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OwOtheEternalowo

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͡° ͜ʖ ͡° I am a firm beliver in Isekai and reincarnation! If a god or something sees this, then can I pwease be reincarnated on earth as a cool dragon in the 2000's! BACK TO BY OTAKU HOLE THEN

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OwOtheEternalowo
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Actual canon Ainz? Well, no. He was a high mid teir player at BEST. His whole build was built for fun. He definitely isn't considered one of the strongest in AOG ofc, and he definitely cant conquer the world in a few days. In Overlord, we are only shown one small part of a continent, where the story takes place. There are enemies stronger than Ainz in the NW ofc but they remain to be seen as of yet.
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This chapter broke me harder than Deadpool breaks the 4th wall. This... Isnt even Ainz Ooal Gown anymore. It's the ridiculously rulebreaking Guild with overpowered and broken NPC's that dont follow Yggdrasil's own rules. You write a lot and have good writing but, yeah... I may just give up before the MC even makes it to the new world, or read it and make a drinking game out of this novel. Whole thing is a 5/10. 5 for writing, grammar, and at least including the backstory of the world of 2138. I'm not hating on you particularly, but on what you have created...
OwOtheEternalowo
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:'v dudeeee
OwOtheEternalowo
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Ah, so PA is now... yeah... Why also give him leadership? He can perfectly do that given his intelligence and his acting skills.
OwOtheEternalowo
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Oh...
OwOtheEternalowo
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;-; Now even Nazarick itself has been changed...
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So... This chapter alone was a big roller coaster of emotions... 6/10. You literally removed the level 100 limit, changed Mare to be female because the MC doesn't like being confused, changed everyone to look mature, changed Momonga's Avatar, and changed the settings of every NPC. 6 points were given for the writing and length... It's not that I hate self-inserts, OC's, or OP NPC's... But... My heart dude...
OwOtheEternalowo
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I... I cant take more of this beating! At this point... Its just not even Ainz Ooal Gown anymore... Every NPC is changed... Satoru isnt even Satoru anymore... ;-; I'll keep reading tho...
OwOtheEternalowo
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... I just wanna say, w h y? :[ If satoru's influences were still present in this guy (like how you 'prevented traitors'), WHYYYYYYYYYYY! ;-; you made Mare female, thus making a mature and female mare as well. AHHH MY BRAIN AND EYES!
OwOtheEternalowo
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Or everyone else. They aren't physically changed unless again, Satoru bought and forced data onto them.
OwOtheEternalowo
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The other pleiades have those "bodies" because they already had them, even if they are grotesques. Entoma's body is kinda made out of insects, as her mask is one as well. Unless you have the right data forced on to her like how it was done with Shalltear of course. :0
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Also forgot to add the fact that there is 0 possibility of any traitors to Nazarick. They'd rather die if they become nuisances to their creators and consider dying a traitor's death to be the worst thing thag could ever happen. They would all happily change white to black and black to white if Ainz just said the word.
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RIP to the players who were on a raid or in a Boss Fight. ;-; That must be the worst thing ever.
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