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mikoschele

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2019-01-24 Joined Germany

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dumb ways to die. So many dumb ways to die.

There was no ventilation in the shelter yet, hence the burning torch in the shelter could easily deplete the oxygen in the underground base.

My Post-Apocalyptic Shelter Levels Up Infinitely!

My Post-Apocalyptic Shelter Levels Up Infinitely!

Sci-fi · Catty Catty Catty

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that, right there makes a good story. consideration to the story, outside of your mc.

Apart from Bai Zemin, there were other people who also dared to fight or simply had no choice but to fight if they wanted to survive. As a consequence, there were several people who had their own fortuitous experiences, gaining powerful skills and treasures that did not belong to this world.

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · XIETIAN

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"shooting trough her body" It's more of the shoulder wound getting ice cold water into it. Or has the Arrow pierced right trough her shoulder? Is it still stuck in her Shoulder, its not right? Before you said Bone right, so is it broken? I'm not quite sure. Sry just got me a bit tangled there.

Ravynne fell from the high cliffs above into the water below. She waved her arms and gasped for air as she tried to stay afloat, pain from the arrow shooting through her body, the ice cold water stabbing her flesh and rushing into her lungs. It was almost debilitating, but she had to survive.

The Aurelian Empire

The Aurelian Empire

Fantasy · Thalia_Ilace

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What's the diffrence between shoulder and shoulder blade? In this context?

Suddenly, she yelped in pain and clutched her arm as a burning and stinging sensation whipped across it. "She's over here!" In front of Ravynne lay an arrow with red liquid covering the tip. She looked at her hand, it was covered in blood. Her eyes widened and an involuntary moan escaped her mouth as an arrow plunged into her shoulder blade.

The Aurelian Empire

The Aurelian Empire

Fantasy · Thalia_Ilace

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"and" combining the sentence "the sun down" and "never been in the woods before" trough and feels kinda tripy. Got me out of the flow of reading your story.
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The Aurelian Empire

The Aurelian Empire

Fantasy · Thalia_Ilace

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and or as ??? What in this term is the right usage???
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The Aurelian Empire

The Aurelian Empire

Fantasy · Thalia_Ilace

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3 Paragraph brought me abit out, anybody else? "This is how..."
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The Aurelian Empire

The Aurelian Empire

Fantasy · Thalia_Ilace

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Alien Evolution System

Alien Evolution System

Fantasy · John_Doever

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its porbably gay romance

He felt that something was on the side of his bed. It was Lu Qiming. Seeing that Lin Fan had sat up, he grabbed his hands in glee. "Junior Brother, how are you feeling?"

It's Lonely To Be Invincible

It's Lonely To Be Invincible

Eastern · Xin Feng

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