I'm completely new to this and have no idea what to expect. Oh well. English is not my first language. That would be French. I will go through my stories often to fix any grammatical error problems.
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This is the Story of the Attention-Seeking Wizard Orion Sturm and his journey in Afallon. The first ever school that allows any race to learn magic so as to attempt peace. Of course, not everyone completely wants peace. Orion struggles with hiding a secret as well as his desire for being in the spotlight.
The world of Gaia is filled with dangerous threats that could wipe out humanity. In order to try and 'fix' this problem humanity, enlisted the help of something they feared. Mantra is a form of energy that some people are born with. Humanity fears this power but, in order to deal with the ever-present threat of Gaia they use it anyways. The story of Chimera follows Jack or as he is also referred to by his code name The Black Wolf. The story follows Jack as he is forced to work for people who fear and despise him while he does the bidding of the Gods program working for the Chimera branch. In the story, you will learn what the mysterious energy known as Mantra is as well as secrets about Gaia. The story also follows several other characters as secrets of all of them are slowly reviled some that will change how they are viewed for better or for worse.
"Stop me if you have heard this story. Once upon a time, there existed a child who had unique abilities. They say this child could change the world. The child was a God on Earth. Able to Defy the Data of the human limits and do what he wanted. This child was the only person who could do this. So he used his powers for good. He tried and tried to save the world and eventually it worked. World peace was achieved. Wars stopped. Hunger stopped. Or at least that's how it went in the story. But, sadly real life isn't like that. In this world, everyone exists with the ability to Defy Data. It's supposed to be completely impossible to not have an ability. In this world, not everyone wants to use their power for good. In fact, it's illegal to try and be a hero. No. In the real world, the only thing that matters is power. And either you have it. Or you remain as one of the weak destined to be swallowed up by the world forever."
WateryRein: Finally caught up with the plot!
Okay. First things first. Dawson Blight. He is the best character. Has only like... Three lines but the dude is a badass. Okay I like the story. Yeah that's basically it? It is a slow burn clique anime story full of jokes, and action. It is silly and has some really great moments. So far I don't really have anything I hate about the story? Others might hate it with how the story flows, but I think it is great!Enforcers
hadleeward2005: It's a really weird but kind of cool story I guess... I like some of the characters but others are weird. But in a good way. It has some cool super powers I guess. Also some monsters. It is a bit of a slow start but I think it is starting to speed up? Maybe?Enforcers
Jackele523: It's an okay story. It starts off kind of crap but then again every webnovel I've read has started off the same way. I'll give it a 3 so far since it does seem to be sort of getting better. Right now though there are definitely better stories to read.Enforcers
RobertJohn2000: Well I finally into reading your storu finally. Sniper kept bugging me to do it saying you could use the help. And what the hell I forced you to read my stuff more times then I can count. I'm glad to see you managed to get this story going. All of us kept trying but just couldn't get it right. Oh well.
to the actual review. I like the story but then again I helped with like 10% so I am a bit bisas with my review. Sniper went full critic mode but ill be mpore gental. I do like it. The ear;y chapters are kind of bad but around the train station which is the last capter is where it gets good to me. Ken and Hero are kind of funny. I like how Hero looks. I look forward to seeing what else will happen. I hate Kitsunes chapter though. The action almost dulled me and Kitsune just seems like a typical rich boy. Feels more like a card board in the shape of a man.
That said I do enjoy reading this story and I know you can do a lot better. I look forward to seeing you improve.Enforcers
stormfalcon13: five out of five simply for having the shortest first chapter and somehow still managing to make a serious story lol.
Okay but for real. I'd actually give this like a 3 or maybe a low 4. It is a kind of funny story. It uses dark horse styles of comedy with people mostly making short quick replies so if you don't like that you probroaly wont find this story funny. As for action. it has its moments. I feel like they could be a lot better but it gets the point across. The story is kind of cool. You got monsters and superpowers. It is really slow though. I was expecting this to be like a few chapters of world building but we're still only at chapter 20 and are still be givin questions. Some stuff still hasn't been explained and others are slowly being unraveled.
The powers are kind of cool. They take normal concepts and alter them kind of. Like you got your base fire power and this mad man said screw it and turned it into a fox. I like Chinese lore and mythology.
All in all this is an okayish story. I have fun reading it but then again I've never given any rank lower than a 3 so don't trust me.Enforcers
Pieperson2001: I will be 100% honest. I didn't really like it early on. But. The more I read it the more I found myself starting to like it? The charcaters grew on me, and the story seemed to get better for me. The superpowers are basic but with a uquie spin on them, or at least what I think is a cool spin... Jackson is by far my favorite character. He is super goofy but has been shown the be really powerful. Like stupidly powerful. The only main problome I even have is Irene... The way they were handled felt weird to me but I think I got what the author is going for?
Anyways the point I am getting at is that this story is really over the top and weird. And I like that. I read so many deep and dark stories that I thought it was refreshing to have a story where they make jokes.
#Hero X Ken for life.Enforcers
RainyLiquid2020: Why am I allowed to rate my own story? Of course, I'm gonna be a biased prick and give myself all fives? Screw fair play! I'm in this for the long run! Here's a 1Enforcers
Snidog752: Its an okay story. A bit all over the place at the start and needs a lot more chapters before becoming great. The world building is kind of slow as so far it has a lot of main characters rather then just one. Right now the story is building up the main guys and building the world on the side. It has still left some questions but just enough pieces for us to figure it out on our own. Its not bad but right now this story is just a 3. Not the worst but there is probably something better out there. Who knows though. My ratings may change. This story is only 4 chapters after all.Enforcers
RainyLiquid2020: What makes it really great was that I didn't actually intend for it to come off as a jealous Ken... I just am really awful at trying to write platonic relationships... Seriously wait till Hero and Kitsune interact again. You'll think they're trying to secretly bone each other.Enforcers · C28
stormfalcon13: Ohh... Spooky ghost dream world and a bit of jealousy... Hmm... In all seriousness, I am excited to see what happens next.Enforcers · C28
WateryRein: A creepy old preist huh? Weird. Any one else see that red flag?Enforcers · C27
Pieperson2001: No! You won't get me to ship Hero with Irene. Only Ken.Enforcers · C27
stormfalcon13: A creepy priest who takes care of a town in the middle of nowhere, that is somehow growing food despite the freezing cold, and have changed their story for how things were working at least twice now, and are being attacked by monsters. Call me crazy... But I think he's the bad guy!Enforcers · C27
stormfalcon13: You know. I really don't like the name Bestia Macht. It is so weird to me.Enforcers · C25
Pieperson2001: So they are going to a villiage out in the middle of nowhere? Yeah... This mission is so going to go wrong...Enforcers · C24
stormfalcon13: I think that is the fourth time we almost found out Hero's superpower thingy.Enforcers · C24
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