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Daoist_Paradox

Daoist_Paradox

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A very nice guy.

2019-01-30 Joined India

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LOL

This guy was famous for being a gossip boss back in the Unnamed Town. He even knew what position the mayor of the Unnamed Town liked to use.

The Mage of Eternity

The Mage of Eternity

Eastern · Calm Down

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where's the romance, marriage, and divorce part?

Hatred, hostility, indifference, neutrality, friendliness, intimacy, and friendship.

I Am Stuck In  A Beta Test For 1000 Years

I Am Stuck In A Beta Test For 1000 Years

Games · A Lu Zai

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Only an idiot would think like this. This is the whole "computers will take our jobs" thing all over again.

Ever since the founding of the D-Planet Federation in the twenty-third century, artificial intelligence had begun to spread extensively throughout the globe. Most jobs that required human labor were filled. Hence, the tasks humanity could do gradually became lesser, resulting in large amounts of idle time. On the contrary, the entertainment business became increasingly developed, and the improvement of the gaming industry, as one of the important parts of the entertainment business, naturally saw rapid progress.

I have a bunch of players on Earth

I have a bunch of players on Earth

Games · Seventh Rubik's Cube

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The core idea of the novel is very interesting. A mentally challenged prince son of a powerful Emperor has been abandoned, but has a saving grace in the form of five wives with various backgrounds and talents. It has all the things needed for a successful commercial web novel. Unfortunately, since this is a solo project, without any editors or prompt feedback, the entire story is full of deficiencies. 01. Grammer. This is the least serious deficiency of this novel, and it could've been easily solved had the author utilized any writing tool. For instance, Grammerly or even Google Docs. 02. Conflict between cheats. The MC has two cheats. He has been trained by various goddesses, and he also has a system. Introducing both of these cheats have made the whole 'cheat system' feel conflicted and confusing. Any one of them should've been enough. 03. Confusing character behavior. For me the last straw on the hat was the scene where the MC asks Riya for an instructor to teach him. This doesn't make sense since he has already been taught by the goddesses, who are at the top of the world. 04. Too much cheat. The background setting for the MC is very well-written and extremely interesting. However, after explaining the MC's background, we are introduced to how the MC dies and meets the goddesses. I feel like the goddess part was too much of a cheat... That's just too high of a setting! Also, the wives being the daughters of the goddess was just too much of a cheat. This is a kinda controversial point, since some readers might be okay with it, while others like me might feel it's too much. Despite all these faults, at its core this story is a solid one, a rough diamond. What it needs at this moment is a rewrite as well as a good editor. I'd recommend you give it a shot.
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sleep -> asleep.

Alex looked at Riya's breathtaking beauty and a sweet smell lingered in the air. He was too nervous to fall sleep

The Imbecile Lord Is Married to Five Beautiful Goddess

The Imbecile Lord Is Married to Five Beautiful Goddess

Fantasy · Mohitkumar

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Replied to AxlSLL
Finalmente alguien que puede entender cómo funcionan las cosas aquí. Muchas personas aún no saben cuán diferentes son las novelas web del formato de novela tradicional.

The first goal is to be able to imagine and finish a story that's approximately 500,000 words. Simply speaking, you have to be able to write long novels.

Book of Authors

Book of Authors

Urban · WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL

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Replied to Weed101
fire the boss and take his position.

'600 men, and 6 guns? Fucking Christ, I need to give these guys a raise; they are working way too hard!'

Tyranny of Steel

Tyranny of Steel

History · Zentmeister

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LOL

Berengar smiled, he truly had not expected this, but he liked the little girl's determination. Maybe they could get along after all. However, he was not too sure what he could have in common with a twelve-year-old girl.

Tyranny of Steel

Tyranny of Steel

History · Zentmeister

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but why send them overseas when Vhina also has one of the best universities?

Li Nianfan had always felt this way since he was in the previous realm. The only challenges those rich kids would face were their wealthy parents sending them overseas to study.

I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot

I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot

Eastern · Kinoshita Nakui

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bro what you doing in Antarctica?

Lin Mufeng laughed. "My arm was personally fixed by the expert. This is the biggest pride of my life! I've decided. From now on, my favorite body part is this arm, for sure!"

I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot

I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot

Eastern · Kinoshita Nakui

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