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MrHit

MrHit

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2019-01-28 Joined Global

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MrHit

MrHit

1yr
Replied to Noah_0_0
But then wouldn't the shadow be depended on the planet and its size and density? As such even if a star is large or bright it wouldn't make a difference in the appearance and size of the shadow?

Suddenly, he remembered walking behind Nephis as they crossed the bridge to the Academy. Was it his fate to always follow behind her?

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

MrHit

MrHit

1yr
Posted
(Review made at 280ish chapter so expect it to be outdated quite quickly spoiler free btw) I've caught up with the series and personally my opinions are mixed at the moment, while I loved the first volume and how the MC acted with the *Non specific plot twist*, with how the author managed to create an amazing and quite realistic world setting and again with how creatively suspense was created and dare I say.... good cliff hanger were made! But.... The second volume. For me personally its been a letdown. While the quality of writing from the author has been maintained and even improved in many aspects the MC itself has well not become an MC anymore? He's become what feels quite literal to the title of a slave. That is to say he feels to not be the focus of the story at many points. I do feel this is a personal issue though of coming in with differing expectations than what the story set out to be. As such though it may be an issue to many, to me it isn't a reason to dislike the story. With all that considered the only real issue I saw was how gruelingly slow the story became though this seems to have improved in the recent chapters. Overall rating of 3.8 Writing quality 4/5- Little to none spelling or grammatical mistakes.(Though take it with a grain of salt English is my second language) Stability of Updates 5/5- I mean I've only recently caught up as such from my perspective their as consistent as can be. Story development 2/5- Reasons mentioned above but short version, Mc doesn't feel like an MC and until recently the story was moving very slowly, Character Design 4/5- Every major character feels fleshed out and considered in the bigger picture, with a unique personality to boot. World Background 4/5- One of the best aspects of this story, the world feels real, alive and well thought with an interesting power system. Final thoughts? An amazing story that should be appreciated on this website and should not receive blind hate from individuals who may disagree with the stories more unique points.
Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

MrHit

MrHit

1yr
Replied to Venerable_Asura
except a start wouldn't cast a shadow since it illuminates in a full 360?

Suddenly, he remembered walking behind Nephis as they crossed the bridge to the Academy. Was it his fate to always follow behind her?

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

MrHit

MrHit

1yr
Replied to Mr_Dreamer
No in one of the previous chapters it was explicitly stated in the explanation of his flaw that he must answer any question truthfully otherwise he will experience increasing pains until he does.

"No."

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

MrHit

MrHit

1yr
Commented
Yellowish? So the forbidden snow that happens to taste like lemonade?

The creature had two stumpy legs, an emaciated, hunched torso and disproportionately long, multijointed hands — two of them, each ending with a set of horrifying bone claws, and another two, these ones shorter, ending with almost human-like fingers. The thing that at first glance looked like dirty snow turned out to be its fur, yellowish-grey and ragged, thick enough to stop arrows and swords.

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

MrHit

MrHit

1yr
Replied to Hvnly_EXP_Sect
Ngl this guy ain't lying, that's a short and decent enough description of 80% of the important parts of the chapter.

ch 847 Chapter 841: Meeting Again

Paragon of Sin

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

MrHit

MrHit

1yr
Commented
Hear me out author, you've told us this a goof 20 times I think i got it

Wu Yu agreed, adding: "You're likely right. But if their Earthly Saint from the Nansi Clan has an Internal World, they might keep it with them." An Internal World was a spatial dimension within an Ascended's body that could be used to contain mystic-graded materials. Without one or a specially crafted packaging carrier, it was impossible to transport them spatially. However, it was extremely difficult to cultivate, and most Earthly Saints lacked one.

Paragon of Sin

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

MrHit

MrHit

1yr
Commented
So like what happened this chapter? I read through the whole thing and it could have boiled down to 3 or 4 paragraphs of people not happy but getting the idea of whats going on.

ch 846 Chapter 840: Life & The Fiancée

Paragon of Sin

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

MrHit

MrHit

1yr
Commented
Im calling its gonna be a draw and create a massive rivalry that will continue through many volumes of this book

ch 828 Chapter 822: Stellar Nest, Scalpel Versus Hammer

Paragon of Sin

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

MrHit

MrHit

1yr
Posted
I love this story. Simple as that. But since the beginning of the 5th volume the story has been dragging on and on. It's been a good 240ish chapters since its beginning and we're at the start of volume 6 now (at least for the 'free' chapters) and I can honestly tell you about 1 major arc that lasted a good 70 chapters that I consider actually progressing the plot while keeping the story interesting. Besides that, and a few other chapters I could honestly consider 150 of these chapters filler waste that no-one will truly remember.
Paragon of Sin

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

MrHit

MrHit

1yr
Replied to Botomless_Void
iz a plot device to delay the progress of the story *cough cough*

Even Wei Wuyin, with all his resources and talents, was unable to become an Ascended being, still lingering at the Sixth Stage of the Astral Core Realm, the Gravity Emission Phase. Yet when he saw Bai Lin move her head towards Wei Wuyin to rub with a gleeful smile in her eyes, he couldn't help but find Wei Wuyin more and more fascinating. 

Paragon of Sin

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

MrHit

MrHit

1yr
Commented
Guessing he might have pierced into the timeline and accidently felt another version of himself within the timeline either in the past or future or maybe all at once

"I felt myself," Eden stated eerily, clearly shaken. 

Paragon of Sin

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

MrHit

MrHit

1yr
Replied to EXPLOOOOOOOOSION
saw that one coming the second i saw the title XD

Chapter 807: My Eyes

Paragon of Sin

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

MrHit

MrHit

1yr
Replied to Nuwang
While personally i wouldn't consider it the best its defiantly far better than whatever this is meant to be
Birth of the Demonic Sword

Birth of the Demonic Sword

Eastern · Eveofchaos

MrHit

MrHit

1yr
Commented
Waist [Hole]

Waist [NONE]

Super Necromancer System

Super Necromancer System

Fantasy · John_Doever

MrHit

MrHit

1yr
Commented
May the overlord forever guide your path.

[Necromancer of the Legion Occult, your adventure will now begin. May the ---------]

Super Necromancer System

Super Necromancer System

Fantasy · John_Doever

MrHit

MrHit

1yr
Posted
Yea I remember why i dropped this series, I read to the party where he was stuck underground i think with his 'wife' and a good 10 chapters was them 'smooching' and the author desperately trying to make the character more 'human' even though the entire development of the story was contradictory to that. Didn't make much sense, made the whole story annoying to read ect ect dropped it so there's your warning. Not sure if this issue is addressed and worked on but at the same time I don't have the patient to sit and read through all of the cringy romance.
Birth of the Demonic Sword

Birth of the Demonic Sword

Eastern · Eveofchaos

MrHit

MrHit

2yr
Commented
If any of you have read 'Paragon of Sin' then u know, but in short that novel has heavenly luck made into a nice little stat. Anyways.... HOW TF DOES THIS MAN HAVE SO MUCH

<Player Yuan has become the world's first player to have learned a Divine-rank Skill! Congratulations!>

Cultivation Online

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

MrHit

MrHit

2yr
Commented
Fuck the good sister points this one's just an angel

However, for this young man who has spent more than half of his life living in a world void of light, he was able to continue living without giving in to despair because of his caring younger sister, who supported him every day without any complaints.

Cultivation Online

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

MrHit

MrHit

2yr
Commented
Good sister points added (3)

The girl smiled, tenderly caressing his hair so it wouldn't bother him. "Brother, although I will be busy with school this week, next week for sure, I will play with you."

Cultivation Online

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

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