: How will Michael survive this encounter?
Who is the horned guy?
When will we get the another chapter?

Find out next month on Devolved ball z!

Thank you for the amazing chap. Author!!

Devolved: Path Of The Beast · C81
2 months ago

Genard: I feel really bad for Michael, he faced enemy after enemy 😭.

Devolved: Path Of The Beast · C80
2 months ago

sockery4: I thought I was hallucinating at first. But heaven truly is fair!

BTW, don't worry author. The wait was worth it! :)

Devolved: Path Of The Beast · C80
2 months ago
Haha, thank you😂😂 View More

sockery4: I thought I was hallucinating at first. But heaven truly is fair!

BTW, don't worry author. The wait was worth it! :)

Devolved: Path Of The Beast · C80
2 months ago
Thanks! It means a lot View More

faisalbudeiri: Welcome back and don’t worry you and Michael deserve the wait

Devolved: Path Of The Beast · C80
2 months ago

faisalbudeiri: Welcome back and don’t worry you and Michael deserve the wait

Devolved: Path Of The Beast · C80
2 months ago

CaptKay: I can't believe I haven't reviewed this book. It's as good as oxygen. Got me addicted and satisfied. However, your updating pattern is really discouraging nowadays. In all, it's a great story to follow up on.

Devolved: Path Of The Beast
2 months ago
Thank you for the chapter! View More
Transition and Restart · C233
3 months ago

god_of_wheat: After reading 25+ chapters of this story I can finally get a proper review of it. it starts of quite well, slowly building up towards the peak at around the dungeon part. I love how to story flows and how the character gets op, but it seemed to go too fast for the explained power system in my eyes. HOWEVER, I now feel it will open up much more, giving the character a real 'video game' start. The humor gives me a good chuckle and laugh from time to time, and seeing how the Mc changes (mentally and physically) could have been executed to an even better degree, but was still satisfying. as for the world, I am VERY satisfied by how much detail is being put into the different animals and species of 'Farleng'. The grammar has gotten better, but I still find minor things here and there. I hope to see some progress and development from our Mc and his companion, and romance would maybe ad a sort of balancing element for the story as a whole. Can't wait to see more.

(This novel deserves to be much higher than it should be. It it truly is a *hidden gem* in my eyes)

Keep it up author!

Devolved: Path Of The Beast
3 months ago

XanTheInsane: Ah the rhyming hunter from before.

Devolved: Path Of The Beast · C79
4 months ago

SouthToiletWizard: It's the end of the world and the captain doesn't have permission? No he is being stingy lol

Global Evolution · C37
4 months ago

HeavenlyHeaven: I have DESCENDED

Global Evolution · C36
4 months ago

Legion20: I am sorry, but when i wrote longer chapters in the past, ppI complained that they costed too much. Also, plz consider that i am a part time writer. WN does not pay me much being in top does not mean getting rich (i wish), hence i need to work or i would not eat, no internet, no novel. I am trying to write more, my aim is to give you at least 2chap/days, but I have RL issues, and my time is what it is.

Supreme Magus · C162
4 months ago
Another lovely chapter! This story really is one of the best ones out there.

Keep up the good work, Legion! View More
Supreme Magus · C162
4 months ago

god_of_wheat: Thank you for the chapter!

Devolved: Path Of The Beast · C79
4 months ago

PrimalKaos: You must feel good huh, smacking that cliffhanger on our faces like that, Don't let me catch you otherwise I will...I will .....beg you to write faster😭😭

Supreme Magus · C161
4 months ago

god_of_wheat: Wait! What did they do to Winter?!

Devolved: Path Of The Beast · C78
4 months ago
Thank you very much! View More

Some_Sun: So, first I wish to thank you for the chapter. As for second..
I don't know what was best between Michael going centipede dragon or the part when Harried hinted about “Czar”.

I don't come here often. But when I do, I always check your novel for more chapters. Great job so far!

Devolved: Path Of The Beast · C78
4 months ago

Some_Sun: So, first I wish to thank you for the chapter. As for second..
I don't know what was best between Michael going centipede dragon or the part when Harried hinted about “Czar”.

I don't come here often. But when I do, I always check your novel for more chapters. Great job so far!

Devolved: Path Of The Beast · C78
4 months ago

sockery4: Lol, rip Hadriel. His vampire genes will be put to good use tho.

Thank you for the chapter!

Devolved: Path Of The Beast · C78
4 months ago
Another incredible chapter! As expected from Legion20. Can't wait to for the next chapter!

And thank you very much! View More
Supreme Magus · C155
4 months ago

studeniat: First

Reborn: Evolving From Nothing · C226
4 months ago

AuthorWiz: delete this

Reborn: Evolving From Nothing · C226
4 months ago

Anone: You're welcome!

Kael Cor: A Vampire's Awakening · C348
4 months ago
Thank you for the chapter! (First!) View More
Kael Cor: A Vampire's Awakening · C348
4 months ago
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