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  • DISCONTINUED (The Pentacle Arks)

    DISCONTINUED (The Pentacle Arks)

    Fantasy

  • The Pentacle Arks (no more)

    The Pentacle Arks (no more)

    Fantasy

    Nil

  • Being A Part-time Waitress

    Being A Part-time Waitress

    Realistic Fiction

  • The Life Of A Time Mage

    The Life Of A Time Mage

    Fantasy

    You've heard tales of us Time Mages. About us manipulating time. It is true, but only to a minor extent. Like Element Mages who control their specific Elements, Time Mages control Time. Those fables about Time travelling is neither wrong nor accurate. We can Time travel, but we can't change the space. That's why it is called Time Frame Hopping.

  • The Arks

    The Arks

    Fantasy

    4.3

    In this universe, some called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe. The Great Noble War made its name throughout the Universe by taking down a multitude of stars. From the remnants of galaxies that were affected, the Solar System was created. In that System, a particular planet stood out from the rest as a haven to all; Earth. ¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬ Credits to valeriex for making the cover!

Moments

Reading Status: C62
The storyline is there, but because of the translation quality, it is very difficult to read. Some paragraphs are literally a sentence when it could be broken down to smaller, digestable sentences. Words are missing and the punctuation is not used properly.

Perhaps a proper translator would be good. View More
Nova Roma
1 month ago

KENTARO12100: Excellent work, as I said in one of your chapters I love that the protagonist is a woman, it is something refreshing after I personally read too many novels with MC men, continue with your story is fascinating;)

The Arks
1 month ago
Reading Status: C10
The story gradually gets so much better, I love how you include scenes of emotions so easily

The writing quality needs to be a bit better, some missing words here and there.

Story wise, the plot is very good. The way that the author as portrayed the characters and the moments... Is fantastic! View More
Vampire: the Masquerade - Nirvana
1 month ago
Lul I have found mah new friend!!

It's actually weird for me cause I'm hailing from Singapore, land of broken English. View More

Fiona_Singer: Me too XD Though I love all the doctors David Tenant's "I don't wanna go" is just so sad that first time I cried for half an hour TAT He's my favourite. Which kinda explained your writing style, too, cos I sorta feel like you are very much a world-builder rather than story-teller :)

The Arks
1 month ago
You've got valeriex to thank, I love it as well View More

Fiona_Singer: Oh love the new cover btw ∠( ᐛ 」∠)_

The Arks
1 month ago
Great review, yes I am a whovian, so you'll see some relation.

I'm aware of the feelings area that I lack of, will work on that in due time. View More

Fiona_Singer: The whole fiction gives me an impression of being an crystalized meteorite: otherworldly, mysterious, but also very hard and cold. The text is fairly well-versed and is given an hint of old-world English style, allowing it to perfectly blend into the story background, but not too much as in becoming a barrier to understand the plots.

And the world setting is beautifully unique, kind of reminds me old-school soft sci-fi works like Doctor Who, combining the futuristic, advanced element of races and planets from outerspace, and the wonderous, colourful element of magic and epics together. The author clearly devoted lots of time and energy into building up this vast, fantasy world, and the writing style depicted the world vividly.

However the characters and the story aren't so impressive, which is the part that gives me the "hard, cold" feeling. It's not that the design of the characters and the outline of the plots are bad--they can be quite good too if well processed--but the way author fleshes out the characters and narrates the plots are too abridged, to an extent that sometimes readers feel like the motivations of the actions of the character are too unclear, and the emotions are too thin.

I guess it's partly because it's written in a somewhat traditional English style so it's a little obscure--this is more or less inevitable if you are not using modern, plain language, and I suppose it's the writing style that the author feels comfortable with, so let's skip this part. The other reason may be that so far most of the main characters are not human and the real humans seem more secondary and a symbol of ignorance and bullying (well because they are indeed and it's worse in Dark Ages). But the thing is, according to the standard of a fair literature work, it has to be able to appeal to the readers, and unfortunately your readers are emotional, sensational, messy humans (In a perfect world we will have Martian readers), and quite to the contrary, to make the non-human characters alive you need to spend EXTRA EFFORTS on depicting their emotions and motives, because they don't think like humans, so it will be much harder for readers to sympathize with them, especially when they are somewhat unkind and indifferent in human perspectives, like your MC, and the author will have to try extra hard to guide the readers to understand their feelings.

From this angle I would strongly recommend the author to learn from Anne Rice's Vampire Chronicles: the blood-sucking monsters are very captivating in her texts, and she is masterful in describing the non-human sensations. Read how she built up the character Claudia, who is in my opinion very simliar to your MC, will be very helpful: she lost all her human family at a young age and was left alone until being turned to a vampire, and although she appears like a dolly child she was much older, and she was taught to be a vicious hunter and ruthless drinker from a young age--She's no kinder to humans, but still readers, whether like her or not, can feel her thoughts and moods, and she is very much alive on Rice's paper(in a vampiric way, at least).

Not that if the author continued on like this, it would be bad, in general it's a very original and interesting work, and as the story unfolds and all the buried suspenses are uncovered, when people fully know the past and future of each character, we humans will understand why they did what they did, anyway. But still, if the author wanted to achieve a deeper sympathy between characters and readers where the latter would drop tears for the former, it's better to improve in this area.

The Arks
1 month ago

Fiona_Singer: The whole fiction gives me an impression of being an crystalized meteorite: otherworldly, mysterious, but also very hard and cold. The text is fairly well-versed and is given an hint of old-world English style, allowing it to perfectly blend into the story background, but not too much as in becoming a barrier to understand the plots.

And the world setting is beautifully unique, kind of reminds me old-school soft sci-fi works like Doctor Who, combining the futuristic, advanced element of races and planets from outerspace, and the wonderous, colourful element of magic and epics together. The author clearly devoted lots of time and energy into building up this vast, fantasy world, and the writing style depicted the world vividly.

However the characters and the story aren't so impressive, which is the part that gives me the "hard, cold" feeling. It's not that the design of the characters and the outline of the plots are bad--they can be quite good too if well processed--but the way author fleshes out the characters and narrates the plots are too abridged, to an extent that sometimes readers feel like the motivations of the actions of the character are too unclear, and the emotions are too thin.

I guess it's partly because it's written in a somewhat traditional English style so it's a little obscure--this is more or less inevitable if you are not using modern, plain language, and I suppose it's the writing style that the author feels comfortable with, so let's skip this part. The other reason may be that so far most of the main characters are not human and the real humans seem more secondary and a symbol of ignorance and bullying (well because they are indeed and it's worse in Dark Ages). But the thing is, according to the standard of a fair literature work, it has to be able to appeal to the readers, and unfortunately your readers are emotional, sensational, messy humans (In a perfect world we will have Martian readers), and quite to the contrary, to make the non-human characters alive you need to spend EXTRA EFFORTS on depicting their emotions and motives, because they don't think like humans, so it will be much harder for readers to sympathize with them, especially when they are somewhat unkind and indifferent in human perspectives, like your MC, and the author will have to try extra hard to guide the readers to understand their feelings.

From this angle I would strongly recommend the author to learn from Anne Rice's Vampire Chronicles: the blood-sucking monsters are very captivating in her texts, and she is masterful in describing the non-human sensations. Read how she built up the character Claudia, who is in my opinion very simliar to your MC, will be very helpful: she lost all her human family at a young age and was left alone until being turned to a vampire, and although she appears like a dolly child she was much older, and she was taught to be a vicious hunter and ruthless drinker from a young age--She's no kinder to humans, but still readers, whether like her or not, can feel her thoughts and moods, and she is very much alive on Rice's paper(in a vampiric way, at least).

Not that if the author continued on like this, it would be bad, in general it's a very original and interesting work, and as the story unfolds and all the buried suspenses are uncovered, when people fully know the past and future of each character, we humans will understand why they did what they did, anyway. But still, if the author wanted to achieve a deeper sympathy between characters and readers where the latter would drop tears for the former, it's better to improve in this area.

The Arks
1 month ago
Thank you so much! View More

KENTARO12100: I Will be honest, i'm no very fan of novels with woman protagonist but when i find one like this i Will be reading until the end great job keep it on

The Arks · C2
1 month ago
If its truly too confusing, I would have to make an aux chapter detailing the planets and beings in this book. But it would destroy the story development. Not sure how to deal with not enough and info dump. View More

Mavislin11: It's quite difficult for me to describe the planets and systems without being an huge info dump.

I respect this review way more than the one I have deleted.

The whole thing is based upon the Universe, where the system of 'other planets' exist. For those who don't know, Andromeda is our neighbouring galaxy.

For akhaten, more will be elaborated in future chapters.

I kinda explained Valkyries, who live in Valokia.

The Arks
2 months ago
If its truly too confusing, I would have to make an aux chapter detailing the planets and beings in this book. But it would destroy the story development. Not sure how to deal with not enough and info dump. View More

Mavislin11: It's quite difficult for me to describe the planets and systems without being an huge info dump.

I respect this review way more than the one I have deleted.

The whole thing is based upon the Universe, where the system of 'other planets' exist. For those who don't know, Andromeda is our neighbouring galaxy.

For akhaten, more will be elaborated in future chapters.

I kinda explained Valkyries, who live in Valokia.

The Arks
2 months ago
It's quite difficult for me to describe the planets and systems without being an huge info dump.

I respect this review way more than the one I have deleted.

The whole thing is based upon the Universe, where the system of 'other planets' exist. For those who don't know, Andromeda is our neighbouring galaxy.

For akhaten, more will be elaborated in future chapters.

I kinda explained Valkyries, who live in Valokia. View More

ursus010: The name itself is already impressive. But let's see how the author succeeds in developing this idea?

Interesting are the elements, magical, but why exactly fire - salamadras, water - mermaids, earth - an elephant, etc.? Is this somehow explained? In the Chinese system, at least the system is clear - the heavenly trunks (tree, fire, hemla, metal, water) and earthly branches (mouse, cow, tiger, hare, dragon, snake, horse, sheep, monkey, chicken, dog, pig). The primary elements and their correspondences, and in your system, there is no such description. As a reader, this system of gradation is not clear to the reader, perhaps it would be worth creating an application and explaining all these subtleties, systems, building hierarchies, etc. in it.

Akhaten? What it is? Why is this kind and what is famous?

For now, to be honest, I do not quite understand who the main heroine is Valkyrie? The Dragon? Andromeda system? If there are descriptions of planetary systems, galaxies ???? Not yet understood!

Strange, some kind of fun, wreak havoc in the village ?????? !!!

Horror ... inhuman horror ... end of the fifth chapter ...

Chapter 6 ... it’s not at all clear what this is about ...

Something I do not quite capture the essence of the story ... some fragments ... some different magicians ... a spy ??? Which one Whose? What for?

What planet ???? The reader is not at all aware of what kind of world it is, there are no descriptions of it, what kind of galaxy, what kind of planets are there in it, who populates them?

No descriptions of the planets, who lives there, what lives ??? Just suddenly Andromeda appears in the text, the planet is one, then the other ... it’s not clear !!!

Father of the church ??? Which one ???

I did not quite understand what was going on. The author has an interesting idea, but you need to work on the transitions of one story to another, to give a more detailed description of the world. Too many names, you start to get confused.

Mages utter some words "activating their magic", what kind of language, although it sounds like - Latin.

Writing Quality, I would rate it at 5. Stability of Updates - 5, you need to pay tribute to the author, that he can maintain a given pace in writing chapters, well done!
Story Development - I would say between 3 and 4 stars. Not enough descriptions. Character Design - rather, 3 stars, characters not disclosed, their inner world is not shown, what they think about, what they aspire to, what they want ... World Background - alas ... there is no detailed description of it ... 2 or 3 ?? ??

But the novel has a potential, intriguing story, if to work out the details, the novel would have been more understandable and interesting.

Thanks to the author for his hard work, it is always easier to criticize than to write yourself. To see the mistakes of another author is easier than their own. Well, this is a common practice in humans.

respectfully

The Arks
2 months ago
It's quite difficult for me to describe the planets and systems without being an huge info dump.

I respect this review way more than the one I have deleted.

The whole thing is based upon the Universe, where the system of 'other planets' exist. For those who don't know, Andromeda is our neighbouring galaxy.

For akhaten, more will be elaborated in future chapters.

I kinda explained Valkyries, who live in Valokia. View More

ursus010: The name itself is already impressive. But let's see how the author succeeds in developing this idea?

Interesting are the elements, magical, but why exactly fire - salamadras, water - mermaids, earth - an elephant, etc.? Is this somehow explained? In the Chinese system, at least the system is clear - the heavenly trunks (tree, fire, hemla, metal, water) and earthly branches (mouse, cow, tiger, hare, dragon, snake, horse, sheep, monkey, chicken, dog, pig). The primary elements and their correspondences, and in your system, there is no such description. As a reader, this system of gradation is not clear to the reader, perhaps it would be worth creating an application and explaining all these subtleties, systems, building hierarchies, etc. in it.

Akhaten? What it is? Why is this kind and what is famous?

For now, to be honest, I do not quite understand who the main heroine is Valkyrie? The Dragon? Andromeda system? If there are descriptions of planetary systems, galaxies ???? Not yet understood!

Strange, some kind of fun, wreak havoc in the village ?????? !!!

Horror ... inhuman horror ... end of the fifth chapter ...

Chapter 6 ... it’s not at all clear what this is about ...

Something I do not quite capture the essence of the story ... some fragments ... some different magicians ... a spy ??? Which one Whose? What for?

What planet ???? The reader is not at all aware of what kind of world it is, there are no descriptions of it, what kind of galaxy, what kind of planets are there in it, who populates them?

No descriptions of the planets, who lives there, what lives ??? Just suddenly Andromeda appears in the text, the planet is one, then the other ... it’s not clear !!!

Father of the church ??? Which one ???

I did not quite understand what was going on. The author has an interesting idea, but you need to work on the transitions of one story to another, to give a more detailed description of the world. Too many names, you start to get confused.

Mages utter some words "activating their magic", what kind of language, although it sounds like - Latin.

Writing Quality, I would rate it at 5. Stability of Updates - 5, you need to pay tribute to the author, that he can maintain a given pace in writing chapters, well done!
Story Development - I would say between 3 and 4 stars. Not enough descriptions. Character Design - rather, 3 stars, characters not disclosed, their inner world is not shown, what they think about, what they aspire to, what they want ... World Background - alas ... there is no detailed description of it ... 2 or 3 ?? ??

But the novel has a potential, intriguing story, if to work out the details, the novel would have been more understandable and interesting.

Thanks to the author for his hard work, it is always easier to criticize than to write yourself. To see the mistakes of another author is easier than their own. Well, this is a common practice in humans.

respectfully

The Arks
2 months ago

ursus010: The name itself is already impressive. But let's see how the author succeeds in developing this idea?

Interesting are the elements, magical, but why exactly fire - salamadras, water - mermaids, earth - an elephant, etc.? Is this somehow explained? In the Chinese system, at least the system is clear - the heavenly trunks (tree, fire, hemla, metal, water) and earthly branches (mouse, cow, tiger, hare, dragon, snake, horse, sheep, monkey, chicken, dog, pig). The primary elements and their correspondences, and in your system, there is no such description. As a reader, this system of gradation is not clear to the reader, perhaps it would be worth creating an application and explaining all these subtleties, systems, building hierarchies, etc. in it.

Akhaten? What it is? Why is this kind and what is famous?

For now, to be honest, I do not quite understand who the main heroine is Valkyrie? The Dragon? Andromeda system? If there are descriptions of planetary systems, galaxies ???? Not yet understood!

Strange, some kind of fun, wreak havoc in the village ?????? !!!

Horror ... inhuman horror ... end of the fifth chapter ...

Chapter 6 ... it’s not at all clear what this is about ...

Something I do not quite capture the essence of the story ... some fragments ... some different magicians ... a spy ??? Which one Whose? What for?

What planet ???? The reader is not at all aware of what kind of world it is, there are no descriptions of it, what kind of galaxy, what kind of planets are there in it, who populates them?

No descriptions of the planets, who lives there, what lives ??? Just suddenly Andromeda appears in the text, the planet is one, then the other ... it’s not clear !!!

Father of the church ??? Which one ???

I did not quite understand what was going on. The author has an interesting idea, but you need to work on the transitions of one story to another, to give a more detailed description of the world. Too many names, you start to get confused.

Mages utter some words "activating their magic", what kind of language, although it sounds like - Latin.

Writing Quality, I would rate it at 5. Stability of Updates - 5, you need to pay tribute to the author, that he can maintain a given pace in writing chapters, well done!
Story Development - I would say between 3 and 4 stars. Not enough descriptions. Character Design - rather, 3 stars, characters not disclosed, their inner world is not shown, what they think about, what they aspire to, what they want ... World Background - alas ... there is no detailed description of it ... 2 or 3 ?? ??

But the novel has a potential, intriguing story, if to work out the details, the novel would have been more understandable and interesting.

Thanks to the author for his hard work, it is always easier to criticize than to write yourself. To see the mistakes of another author is easier than their own. Well, this is a common practice in humans.

respectfully

The Arks
2 months ago
Reading Status: C6
Not much can be said for 6 chapters, but it was worth the read. The characters are good, with the story pacing being quite alright. The world background and plot are also great. View More
Life after a glass of water
2 months ago

KageMugen: Writting this after 8 chapters ... Would give 4.5 to both Character design and Writting quality therefore I gave one a 4.

Main problem in writing is in changing past and present tense which is easily fixable by any proofreader in the future.

Anyway I enjoyed the story so far and maybe will read more of it in the future. Regards to the Author.

The Arks
2 months ago

PsyberRose: Part of a review swap and at time of writing, there are 29 chapters.

It's an interesting story, with lots of potential.

Writing Quality: English isn't my first language and thus, any grammatical errors here aren't noticeable by me. It's smooth reading and thus, doesn't detract from the enjoyment of the story.

Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith.

Story Development/Character Design/World Background: It's just the right pace, imo. Not too fast but not too slow. The various characters and their interactions are displayed nicely and the descriptions of their surroundings & actions are very well written. Also, the Author's take on the usual valkerie that we have in our lores is quite interesting.

All in all, an enjoyable read for those who like this genre. Good luck, Author! :)

The Arks
2 months ago
Reading Status: C5
The writing quality is definitely good. The world building is also quite fantastic. Worth a read. The charts and plot are very specific, which is a good thing. View More
Universal Knowledge of the Dao
2 months ago

d3trois: Not a bad start, I like it for now. Still haven't read everything tho !




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The Arks
2 months ago

asek0503: the synopsis is greatt.. the introduction is interesting... i like the way you describe the world background and stuff.... i'll give you four stars all.... keep it uppp

The Arks
2 months ago

marjzach2012: The novel is very interesting and well-explained every detail. The characters are like mixed aliens and humans or from the other dimension. I first thought that they were all spirits and they are in thier spiritual world somehow. But I might be wrong, as the story progresses. It gave me a feeling of goosebumps though talking about the 4 elements, the devil and so other being with wings. Nonetheless it's a good book.Keep it up!

The Arks
2 months ago
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Mavislin11: The descriptions of the character's body.... 100 points for you. Some typos here and there but it's a great read! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Can True Love be Found from Online Dating?
2 months ago
Hi I asked for a review swap, hopefully you did not forget... View More

marjzach2012: Thank you very much!

Can True Love be Found from Online Dating?
2 months ago
Hi I asked for a review swap, hopefully you did not forget... View More

marjzach2012: Thank you very much!

Can True Love be Found from Online Dating?
2 months ago
Reading Status: C3
A very unique idea, which I love. It fills your head with wonders and possibilities. Sometimes, not all good novels must have a storyline or characters. Stories that are mind provoking are extremely interactive since they make the reader feel included. Will be looking forward for more. View More
Feelings-Daily thoughts
2 months ago
Reading Status: C242
I love this book so much! It has all the assets of being a great novel! Please continue to write. The quality is fantastic, next to no errors at all. The storyline is fantastic and I love the way the characters are being portrayed. View More
New Life : A Second Chance
2 months ago
Reading Status: C5
The story is getting pretty good, the way the characters are being portrayed is also great. But there are some spelling errors that can be fixed very easily. It will surely take off after the issue has been fixed. View More
Sword Online
2 months ago
Reading Status: C4
I like the character design and plot development. Quite interesting. The writing quality is near perfect, certainly better than most famous novels out there. Hidden gem. View More
The Cold Tyrant's Love
2 months ago
Reading Status: C10
The story is great, the plot line is quite strong. The only thing hugging me is the writing quality. Like two words are written together, or punctuation used wrongly. But if you fix that, this story has potential. View More
A lost Dream
2 months ago

zetsubouaichan: I read this up to chapter 25.

This is a fantasy read with a lot of magic and fighting going on. The start was intriguing with the character going to a tryout where we get to see some cool magic.

I think the story has potential. The writing is pretty good. I can't comment on the grammar, as I'm not good at that as well, but I can tell that the author's storytelling and descriptions were pretty good.

However, I was a bit lost after a few chapters until I read comments that there was a time-skip to a few years later. Because of this, I don't get to know the character well enough. I wish I could see the character's growth. The dialogues were good. But I think it would be great if the author could spend time to write on the characters' thought so that the reader could connect with the characters more.

The Arks
2 months ago

Shammiyah: I like the way you started the introduction.I am always a fan of magical elements.Its really great to read a novel related to magic,mages and magical worlds.Do check out my novel "A lost Dream" and give your reviews.

The Arks
2 months ago
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