Demonzor

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Replied to ProfesorGoblitz

Yeap didn’t seem that important

ch 18 Chapter 14 ~ Scheming Darkness

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Anime & Comics · ProfesorGoblitz

Demonzor

3mth

Posted

It’s a average story not worth paying for. Would be a better story if the author whole premise for the mc using his in dumb ways is because I made his power to strong can’t have him become to op.

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Fantasy · king_frosh

Demonzor

3mth

Replied to king_frosh

So it all comes down to I made his power to strong gotta have mc use it in a dumb way to even it out at that point should have gave him a really limited power that could get super strong and been done

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Fantasy · king_frosh

Demonzor

3mth

Replied to Jeet_Chattopadhyay

Exactly at this point he’s just there for comedic effect

ch 54 Round two

Visionary: The Blank

Anime & Comics · Cedric_7512

Demonzor

3mth

Commented

Bruh could have went without these three chps

ch 55 Pain is a reminder not a barrier *Bonus

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Anime & Comics · Luciffero

Demonzor

3mth

Commented

Wanna keep reading it but at this point 7 months to get 21 chps it’s just not worth it

ch 21 Chapter 20

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Anime & Comics · EgyptianDio

Demonzor

3mth

Posted

This has to be the worst pjo story ever written. The writing and story development are bad with nothing good about them like others have said how did u spend like 5 or 6 chps just writing about how they were making their forms you could have put all that in one chp. The world building is bad but not the worst but considering your basing it off a great story don’t know how you made it bad.

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Book&Literature · TheGreekMythosGuru

Demonzor

3mth

Replied to Dream_Lord14

I’ll give them a try after I finish the ones I’m reading now

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Eastern · Platonic Formula

Demonzor

3mth

Replied to Supreme_IQ

👍🏾hope your story eventually becomes good

ch 194 The Demon's Past 2

Chaos Devourer System

Action · Supreme_IQ

Demonzor

3mth

Replied to Supreme_IQ

😂why would I need permission to leave I been removed it after I caught up and seen that it wasn’t good enough to pay for chps I just wrote my review and comment just because I felt like it at the time

ch 194 The Demon's Past 2

Chaos Devourer System

Action · Supreme_IQ

Demonzor

3mth

Replied to Supreme_IQ

It doesn’t even matter this is just one of the daily free novels that I will read now cuz it’s free and not care bout anymore after it’s not and move on

ch 194 The Demon's Past 2

Chaos Devourer System

Action · Supreme_IQ

Demonzor

3mth

Replied to Supreme_IQ

If you had good reading comprehension I said he would become a lil humble or something would change didn’t say he had to become humble but u would know that if your comprehension was better

ch 194 The Demon's Past 2

Chaos Devourer System

Action · Supreme_IQ

Demonzor

3mth

Replied to Supreme_IQ

Anything it just feels like he gets cocky gets shown he’s not all that then goes right back to being cocky over and over again you think after the second time being shown that he’s nowhere near the top he would be a lil humble or sum

ch 194 The Demon's Past 2

Chaos Devourer System

Action · Supreme_IQ

Demonzor

3mth

Posted

It’s your average system story with a terrible mc. The world background is detailed and the update speed is good, but it’s all ruined by how boring the mc is. It’s been 206 chps and the mc is just as slow as he was when he starred he has nothing that makes you want to read about him.

Chaos Devourer System

Action · Supreme_IQ

Demonzor

3mth

Commented

It’s crazy to me that’s it’s been 194 chps and the mc hasn’t had any character growth didn’t even have to be a lot of it but at least something.

ch 194 The Demon's Past 2

Chaos Devourer System

Action · Supreme_IQ

Demonzor

3mth

Commented

How are we 148chps in and it feels like nothing important has happened but stuff about the system and the one girl

ch 148 Bonus Chapter

Chaos Devourer System

Action · Supreme_IQ

Demonzor

3mth

Replied to 1AvidM_EternalC

Forreal like bruh all the stuff you have seen and be screaming at everything

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Chaos Devourer System

Action · Supreme_IQ

Demonzor

3mth

Replied to Dream_Lord14

Yeap they have me trapped can’t get away from them

There are also some more basic incantations, such as Five Elements Thunder Talisman, Yin Yang Thunder Talisman, Five Thunder Execution, and so on.

Fated Cultivation: I Have Max-Level Divination Skills

Eastern · Platonic Formula

Demonzor

3mth

Replied to Dexter_Sled_1111

Naw that happens sometimes so much on this app knew it was coming when he kept putting it aside

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Vampire God in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Dexter_Sled_1111

Demonzor

3mth

Replied to Dexter_Sled_1111

Less jumping to conclusions but more basing it off what has happened in the story so far

ch 94 88. Kila

Vampire God in the Apocalypse

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