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Sorry I typed this at night so I was tired. Ive fixed most of the errors for now View More
Draga of the Vanguard · C24
6 days ago
They don't take no bull**** View More

enigma127: I loved the description

Seriously those cyclops have such ridiculously low tolerance going to war after being called monsters lol

I'm excited to know how this works

Great chap

Draga of the Vanguard · C6
2 months ago
Its a bunch of different cultures. Basically, Humans speak french, elves speak english, the agrios are mongolian, the demons speak hebrew and asfaleia...ive forgotten View More

enigma127: Btw where is it besed it seems a Nordic to me till yet at least

Getting more and more entrapped in story

Draga of the Vanguard · C8
2 months ago

Supriya_Chimma: I'm just started reading..till now it is interesting... I like to read further ..characters are also interesting ..
Let me see how it would be further ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺🙂🙂🙂🙂☺🙂☺🙂🙂🙂🙂☺☺☺

Draga of the Vanguard
2 months ago
Who else got that dr stone reference? View More
Release That Witch · C836
3 months ago

Mirrard: wow thumbs up for the guy and his great resolve, it may look uselles to us but in his situation, where he "knew" what will happen and choose to consider the well being of the people with his life as the price, you gotta respect that. A pitty though, a person like that would be a great asset

Release That Witch · C825
3 months ago

Yrael: And as the church bells did toll, at the final toll, his eminence Tucker put down the crown that so weighed down upon him and went to join those above. The twilight bells signalled the end of the old church, for when even it's most devout choose to cease their struggle against the darkness, what could they call themselves but doomed.
-Scriptures 8:12 Farrina's letter to the Fjord's.

Release That Witch · C825
3 months ago

Lalahona: Right??? It's both impressive and admirable. Being a knight was like being the highest of the educated, so for Carter to accept that he can and will serve Roland in the industrial era shows he's not too proud to learn, and to make mistakes just like in this chapter. Carter is mvp

Release That Witch · C162
3 months ago

MissMiia: You must never go there Simba.

Tales of Herding Gods · C43
3 months ago

Moridain: From what we know of the previous 'cow', I strongly suspect the two new 'cows' probably deserve their new fate.
Still gotta be a bit uncomfortable for those around though.

Tales of Herding Gods · C43
3 months ago
I am new View More
The Hitting Zone · C58
3 months ago

ClemCa: thx for the chapter... and after the ball crusher, th house destructor, the teacher and the stealer we can finally see the drug dealer!

The Strongest System · C108
4 months ago
Scum View More

becca28: Anyone here rooting for RoNica? 😍 [Roland & Veronica]

Release That Witch · C118
4 months ago

Sinfish: I was asked to review this a few weeks ago, and thought I'd head over to take a look.

I don't have the time for a proper review right now, but one thing immediately leapt out at me: Your paragraphs are too long.

Readability suffers because of this. If you skim any of the novels in the top 20 or so, their average paragraph length are much shorter than yours, and even if an entire paragraph is nominally about a single idea, past a certain maximum length, it's time to start a new paragraph. Fiction tends to shorter paragraphs, and web novels tend to even shorter paragraphs, and a lot of this has to do with attention span and mobile devices.

Anyway, pretty much every single very successful author has shorter paragraphs than you, and that's not a coincidence.

Draga of the Vanguard
4 months ago
You made a Solid point. I'll be sure to implement ot View More

Sinfish: Let me give a concrete example:

Introduction of a character in Library of Heaven's Path, the #2 novel on this site:

""Zhang Xuan raised his head and a plump man whose face was full of fats came into view.

This fellow at least weighed 300 to 400 kilogram. From afar, he looked like a giant ball of meat.

“Qian Biao!” A name floated from the depths of his memories.

This Qian Biao was one of the teachers in charge of logistics. He was a very spiteful man who always liked to eat into the spare change of others. As the teacher on the lowest level, Zhang Xuan’s salary had been minute and the resources he could claim had always been minimal. Thus, he had never been respected by him.

Due to this affair, he offended him. The moment they met, all kinds of sarcasm and insults would come flying out.

Previously, Zhang Xuan being given four identity tokens under the premise that he wouldn’t finish it was the work of this man.

“I have finished using my identity tokens. I would like to claim a few more of them!” Couldn’t be bothered with the other party, Zhang Xuan spoke calmly.

“Finished using it?” Qian Biao stunned for a moment before howling in laughter. “Haha, everyone, come and take a look. This teacher who is first from the bottom comes here to brag that he has used up all of his identity tokens! Haha, this is the funniest joke I have heard in the entire world…”"

Introduction of a character in your novel:

""Sir, the battle report." said a plump man of average height, with dark yellow laid back hair complimenting his light cream skin and a pronounced moustache adorned his face. He presented a pile of documents to a man sitting on a golden chair with a shield engraved in it. This man was clearly past his prime, with a full head of white hair and disinterested green eyes. He was taller than the plump man addressing him, and sported white armor with a white cape. This man sat on his well carved golden throne, clearly bored out of his mind. The plump noble currently addressing this man wad Felt Grande, the Viscount that had handled the Viel survivors. "It's a mystery why Baron Chebou didn't deliver it himself, but they are indeed documents containing information about the battle." said a young man as he snatched away the documents from Felt. This young slender man wearing silver armor and standing above Felt, wore a cheeky grin Coupled with his black hair and slanted eyes, he gave the inpression of a psychopath. "They were victorious. The 'Fog Giant' was defeated. Apparently, the mysterious fog was none other than extremely hot steam with salt." said the young man. "And...Oh! Here's some news. A Dragã beat it.""

Both these introductions are roughly the same length of characters and words.

Draga of the Vanguard
4 months ago
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ArcaneOverlord: Well Nguyen is the most common last name of vietnam??is it??
Beside that Pre-Reincarnation/Transmigration is quite interesting and for some reason, I would like it more than the generic isekai.
Grammar is top notch.

Why Reincarnate Solo When You Can Do It With Friends?
4 months ago
Story feels rushed, but its okay View More
Godly Model Creator · C43
4 months ago
That...brings immeasurable joy to me. View More

BlaqueLyte: Wouldn't miss it for the world

Once Human, Now a Parasite
4 months ago
Heh. You taught me well sir. I ask that you are present for the reopening of Draga on the 15th of June, if it isn't too much trouble. View More

BlaqueLyte: I see you are rebooting most of your stories. I'm looking forward to the revamped work. And I see many readers are asking about it. That's a good sign. People are appreciating and anticipating your work

Once Human, Now a Parasite
4 months ago

iceclaw911: i feel like watching Pro Player playing...

Black Tech Internet Cafe System · C19
4 months ago

alwaysareader: Person A: Watch my Ancient Mysterious Legendary Martial Footwork Art.
Person B: Watch my Rocket Launcher.

Black Tech Internet Cafe System · C19
4 months ago
Well said. Thank you for answering my request. Draga will be returning June 15, I hope you are present for it's realease View More

Pheenix: I don't want to make a side character and I'm not that good at giving input, but I like Drags because even though it just started it already has a good world setting and great character personalities. Also who doesn't like dragons

Once Human, Now a Parasite
4 months ago

SamuelTeriba: It's a great story. The way the system gives detailed information, and the desperate fight of the MC not to be erased from it's consciousness, the way the fight scenes are written masterfully and with almost no errors. The world building is a little slim, and I don't quite understand why Sommus built a fortress, but overall this is beautiful work. I keep coming back to read chapter after chapter. Thank you for this

Reincarnating Into A Fantasy World as an Autonomous Machine Arsenal
4 months ago
I would like to personally thank you for your donations to Draga, even in this hibernation stage. As a gift, I would like to give you the right to create a side character, tho be aware that he won't be too relevant to the story. Feel free to reject if it inconveniences you and I would like to know why you like it. View More

Pheenix: Great work and translation isn't bad but could use small improvements.........................................................
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Once Human, Now a Parasite
4 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
The Mech Touch · C1
4 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Super Gene · C1
4 months ago
It vas been a grinding 3 months... but after many struggles, gathering an editing crew, getting advisors and perfecting the story line, Draga of the Vanguard shall continue on the 15th of June. Without doubt. Without worry. Draga will finally continue. Updates will be once every two days, as chapters will be longer and well thought out (not to talk about editing). But yeah, Draga's coming back strong. View More

Huntersouls: Well it has been a month. I hope everything is going well.

Draga of the Vanguard · C0
4 months ago
No problem View More

Adevhine: I came back to this... I am amazed. These are the kinds of comments I want in my novel. It's like chatting with friends ^_^

Aria's Tales · C51
6 months ago

KingFoxJellyfish: WHere did everything go?

Draga of the Vanguard · C0
6 months ago
A week at best...a month at worst View More

KingFoxJellyfish: Oh! I'll just have to wait, then? How long?

Draga of the Vanguard · C0
6 months ago
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