Webnovel Author: _Supremo_ - Novel Collection

Hi! First i would like to say thank you for the author for giving us this wonderful story. And for those who are supporting this story. Now for my review I would discuss the characters development, most specifically the MC. Next the story development. Next is other information like romance, relationship and world building. First is the MC's development. Well just like most of the readers, when i was first started to read the story I am like the most of you, I am annoyed with the MC. I feel like entering the story myself and strangle the MC, punch him, kick him, humiliate him just to knock some sense to him and wake him up from his naivety. But he started to change in volume 2 , while there's still the naivety it's not the much like in volume 1. He's starting to change albeit slowly but we can him changing. Then while reading it I realize that yeah, he still a child, teenager 14 or 15 I think so it's a given that he's still naive because of the sheltering from his father. Then it dawned me that not all 14 to 15 years old kids is the same. Some of them is brave, courageous, mature while some are the opposite. Maybe we the readers are used to read a mature kid MC from other stories so when we read this we were annoyed by the fact that he is like that. I say give the MC a chance, give the author a chance. This story is great and I knew it. Next the story development, the story development of this story is slow but not too slow. We can still see the development of every chapter, the struggle the characters have to face in their every day life. And it's interesting if you're going to ask me. This type of development is not rare many story used this type of story development and I am glad that this story uses this type of story development because it's fitted the story portrait. Lastly the other information such as the romance, the relationship of the MC to other character and world building. First the romance, well im in chapter 400 and until now there's no clear view who are the real fmc. So because of my curiosity I searched the real life merlin in the internet I read his story in many websites and platform and I found out that his significant others is none other than *toot* well I dont want to spoil anyone but i'll give you a hint. Before chapter 400 the mc and the supposedly fmc is already together, not together like lover's. They are together like friends, companion something like that. So let's just wait until the author give a definite answer who will be the fmc. Oh btw my search results says that Merlin had 2 or 3 lovers. Then let's discuss the relationship of the mc to other characters. Like what I stated earlier the MC is naivety so he tends to trust others blindly. There are his friends from the same world and his relationship with them is still good most specially with the girl, if you know what I mean. There's a lot of females around the MC but well a story without a dense mc is not a good story. So even when the females around the MC giving him so much signs the MC is still unperturbed because why not?. Lastly the world development there's not much to discuss about the world development but I think the author really searched and study the history to give us the best story he can ever give. Like what I said earlier I also searched facts about this story. And I can see the similarities of the real event and this story. I'm in chapter 400+ and I'm planning to write a review again in the comment section when Im in the later part of the story. Again please give this story a chance. Believe me as a veteran reader this story is overwhelming in potential to become one of the top story out there.

Hi Author I just want to ask if they will have a child? Mc and kushina I mean. I dont care if it is not naruto lol just want to know.

I know this is a bit late review but let me share mine. This story has a good background story. Every character has it own, not only the mcs. It is not like other novels that some character will pop out of nowhere. The story have a good story progression. There's a time skip but not too much that will make the reader's confuse. The character design is also good they are somehow reverse which is unique.The personality of the mcs is not align with their personas. For example the serious male mc, in other novel he will be the dark side or something like that, but here he is bright side. The fmc is cheerful and energetic which is usually in other novel the bright side, but here she is the dark side. So this uniqueness is a point for this story. The writing quality is also good, there's some minimal errors but it is still understandable and it will not affect the story in any way. The only thing that I can point as bad in this story is the lack of economic background. Idk in the later chapters but up to 300s there's still no monetary system. Overall this story is a must to read if you want something new.