sassyjake1

10mth

Commented

there was one line in the original Frankenstein book that called the creature Adam the book just did not use that name again.

"It doesn't have one, it's just called Frankenstein's monster," Izuku explained.

Bnha: I Don't Run An Orphanage!

Anime & Comics · Screm_Boi

I do not know about other places but where I am from the school system is set up like a prison And when I was in school you were even assigned a number to represent you instead of your name because it was more convenient for the teachers.

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sassyjake1

1yr

Commented

it says man but later on calls him a her

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Black Swordsman in Konoha

Anime & Comics · Ah_ren

sassyjake1

1yr

Commented

the story is not bad but I do find that even though the Mc is 4 he thinks he is a adult because at 4 people do not care how attractive they are due to lack of hormones. the other thing is he seems to think that he can run off on his own and survive without the thought of how people will react to a 4 year old living by themselves or even going anywhere by themselves.

ch 0 2 Quirk Examination

MHA: Werewolf in the academy

Anime & Comics · sonicpanda1_2507

sassyjake1

1yr

Commented

if the criminal was eliminated then how would they pay for bail or any fines plus repeat offenders are a bonus because they keep coming back to pay more.

And not just in cases like that either. If the system makes it impossible for a man to be convicted, then wouldn't it be more efficient to eliminate them before they can do more damage?

Assassin Among Heroes

Anime & Comics · Darkscythe_Drake

sassyjake1

1yr

Commented

I do not get why authors almost always when they talk about earth make it like where they live is all of earth and the earth is the same everywhere. there are someplaces on earth where nevermind kicking you out of the orphanage at thirteen they will enslave you instead before you even see a orphanage.

Now, since Ash is someone from Earth, this sounds cruel to him. Especially considering the fact that he comes from the slums.

Idle Mage: Humanity's Strongest Backer

Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow

sassyjake1

1yr

Commented

what do you mean morals of earth. earth has no set morals diffrent people on earth have different morals. people need to realize that one size does not fit all and it is the same when talking about the people of earth.

However, the part of him that still had the morals of Earth had been ignoring this voice.

With My System, I Can Even Tame Gods

Fantasy · DXHaseoXD

sassyjake1

1yr

Commented

you can tell the Mc must have lived a very sheltered life

Lin Fan was confused as he said, "It's dirty money, so we shouldn't take it, right?"

With My System, I Can Even Tame Gods

Fantasy · DXHaseoXD

sassyjake1

1yr

Posted

the story not bad from what I read but there are inconsistencies in the story like how the description before you read the story says the mc is a boy making it sound like he is a little kid even though he is 15 years old in the story. the ideas for this story is good just need to be better executed and thought through more.

From The Gates Of Hell (DXD)

Anime & Comics · Crazy_Penguin

sassyjake1

1yr

Commented

this paragraph makes no sense because why would you wash off rain with more water and wouldn't drying off be a better solution.

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My Evil System

Games · MiuNovels

sassyjake1

1yr

Commented

it sound like a fake name to me

Even his name sounded manly and handsome.

My Evil System

Games · MiuNovels

sassyjake1

1yr

Commented

my advice to the author is not to do this because every book is gonna have hate no matter what you do. the best bet in my opinion is to just ignore them and write your story your way. when you respond like this you just get yourself worked up and the haters looking to find more falt with your book even more. it will even get some of your supporters riled up to protect the book

ch 21 please shut up

The Halberd of Berk

Movies · Lord_Sadness

sassyjake1

1yr

Commented

didn't he already get his coaching fee

"Alright, thanks. Deduct it from my coaching fee!"

I Have the Alchemy Emperor in My Head

Eastern · Fu Xiaochen

sassyjake1

2yr

Commented

he is being called a kid even though he is 25 years old? plus is it normal for people his age to still be looked after by their parents like they are a child. I know I have never heard of a 25 year old child that ran away from its parents on the news before.

"Hey, Kid. You're still here? Isn't it about time you head home already? Don't you know your parents are missing you dearly?" A homeless middle-aged man said.

I Am A Notorious Hidden Boss In The Alternate World

Urban · Pointbreak

sassyjake1

2yr

Commented

why does it sound like he the boss of his mother and he can order her around.

"It tasted great, please make me one every day."

Path to perfection MHA

Anime & Comics · daoistofeverything

sassyjake1

2yr

Commented

most kings and queens treated their own people as slaves not just black people and most black slaves they got were from Africans selling their own people.

Wizards are much better in that opinion as they never treat their kind like that. Black people from the Africa continent were treated much worse than how Wizards treat their House-elves. This is the cruel reality of Muggles' nature. Although Slavery has been abolished later, racism exists in the different parts of the world, even now.

The Last Slytherin

Book&Literature · Snowstar

sassyjake1

2yr

Commented

to me the main character does not fit the setting he has the personality and morals of a modern man but after living over a hundred years in a age where it is brutal and completely diffrent kind of morals he somehow acts more like a modern person.

ch 13 Chapter 19 — Mastering New Arts

TVD/TO: The Original Wolf

TV · The_Crimson_Writer

sassyjake1

2yr

Commented

th Mc is not arrogant otherwise he would have killed the person who called him a guard dog to satisfy his pride. I hate to say it but the author likes to make the Mc talk big but he does little.

But they were even more arrogant then me. So they figured that me the creator of Rune Magic didn't deserve to use it and they wanted us to give them all our notes on all the magic we've learned.