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  • Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten)

    Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten)

    Fantasy Evolution

    4.0

    (Novel is currently on pause and is being rewritten.) [Does host wish to integrate DNA?] [Does host wish to evolve?] Michael is reincarnated into another world with the ability to evolve. However, this process strengthens his body but destroyes his mind. For he will see them again. Even if it means throwing his humanity away. (This is my first novel! If you want more then don't forget to vote! :) (Plan on building up the story with several different mythologies and folklores. But please beware that the first two volumes mainly consist of character/power development. Hell truly breaks loose in vol.3)

Moments

It seems sleep was never an option View More
Supreme Magus · C386
1 week ago

TomVanDyke: A quick update on the lack of updates:
Due to a death in the family, I haven't had much time to write. The normal update schedule should resume sometime next week,

Paragon of Destruction · C383
2 weeks ago

DiceVR: Dude, it's literally the start of the novel, just wait a little longer until some more chapters are out -.-

Demon's Virtue · C6
2 weeks ago

scarlett1414: Inhumane actions of humans create human monsters.

Supreme Magus · C316
1 month ago
No problem. I was going to delete the current chapters through the week either way, as I have finished restructuring the novel's story. I only hope that if you continue to read on, that you take everything with a grain of salt. View More

AceOfDao: The content has been deleted

Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten) · C13
1 month ago

PrinceOfNilfheim: Never saw anything more stupid than this review.

I know that I should respect other peoples views but when the reasons for a fucking opinion is literally so stupid I can't help it, not at all.

I realised something lately, people are used to story's where the MC is a fucking godlike being who always seems to do the "logical" thing, but also, the so called "logical" solution is ALWAYS so fucking stupid and unreasonable that tge readers are somewhat brainwashed into believing it.

About your so called first "point" which is that he threw a golden opportunity to train because he was looking for a shortcut : This "point" just throws the fact that the protagonist is a teenager, who is also the son of a meager guard who had no prior education into his life but was also told about the feats of mages all over the world, right out of the fucking window, the whole fucking reason this novel was considered good is because the MC has something that I only saw in a handful of story's in this website (definitely not in one of your favorites) and that is : Flaws, the mc's personnality is clearly not perfect in anyway, but its human, you can get the emotion behind his actions, per example, this novel is the only one which has the mc getting arrogant after his aqucisition of a huge amout of money, I didnt see that in a ny other story in webnovel, and about all that destruction realm **** that you've been spouting, why the **** does it have to be unique ? I mean what was your fucking reasoning about the fact that his destruction realm was "only" rare was a disappointment, and that **** about talent, ooh boy do you even read ? Does being able to fight against masters sound like a lack of talent ? Well if so then its because its not.

Paragon of Destruction
1 month ago
Was that sun tzu at the start?😂 View More

Legion20: already use it. seems it fails us both XD

Supreme Magus · C306
1 month ago
The novel is currently being rewritten. These are old chapters, but I will put your words in mind. View More

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Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten) · C13
2 months ago

Tomoyuki: I think you should just drop the story and stop reading this.

Summoner Sovereign · C26
2 months ago

Tomoyuki: It had only been 19 chapters and you think it's dragging? How....?

Summoner Sovereign · C19
2 months ago

Doc_E_Style: Actually, not calling anyone about his experience isn't disturbing at all in my opinion. His mindset is that of an success focused ***** that was in control over the situation, which is why it's not a big occasion in his perception. A person with a different mindset, doesn't matter if child or ***** will obviously not be able to understand that

Supreme Magus · C293
2 months ago

sockery4: Hmm. Perhaps a type of subdued abomination or greater undead? A type 'guard dog' would be most valuable in my opinion (considering the future vision he previously had showed his family getting killed).

As for the reason for undead or an abomination.. Well, I can't see how the current lith would be able to keep an awakened creature obedient. As for an undead or abomination? Both balkor and the 'Master' of previous chapters were shown to easily control their creations. (Balkors' was especially fancy considering he could order them from a country or more away. But hell, the master probably has even more op methods.)

But then again, the possibilities are virtually endless here. Would it be possible to turn an awakened creature into a super undead? How do you create sentient undead?(like balkor did with the memory crystal thingy) Can you even awaken an undead? Can you create undead plants? How do you feed an abomination? With world energy? But then the guardians would come hunt lith..

Seems like I got caught in the moment. But what kind of creature do you think would suit him?

Supreme Magus · C293
2 months ago
I am glad you liked it. Have been busy rewriring the entire story, as it is currently not my proudest work (both grammar wise and plot wise)

But despite my dissatisfaction, It warms my heart knowing that I managed to succeed somwhere. Thanks for the comment! View More

LitSlave: So far so good, high expectations from this quality chapter. Great job with the death of the mc that a lot of novels have but fail in execution. Guessing he will transmigrate somewhere else now?

Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten) · C1
2 months ago
I completely agree with everything that you say, Elano. However, I want you to know that I have learned from my mistakes. The story is currently put on hold, as I am planning on rewriting everything from start to finish - And hopefully create something worth remembering.

Either way, thank you for the comment! And I hope you have an amazing day! View More

elano77: Author, I have to be honest, with the developments I've seen so far, it seems like you have tried to force the story to go in a particular direction.

1. The inconsistencies with MC's character. In his previous life, his overly trusting nature and faith in others made him lose his life. That, combined with the fact that he learnt to be strong to do what he wants, paints the picture of a person with a warm heart, forced by circumstances to act in a certain way. Yet, when his new life starts, you paint him out to be this cold, uncaring person who seeks to 'use' Marss and only lets him live to that end. That is the personality of a psychopath. So are we to believe that his personality received a reboot as well as this second life? That he is a completely new person? This pinches further bc his only motivation to do all this is to reunite with his family. And yet he cannot even empathise with his host and his family's circumstances? Not only is that dumb, it feels forced and creates a flawed MC from the get-go

2. The contract with Jenkins. Given the above, it is unclear why Michael chooses to enter the contract. There is no specific benefit to him and his goals whilst it seems, in this chapter, that he is helping Jenkins out alot. Michael has no guarantee that Jenkins will do as he says or that he even has the capacity to and with his powers, he could pretty much absorb all the creatures anyway. As to whether Michael would lose his life if he didn't or whether Jenkins would look for ways to deal with him if he didn't, using that as his motivation to enter the contract sets a bad precedent. Does that mean that, going forward, anyone who threatens MC can enter a contract with him? Seems like a stupid standard to set to me. What the acceptance of the contract in the way you have portrayed it, does is not only does it paint your MC in a bad light, it also gives us little reason to care about him bc we cannot see the logic of his actions. He supposedly has life experience and is apparently very strong in his old world. Yet despite being betrayed by his most trusted individual, he signs a contract of partnership with a person whose character he doesn't know and who has only displayed the desire to kill him as well as killing the host's mother and trapping her soul for good measure, all this not even a week into his new life. With his little understanding of magic, the contract could easily be a way to dupe him. Very easily. I hope you can see how this makes a stupid MC readers do not care about. It is enough to make anyone drop your novel very early on.

3. The sudden trust in Jenkins. I do not think I need to point out how forced this comes across. It makes MC seem like a naive child and not a grown man.

I like that you tried to do smth different I just think you executed it poorly. I will stick with the story for now bc I believe it and you are something special, Mr Author, but if you carry on this way, I'll have to drop it and recommend others do the same.

Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten) · C16
2 months ago
Lith: (Opens warp gate)
Vexal: (Opens eyes) "Why do I hear boss music?"

Another wonderful chapter, Legion! And as amazing as always! View More
Supreme Magus · C256
2 months ago

LuciFallen: "I would I was crazy, Then I use th reversal card and said no u." That's how this chapter was made

Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten) · C80
4 months ago

god_of_wheat: Thank to you for the chapter

Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten) · C81
4 months ago

sockery4: Also, first

Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten) · C81
4 months ago

sockery4: How will Michael survive this encounter?
Who is the horned guy?
When will we get the another chapter?

Find out next month on Devolved ball z!

Thank you for the amazing chap. Author!!

Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten) · C81
4 months ago

Genard: I feel really bad for Michael, he faced enemy after enemy 😭.

Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten) · C80
4 months ago

sockery4: I thought I was hallucinating at first. But heaven truly is fair!

BTW, don't worry author. The wait was worth it! :)

Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten) · C80
4 months ago
Haha, thank you😂😂 View More

sockery4: I thought I was hallucinating at first. But heaven truly is fair!

BTW, don't worry author. The wait was worth it! :)

Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten) · C80
4 months ago
Thanks! It means a lot View More

faisalbudeiri: Welcome back and don’t worry you and Michael deserve the wait

Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten) · C80
4 months ago

faisalbudeiri: Welcome back and don’t worry you and Michael deserve the wait

Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten) · C80
4 months ago

CaptKay: I can't believe I haven't reviewed this book. It's as good as oxygen. Got me addicted and satisfied. However, your updating pattern is really discouraging nowadays. In all, it's a great story to follow up on.

Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten)
4 months ago
Thank you for the chapter! View More
Transition and Restart · C233
6 months ago

god_of_wheat: After reading 25+ chapters of this story I can finally get a proper review of it. it starts of quite well, slowly building up towards the peak at around the dungeon part. I love how to story flows and how the character gets op, but it seemed to go too fast for the explained power system in my eyes. HOWEVER, I now feel it will open up much more, giving the character a real 'video game' start. The humor gives me a good chuckle and laugh from time to time, and seeing how the Mc changes (mentally and physically) could have been executed to an even better degree, but was still satisfying. as for the world, I am VERY satisfied by how much detail is being put into the different animals and species of 'Farleng'. The grammar has gotten better, but I still find minor things here and there. I hope to see some progress and development from our Mc and his companion, and romance would maybe ad a sort of balancing element for the story as a whole. Can't wait to see more.

(This novel deserves to be much higher than it should be. It it truly is a *hidden gem* in my eyes)

Keep it up author!

Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten)
6 months ago

XanTheInsane: Ah the rhyming hunter from before.

Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten) · C79
6 months ago

SouthToiletWizard: It's the end of the world and the captain doesn't have permission? No he is being stingy lol

Global Evolution · C37
6 months ago

HeavenlyHeaven: I have DESCENDED

Global Evolution · C36
6 months ago
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