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Perhaps, in many other novels i see personality within two or three chapters, maybe try describing their actions with a bit more detail, or give some more insight into their thoughts. View More

AuthorZ: Thanks for the criticism. I now know that I need to go and proof read my novel which I didn’t do before. But I think a few chapters isn’t enough to determine whether or characters have personalities or not. I know that the chapters so far has only been s*x but that was on purpose. Story will actually have more plot soon.

King of Lust
1 year ago
Reading Status: C21
A quality story overall, but it is marred by its grammatical errors and stylistic choices which seem typical of a non native English writer. While the vocabulary is decent, there are mistakes of there their and they're, and a dearth of pronoun usage. There are very few characters, but there is some depth to them, and the main character seems to be a decent portrayal of a female with high functioning autism, and perhaps mild sociopathy. These traits make for a decent read, despite the flaws. I would sugget the author attempt to get a proofreader. View More
Mystic System
1 year ago
Actually I just downloaded the app yesterday, and this "novel" was listed as the top rated magical realism. It has a number of grammatical mistakes in just the first chapter, and the smut is lower quality than what I can easily find on roleplaying forums. View More

Dresmyr: Needs a proof reader. Low quality smut, characters have *** not personalities. Was expecting a semidecent novel with notable smut, that is not this "novel".

King of Lust
1 year ago
Reading Status: C3
Needs a proof reader. Low quality smut, characters have *** not personalities. Was expecting a semidecent novel with notable smut, that is not this "novel". View More
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1 year ago
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